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SwaRon OS: Walking away (Page 2)

riachawlalko Senior Member

Joined: 23 February 2013
Posts: 227

Posted: 12 May 2015 at 9:20am | IP Logged
now i feel short of words to describe how well u have written
i think words won't be enough to appreciate it :)
this track was one of the most imp n intense tracks in swaron's journey
n the way you have portrayed their feelings,their emotions,their state of mind is commendable :)
keep writing more
n thanks fr the pm :)

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ujwalv IF-Rockerz

Joined: 03 March 2014
Posts: 6690

Posted: 12 May 2015 at 9:50am | IP Logged

Beautiful os

You nd Rhapsody u both are masters when it comes to writing emotional stories..

U have beautifully described that whole scene..very emotional n painfulCry

Missing swaron more now

nd yes happy reading swaron stories. sad or happy it doesn't matterTongue

do write moreSmile


Edited by ujwalv - 12 May 2015 at 9:50am

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--Ecstasy-- Goldie

Joined: 16 May 2014
Posts: 1035

Posted: 12 May 2015 at 10:58am | IP Logged

Sorry for keeping it reserved for so long,  I was out of town plus I had my exams too.. 

Anyways coming back to this.. 

Well do I need to tell you how amazing you write.? Naah,  I don't think so. You are one of my favorite writer here. 

This is sheer awesomeness. 

I am nostalgic right now after reading it. This was one of my favorite track. You have brought back  memories of swaron. This track was brilliantly written and executed by writers and actors of d3. I can't tell you how much I miss my swaron.  But the way you have penned it brilliant. 

Keep giving us such amazing stuffs.. 

Thanks for PM. 


Edited by Vani20 - 21 May 2015 at 3:13am
Rockingbhardwaj IF-Dazzler

Joined: 19 July 2012
Posts: 3665

Posted: 12 May 2015 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
Emotional kar diya yr.
Bitter memories.

Nice os

Thanks 4 d pm

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-.wanderlust.- Senior Member

Joined: 23 November 2012
Posts: 741

Posted: 12 May 2015 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
You & Nishi both are so Evil -__-
Reserved 'cause I have my exam in the morning & I don't wanna sulk & become all dramatically sad & emotional.

Beautifully penned. Such use of words re. SwaRon, the agony in their heart & souls.Those Swaron days were so full of intensity, misunderstandings, fights & tears.
 I absolutely loved the way you described Sharon's POV. She has always been the most complex character in D3. But you related pretty well with her.
Swayam breaking up with her and even telling her that he would move on in life with someone who is not her. :(
Gosh, you guys depict pain so well :3 And being a sadist, I love these one shots completely :')
Thankyou for bringing back memories. They are still fresh.

Keep writing.

Edited by -.wanderlust.- - 18 May 2015 at 12:44am

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prachi_vrushan IF-Rockerz

Joined: 22 March 2014
Posts: 8770

Posted: 12 May 2015 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
omg this was so emotional
again a sad os
guys wht happened these days to u all??:(
rula rahain ho:(
btw awesome os
i just hate this scene it was to heartbreaking n before this one
i still cry whenever i watched shan aka swayam
so plz kind request to all of u aur mat rulao yar ...

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ExpectoPatronus IF-Dazzler

Joined: 28 August 2012
Posts: 4105

Posted: 12 May 2015 at 2:56pm | IP Logged
superbly penned...  i ws reliving dos moments...  palki maam's swaron...  dey were loveee... 

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.nerfherder IF-Sizzlerz

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Joined: 29 August 2013
Posts: 10335

Posted: 12 May 2015 at 6:04pm | IP Logged

-Unreserved, finally-

Hullo. Blushing

My friend, my dearest friend, I can't believe you would blame me for this. Me, who did nothing but write one shots. Very well, since you did blame me, I intend to take full credit for this cringe worthy yet lovely one shot.

The break up scene was one which I watched with nearly shut eyes, coz I couldn't bear to watch all that heartbreak, all that misunderstanding. But, it was necessary, don't you think?

I would rather not say much about writing, because you along with me and a couple of other people are aware of your prowess. But I will, because it feels good to be praised. LOL Great writing, love.

I am waiting for whatever you want to throw at me, which reminds me of the dearth of your works in the recent times. Waiting for a work of yours. 


Edited by Rhapsody. - 14 June 2015 at 10:45am

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