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Posted: 28 May 2015 at 4:16am | IP Logged
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Yup 
I am proud of you lucky 
Continue 


continue bolke pachtana mat LOL


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so due to all the stress because of the missed calls and shadows and noises, Bhawnaji and Jason return to India, cutting short their holiday... they start living in Bhawna (and what was Ganpat's) house.

Every morning when they woke up, they used to see a breakfast tray, with Aloo parathas, 2 cups of tea, and a red rose... On the first morning back, Bhawnaji thinks Jason did this. and Jason thinks Bhawna ji did this. they both think "I am so lucky to have found such a romantic partner)... after a few days, however, Jason casually mentions that he doesnt want to have aloo parathas every day for breakfast and maybe next day she should make idli or upma... and then Bhawna ji's reaction is Shocked

"what do you mean?" she asked, " I thought YOU were making the breakfast"

They are both shocked... and then suddenly Bhawnaji remembers her honeymoon with Ganpat, and how he used to say... "I am so lucky to have found you... I will serve you breakfast in bed everyday for the rest of my life, along with a red rose"... when he lived he never did it, but it looked like Ganpat's ghost was more romantic

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This part was a bit emotional... next part will be thrilling finish... u want part 3 ?LOL


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Posted: 28 May 2015 at 4:43am | IP Logged
As long as it's not gyaan baatoing session I m in 
Yup continue 

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Posted: 28 May 2015 at 4:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...EhSaas...

As long as it's not gyaan baatoing session I m in 
Yup continue 
LOL is story mein kya gyaan baantna, and main tumko kya gyaan baantoongi Tongue

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more and more such things happen... almost every moment they spend together, Bhawna ji is reminded of Ganpat... the signs are all there. some times, in Jason's wardrobe, Ganpat's old suits appear. When Bhawnaji switches her phone on, she sees Ganpat's photo as wallpaper...

they both go to a couple's counsellor, who tells them that maybe there is something in their past that was unresolved... but obviously the counsellor doesnt know they killed Ganpat...

after about 3-4 months... both start going mad... no amount of medicines, meditation, trips to temple and church help them... no one is able to tell them what is going wrong... even their servants start doubting their mental condition... they are both finally admitted to mental hospital...

once Bhawnaji and Jason are in hospital, their house is locked... the lawyers are all struggling to think who the property should go to now...then 2 men enter the lawyers office in style... and say "the property is ours"

The 2 men are Ganpat himself + Mr Rakesh Gupta...

story shown in Flashback now...
Ganpat was bored of Bhawnaji, but he didn't want to divorce her since he would have to split his money... so he and Rakesh come up with some plan, but before they could do anything, Bhawna and Jason kill Ganpat... Ganpat really isn't dead, Rakesh saves him, and then they start torturing Bhawna and Jason in their own home, and on holiday too Cool

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utni thrilling end nahin, jitna maine socha tha... but kaam chalaa lo

kal Mayu aayegi to pakka paagal ho jaayegi ROFL

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Posted: 28 May 2015 at 4:58am | IP Logged
U mean rakesh and ganpat ke beech kuch chalu tha?  

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Posted: 28 May 2015 at 5:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...EhSaas...

U mean rakesh and ganpat ke beech kuch chalu tha?  


LOL main toh yeh bol rahi thi, ki dost the dono, and they worked together to get rid of Bhawna eventually

but jo tumne matlab nikaala woh bhi acchha hai... Nayi soch Cool

as a writer I feel so happy that a reader has analysed and found hidden symbolic meaning in my story and interpreted the relationships in such a different way Clap

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Posted: 28 May 2015 at 5:10am | IP Logged
Good evening

It is hot here in Mumbai

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Posted: 28 May 2015 at 5:12am | IP Logged
Yup as a i reader feel depth in ramesh and ganpat relationship 
Whatever name it is but it has depth which was not there between ganpat bhawna and Jason bhawna 

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Namskar Vyas ji 

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