Bharat Ka Veer Putra -Maharana Pratap


Bharat Ka Veer Putra -Maharana Pratap
Bharat Ka Veer Putra -Maharana Pratap

we will always be together part-2 a praja OS plz read updated (Page 2)

poeple1234 Senior Member

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Posted: 13 May 2015 at 4:29am | IP Logged
Hi Swara! Welcome to our familyHug. It's a great start. Please continue.

rinall Goldie

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Posted: 13 May 2015 at 5:13am | IP Logged
Welcome to the BKVPMP family, Swara !! Hug
Wonderful beginning ! Clap Please do continue with the story Smile
swara98 Goldie

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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 12:11am | IP Logged
Thanks everyone for your encouragement I'll surely continue Hug
Will update in mid afternoon
swara98 Goldie

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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 3:34am | IP Logged
Thank you everybody for your encouragement and reading my os here u go with part 2

one moment is enough to ones fate one moment can can turn life to death ajabde was lying in the same situation

everybody was tensed as even after so much trying ajabde wasn't opening her eyes suddenly ajabde started to breathe heavily her pulse rate was going down she even hiked fever being pregnant she couldn't be given much medicines

A daasi came out and announced that ajabde's situation was getting critical

Pratap was shocked to the core hearing the news he wanted to go near her and hold her hamd to give strength but couldn't helplessly he banged his hand on door

Ajabde was exhausted immensely she was finding it hard to even breathe she decided to give up but just then she heard someone's voice it was kp's voice she smiled inside learning that he had reached but he was constantly telling her something


PRATAP:wake up ajabde u can't give up like this
AJABDE:I have no strength left in me I won't be able to go through it
PRATAP : no ajabde remember you promised me that I would get both of you back remember how in these 7 months we had prepared ourselves for the baby how everyone purchased so many toys for the baby we had decided that if we get a boy we would make him fierce lion and if a girl then we would nurture with values how we thought that after 7 months we will be 3 people doing the aarti together I need u ajabde so wake up for our dreams wake up for me for our baby WAKE UP...

With each word said by pratap ajabde's strength became double grabbing strength she opened her eyes the pain shot hit her again
pratap could here her he was gladshe didn't give up
Inside the room ajabde was struggling she was tired but then remembering her promise she gave a last try and then she saw everyone smiling before she could register anything she fell unconscious again
The crying baby could be heard outside everyone let a cry of joy pratap had tears wailing his eyes
the joy became double when the vaid announced that both baby and ajabde are alright and she has given birth to baby boy

Partap was playing with his baby lying in the cradle he saw ajabde and came and sat besides her he was moving his hand over her head when came into consciousness
The first thing which she jad in her mind was the baby
AJABDE:kp where is my baby tell me where he is he is alright na tell me???
PRATAP:calm down ajabde everything is fine u and baby both are ok
Pratap points towards the cradle were the baby was lying he goes and brings the baby and gives it to ajabde
Ajabde had tears in her eyes she kisses at the forehead of her baby
AJABDE : kp see his nose is just like u
PRATAP : yeh but his eyes are like u same dark brown just one look at them can make anyone melt
AJABDE : so whats gonna be his name now don't give excuses I had seen u asking vaidji about my delivery date and also preparing a temporary kundli so that u could decide his name
PRATAP:so I m caught well his symbol of our love the love had or may have alot hurdles in life but our love has passed and will pass through all difficulties our live will be forever it would be AMAR
So our child our symbol of love would be named as AMAR AMAR PRATAP SINGH...

Ajabde smiled at him and they both looked at the sky waiting for their journey as parents to start...

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rinall Goldie

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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 4:13am | IP Logged
Awww Embarrassed Beautiful, Swara ! Clap
RoshiniluvPrAja IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 4:36am | IP Logged
Beautifu stry indeed..Swara.. really luvd it..
aayu_26 Senior Member

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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 5:46am | IP Logged
Beautifully explained the name of AMAR Smile
So hope you are enjoying the rains in pune Big smile
Very beautiful story loved it you are an awesome writer Clap
Looking forward to read more from you swara Smile Wink
moonglade IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 6:43am | IP Logged
Beautiful os swara! SmileU explained the name amar quite similar to what I was thinking for my ff.But no worries I will think of something new.Wink
Must say u are a wonderful writer.Clap

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