Originally posted by radadolcevida
<font color="#000033" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Hello Dear</font>
<font color="#000033" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">First, it's a good idea that you finally post your story in Qubool hai forumπ</font>
<font color="#000033" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">So coming to the update, first the prologue was really intriguing and once I started reading your story, I like it very much and it was really gripping story.</font>
<font color="#000033" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">So in the past, Asad was poor and Zoya was rich but now it 's the opposite. I love how Asad still acting like a teenager in front of her and he even didn't reveal his identity to her, I must confess it was my favorite chapter till now.</font>
<font color="#000033" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Zoya from the past look more confident than now, I guess she went throught hard time and she was helpless.</font>
<font color="#000033" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Love Asad and Ayaan bond, he was funny like in the serial, a straight forwardπ, he thought that his brother was gayπ</font>
<font color="#000033" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">So , Zoya has a boyfriend and Asad was shattered to see this, well good twist even if I felt for the poor Asad, the flashback was really sadπ</font>
<font color="#000033" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Anyway, the story was moving really good and hope to read you soon</font>π
omg the longest comment so far π
Thankyou so much π
U liked it its quite an achievement becoz i love ur stories u inspired me to write seriously after reading runaway bride i want to write something too then after 2-3 days I was doing costing and this story came to my mind i don't know y and from where Quite wierd right?? π π
Edited by -simmi- - 8 years ago