SwaRon OS: Walking away - Page 2 | Channel V Dil Dosti Dance

--Ecstasy--

@--Ecstasy--

Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

Reserve.

-Unreserve-

Sorry for keeping it reserved for so long, I was out of town plus I had my exams too..

Anyways coming back to this..

Well do I need to tell you how amazing you write.? Naah, I don't think so. You are one of my favorite writer here.

This is sheer awesomeness.

I am nostalgic right now after reading it. This was one of my favorite track. You have brought back memories of swaron. This track was brilliantly written and executed by writers and actors of d3. I can't tell you how much I miss my swaron. But the way you have penned it brilliant.

Keep giving us such amazing stuffs..

Thanks for PM.

-Shivani

Edited by Vani20 - 8 years ago

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Emotional kar diya yr.
Bitter memories.

Nice os

Thanks 4 d pm

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Ayushi.

@-.wanderlust.-

Senior Member

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Posted: 8 years ago

You & Nishi both are so Evil -__-

Reserved 'cause I have my exam in the morning & I don't wanna sulk & become all dramatically sad & emotional.

-Edited-

Beautifully penned. Such use of words re. SwaRon, the agony in their heart & souls.Those Swaron days were so full of intensity, misunderstandings, fights & tears.

I absolutely loved the way you described Sharon's POV. She has always been the most complex character in D3. But you related pretty well with her.

Swayam breaking up with her and even telling her that he would move on in life with someone who is not her. :(

Gosh, you guys depict pain so well :3 And being a sadist, I love these one shots completely :')

Thankyou for bringing back memories. They are still fresh.

Keep writing.

-Ayushi

Edited by -.wanderlust.- - 8 years ago

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 8 years ago

omg this was so emotional
again a sad os
guys wht happened these days to u all??:(
rula rahain ho:(
btw awesome os
i just hate this scene it was to heartbreaking n before this one
i still cry whenever i watched shan aka swayam
so plz kind request to all of u aur mat rulao yar ...

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

IF-Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

superbly penned... i ws reliving dos moments... palki maam's swaron... dey were loveee...

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 8 years ago

Idiot.-_-

Reserved.

-Unreserved, finally-

Hullo. ☺️

My friend, my dearest friend, I can't believe you would blame me for this. Me, who did nothing but write one shots. Very well, since you did blame me, I intend to take full credit for this cringe worthy yet lovely one shot.

The break up scene was one which I watched with nearly shut eyes, coz I couldn't bear to watch all that heartbreak, all that misunderstanding. But, it was necessary, don't you think?

I would rather not say much about writing, because you along with me and a couple of other people are aware of your prowess. But I will, because it feels good to be praised. 😆 Great writing, love.

I am waiting for whatever you want to throw at me, which reminds me of the dearth of your works in the recent times. Waiting for a work of yours.

Cheers

Nv.

Edited by Rhapsody. - 8 years ago

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Aayushi

@A.Green

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

Nice one..

Beautiful😊

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Nishtha

@Nicky-nish

IF-Rockerz

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

Dis scene ws itself so emotional nd intense...
Nd ur os on d same bring tears in my eyes...
It ws so emotional bt beautifully written...
M bcmng ur fan now...:D
keep writng more
Thnx fr pm

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A true Shantanu lover *_*

@--Ana--

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 8 years ago

just love every single work of yours :)

your seriously the best writer I have seen on IF :)

loved this one too :)

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Gunika Mehta

@Thats.me.Guni

Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

Omg.. U wrote it so beautifully.. Evn though it ws sad bt I luvd it cz it ws exactly d Same as that scene in d epi.. Truly relived dat scene with this os.. Amazing job Done.. [Y]

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