Hello DearFirst, it's a good idea that you finally post your story in Qubool hai forum 😉
So coming to the update, first the prologue was really intriguing and once I started reading your story, I like it very much and it was really gripping story.
So in the past, Asad was poor and Zoya was rich but now it 's the opposite. I love how Asad still acting like a teenager in front of her and he even didn't reveal his identity to her, I must confess it was my favorite chapter till now.
Zoya from the past look more confident than now, I guess she went throught hard time and she was helpless.
Love Asad and Ayaan bond, he was funny like in the serial, a straight forward 😆, he thought that his brother was gay 😆
So , Zoya has a boyfriend and Asad was shattered to see this, well good twist even if I felt for the poor Asad, the flashback was really sad ðŸ˜
Anyway, the story was moving really good and hope to read you soon 😃
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