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Asya SS: Our journey to love chapter eleven updated pg77 19th oct (Page 13)

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Posted: 25 May 2015 at 11:48am | IP Logged
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Posted: 25 May 2015 at 11:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anopama

Love the update
So zoya first day
Both r excited for it
Asad dressed with care after,all he will be meeting Zoya today
So it seems as if her Abu passed and humi her sis. Where is she
So asad too wants to know what happened to Zoya
Aww he has her bracelet still never return it
Oh oh Zoya the cluts fall into his arms
Aww he pushed her hair back
Haha he went into the employee elevator all staring
So she remembered him but she don't know he is the boss
Looking forward for more
thank you dear
You always do such long comments
And i love them
Thankyou so much for all love Big smile
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Originally posted by SanKsgian

interesting update
continue soon

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               Chapter Five

Flashback starts
Hostel Room

'...And her bracelet is still with me 'i finished telling my days event to ayaan my brother and best friend

'Bhaijaan i think u fell in love on the first day of your college'he said incredulously

'you know what i think??...that your ears need some medical treatment!! M telling you my first day in college and what you heared.. Idiot'i curse him

'No bhaijaan let me remind from the last half an hour am just listening about that girl..zoya. Zoya this, zoya that, she did this she did that.. Her eyes, her nose,her cheeks,her hair, her bracelet and what not!!'he said irritatingly

'what rubbish!! I did'nt do that'i said disbelieved

'Oh really Bhai.. I asked you hows your college?? you said you met zoya , i ask you hows class ?? You told me zoya's outfit.. I ask did you make friends and Guess what ladies and gentlemen the answer is still zoya!! 'he finished sarcastically

'okkay.. I agree i talk about her a little 'i replied
'a little.. Bhai u were talking about her since the time u picked up the call.. Bhai u r gone.. I just told you that you may fall in love and u did.. Woh bhi love at first sight..Woah'he cheered

'shut up as if i never talked about a girl'i huffed

'tell me when was the last time.. U talk about a girl'he challenged

'umm woh actually 'i tried to remember scratching my head

'never..bhai u never talked about Girls ..remember u thought its a waste of time 'he replied unwaveringly

'okkay fine.. I like her so what?? Can't i like a girl?? Whats wrong about that??'i said frustrated

'nothing is wrong.. Its perfect.. U know something i thought u are gay or something but you proved me wrong well done bhai!!'he said and whistled

'Ayaan'i warned

'okkay sorry.. Now do onething ask her for a date? 'he said

'date??'i ask

'yes bhai.. Coffee or anything you want, m sure she'll agree after all who can say no to a handsome hunk like my bhai!!'he suggested

'thank you ayaan but don't you think its too early?? 'i ask

'not at all just go for it'he said gleefully

'hmm lets see' i said unsured

'Bhaiii..'he yell draging the 'i'

'okkay..i'll try 'i said solemnly

'bhaijaan kuch ni hoga.. Just do it, all the best' he said

'umm thanx..okkay now m hanging up!!'i said and hung up

Hmm.. I sat on my bed pondering over my and ayann's conversations.. Can it really happen?? Is someone really can fall in love at first sight?? What rubbish it only happens in movies not in real.. I concluded and thought to have some rest after the tiring day!!

I closed my eyes to let sleep engulf me..what the hell.. What was that?? I questioned myself .. I closed my eyes to sleep but i can only see her face, her dimpled smile, her brown eyes, her beautiful face,her hair flowing like a wave ..it was so real that i can feel her...zoya i whispered sofly..my breathing was up and down.. I pour myself some water and drank it in a go and heaved a long sigh...

'may be ayaan was right.. I am falling for her.. Oh god in just one meeting how can i feel like this..may be i should ask her for coffee.. Hmm i can do that and may be it will help me in discovering my feelings ' i told myself an resolved to ask her for a date.. I dont't know what will happen but i have to do that for peace of my mind

I know sleep is far away from me so i make up my mind for a walk around the campus may be i could see her again..

Morning(no one's pov)

Teri shirt da main ta button soniye
Haaye! Teri shirt da main ta button soniye
Baalon tere main haaye clip ho gaya
Chand se bhi zyada sohna mukhda tera
Haaye! Dekhte hi dil ye slip ho gaya
( I am the button of your shirt, my beloved
O my beloved!
I am the button of your shirt, my beloved
I have become the clip of your hair
Your face is more beautiful than the moon
My heart slipped instantly when I watched it)

He is entering the college campus when he saw her looking beautiful with her friends and laughing. He looked at her from top to bottom eyeing he shirts button and then then her clip when she play with her hair. He then looked at her face comparing it to the moon and smiled when moon fail to compete with her .. He saw everyone is dancing behind him and he grinned(pls imagin any yashraj movie for effects Wink )

O Marr gaye yaar deewane
O tere lover purane
O die heart fan tere hain
Tuhi kadar na jaane

(Mad lovers died
Your old lovers
I am your die heart fan
Only you don't know my importance)

Everyone is dancing on the beat and he move along with them

Next morning

Ho.. o..
Palko mein teri mil gaya..
Jannaton ka raasta
O.. tere peeche peeche
Peeche chal pada..
Ye mera mann bawra (Bawra..) (Repeat once)
( I found the way to heaven in your eyes
It started to walk behind you my mad mind)

He again getting into the campus when suddenly she bump into him he looked at her eyes and get mesmerized...she freed herself from his hold unknown to her that her duppatta is stuck in his watch and as if in trance he started walking behind her

Tere nainon ka main liner soniye.. (Soniye..)
Haye tere nainon ka main liner soniye
Ungli ka teri haye ring ho gaya
Tune muskura ke jo dekh liya haye
Dil yeh phakeer mera king ho gaya( I am the liner of your eyes O dear - 2
I am the ring of your finger
As you have seen me with a smile
Ah, this mendicant heart of mine became a king)

She feel someone pull her and looked at him and his watch understanding the situation she tried to free him while he was busy in watching her.. First eyeing her eyes and then the ring on the finger. Finally she detach her duppatta from his watch and give him a smile and he grinned like he won KBC

O mar gaye yaar deewane
O tere lover purane
O die heart fan tere hain
Tuhi kadar na jaane (Repeat once)
(Mad lovers died
Your old lovers
I am your die hard fan
Only you don't know my importance)

Again the dancing students behind him and he dance on the beat with them and touching back of his head

Next day

He is determined today to ask her for a date he entered canteen and what what he saw swept the floor off his feet the girl who is coming in his dream continuously, whom he is starting falling for.. Is hugging someone..!!

'where were u junaid..??' she said 'i told you na cousin's wedding'junaid said sweetly 'i missed you' she said and then they hug again..he realised he was crying when a he felt wetness on his cheek ..he looked at them then rushed from there cluching his books in his hands tightly!!

Thats it for now pls forgive me for any grammatical mistake or correct me..
And guess who is junaid to zoya..??

Precap: zoya's cv

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hey so lovely update's aww asad is falling for her n love d song also continue soon n pm me Smile

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Amazing part 
Thanks for pm 
Plz pm me for next part 

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lovely update
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