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Bharat Ka Veer Putra -Maharana Pratap

we will always be together part-2 a praja OS plz read updated

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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 5:11am | IP Logged
HEY guys how are u my name is SWARA and i m new here like all of u i m also a great fan of praja i love to write stories and inspiring from garima i m writing this os it has no relation to history and im writing for the first time so juta chappal mat marna enough of my intro here u go with the os
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Pratap was racing his horse against the time he had to reach chittor as fast as possible he had to keep the promise he had given to his life his wife ajabde as thought of ajabde came in his mind he remembered the day which had snatched the earth below his feets


FLASHBACK...

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Everyone in mewad were extremely happy as not only ajabde was going to give birth to the next heir of mewar but also hereing the news their maharani had returned so a function was organized for the people and the royal family to rejoice the moment

the jashn was going on with people dancing and all the elders blessing him and ajabde with a healthy child whe suddenly ajabde had a pang of pain in her belly and she fell unconcious partap carried her to the room and vaidji was called upon to check her up but what vaidji said had made him go numb


PRATAP:vaidji is ajabde okay what happened to her?is she fine now?

VAIDJI:KP their is a bad news

JB:is everything fine what happened and what do you mean by bad news?

VAIDJI;maharanisa ajabde baisa has complications with her pregnency if she carries the baby further then it could create problems which could lead to demise of either one of them


On hearing the news pratap went numb and came back to the world when jb shook him assoon as he got his senses back he just rushed tothe room with tears wailing his eyes he entered the room and saw ajabde standing near the window he hugged her from back


PRATAP:ajabde

AJABDE:i want to keep the babykp

PRATAP:ajabde do u know what are u saying

AJABDE:YESi know but i cant let our child go away for sake of my life and besides vaidji says if good care is taken it may reduce complications

pratap knew that there was no way he could argue with her so he agreed but undercondition


PRATAP:OKAY but i want u and our child both to be alive

AJABDE:iwill try and u promise me that u would be there when i give birth to him

PRATAP;i promise


Months passed by all had taken good care of ajabde but suddenly he had to go kumbhalgarhand the day itself ajabde started to have her labour pain


FLASHBACK OVER...

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Remembering the days he reached chittor he rushed to the room in which ajabde was he could here her screams but couldnt go inside

It had been naerly 10 hrs ajabde was in labour she wasnt able to bear the pain


VAIDJI:maharanisa ajabde baisa is tired is wont be able to do it

JB:no she has to do it ajabde keep pushing u will be able to do it

AJABDE:ranima i cant bear the pain anymore i...


as she was saying she started to loose consiousness her vision getting blur and the last she saw was jb telling her to wake before everything went dark


to be continued...


Guys i know its pretty long and boring but what to do it was in my mind since a long time so decided to pen it down


do tell me how it is and do want me to continue it with part-2 or not critisism is welcomedSmile



Edited by swara98 - 14 May 2015 at 3:35am

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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 5:27am | IP Logged
Wowww nice update. Continue it soon
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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 8:04am | IP Logged
Swara my lovely welcome to the writers familyHugHugHug
Amazing start and your words make me go all EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Please do continue and soon- am dying to know the next part...
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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 8:34am | IP Logged
Hey Swara... welcome to our gang.. LOL(we r like a gang u know..)

loved the part.. ab plz tum isse sad ending mat banana..waise bhi show mein toh praja scenes jaise gayab hi hogaye hai.. toh u writers r the only sahara for us.. Tongue
Do continue soon..

PS - waise dida se tumhe prerana mili.. that's a gud thing.. she is very sweet u know.. Approve Hug

Edited by ApekshaM - 12 May 2015 at 9:14am
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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 8:36am | IP Logged
Hi  SwaraBig smile
Welcome to the maharana pratap familyHug
Amazing updateThumbs Up
PM me whenever you update the next partLOL
Accept my friend request alsoSmile
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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 9:08am | IP Logged
Hey swara welcome to the world of writings Smile
Have a gala time here Big smile
Coming to the story very interesting start looking forward to your story update soon Smile
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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 9:38am | IP Logged
Hi swara! welcome to the forum.Hug
My name is ramya and i'm also a writer like u and I just finished a month on the forum today.Smile
The first part is amazing and I really want to continue.Big smile


Edited by crazy-for-praja - 12 May 2015 at 9:39am
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Nice start. I hope both Ajabde and Amar make it OK.

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