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One Shot: Ajeeb Dastan Hai Yeh!

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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 4:01am | IP Logged

One Shot: Ajeeb Dastan Hai Yeh - Manish Shetty

Hello everyone! Aaj mai socha ki mere Short stories se kuch hatke post karon yaha forum pe. Tho mai topic ke bare mai soch hi raha tha, aur fir socha ki kyun na Pyaar ke bare mai post kiya jaaye? Tho Pyaar, love, ishq yeh sab tho bahuth hi common ho chukka hai, all thanks to Indian Television and Bollywood. Fir why did I even choose such a topic to post? Kyunki pyaar har jagah hai, har ekh cheez mai pyaar chupa hai, and Indian Television ke forum pe pyaar ke siwa aur kya behthreen topic ho sakthi hai?

Waise tho usually pyaar ko sirf ekh hi nazron mai dekha jatha hai, Love between a girl and a boy... Lekin mera manana hai ki pyaar har ekh rishthe mai chupa hota hai, fir chahiye wo do doston ke beech ho, ya fir maa-bete ka pyaar, miya biwi ka pyaar, aur sabse hatke jo iss forum mai diktha hai, actors aur unke followers ka pyaar. Jab maine yeh forum ki journey shuru kiya tho, it is was a love something like that, which forced me to sign up here! Lekin yaha aane ke baadh, love showed me its different forms.

Yah ape mujhe kuch logon ne kaha hai ki I am like the KJo of this forum and this might be because I write too much of family drama and stuff. Be it Lights, Camera, Action or be it You are My destiny... I like exploring characters based on their family love stories, more than anything. Like even in the recent Short Story, My Friend's Fiance, I am trying to explore around the love between a step mother and son. Mera funda tho simple hai, ki pyaar har kisike beech mai ho saktha hai.

Waise kabhi kabar, yahi pyaar karan hota hai nafrath ke liye... Yahi karan hota hai dard ke liye...and most darkest side of love..sometimes Love failures result in the barbaric reason for suicides... Pyaar umeed tho paida karthi, lekin kabhi kabaar pyaar hi paida karta hai jealousy, hatred and what not... waise iss post ko likhne ka maksath sirf aap logon ko pyaar ke bare mai philosophy dene ka nahi hai...yaha pe aap sab ko ekh kahani batana cahtha hoon... ekh pyaar ki kahani, lekin ekh dard naak kahani, ekh kahani jo pyaar karne walo se juda hai...

Hum journalist logon ko har roz hi kahi kism ke logon se milna padtha hai. Humara kaam hi kuch aisa hai ki, hum isse avoid hi nahi kar sakthe...kabhi bade bade insutrialists se, kabhi kabar mere aur aapke jaise aam admi se...aur yaha tak ki kabhi tho aise bhi mulakath karni padthi hai, jisse sunkar bhi man me dar sa baith jata hai..jaise ki gangsters ki interviews aur haan kabhi kabaar tho safedh kapde pehn ke, lal bathiyon wali gadiyon mai ghumne wale, humare aankhon ke saamne nazar aane wale dakoon ke... yeh sab tho mere liye jaise har roz ki bath hai... aur innhi mulakathon ke duraan, mujhe zindagi ke kahi aise nagme mil jathi hai, jo mujhe meri zindagi jeene mai ekh nayi umeed paida karthi hai, aur mujhe apne aap se parichay karane ke sath sath, mujhe kudh se pyaar karna sikathi hai...

Abhi recently meri mulakath ekh aise hi, bahuth hi ajeeb kism ke shaks ke sath hua. Wo koi lal bathi mai ghumne wala bandha nahi hai aur na hi wo koi breaking news dena wala, ya fir meri newspaper ki readership badane walon mai se koi hai... Nahi wo koi celebrity bhi nahi tha, aur na wo koi aam' admi jisne koi miracle dekho wo... wo ekh seedha sadha sa ladka tha jo Bengaluru ki sabse mashur attractions, Lalbhagh (prominent garden) mai aake har roz hi ekh particular pedh ke neeche baitha karta aur, pata nahi ekh purani paper, jo koi letter ke jaisa lagtha tha, usse padtha... wo sir ekh hi page ka tha, lekin wo usse ekh pure gante takh padtha hi rehtha tha...

Mai actually waha pe ekh event cover karne ke liye gaya tha, jo theen din ka event tha... Pehla din tho ho hi raha tha ki tabi meri nazar iss insaan par padha.. pehle tho laga ki hoga koi college ka ladka jo apni girlfriend ki wait kar raha hai, aur shayaad time pass ke liye uske likhe hue love letter ko padh raha hai...ya fir yeh bhi ho saktha hai ki wo koi proposal speech ko ratta maar raha ho... fir kuch adha ganta beeth gaya, aur ladka ab bhi wahi pe tha.. mujhe kuch alag laga.. tho socha kyun na toda nasdeekh jaake dekhoon.. tho pata chala ki wo ro raha tha.. uss letter ko padthe hi... Fir socha..bechara depression se guzar raha hai... Mai apne hi coverage karne mai busy ho gaya... aakir state ke Cheif Minister ka speech chaloon ho gaya tha, aur agar maine yeh miss kar diya tho fir thos meri khair nahi.

Jaise hi event katam hui uss din ke liye, tho na jaane kyun mai pack karne ke badh peeche mudhke uss pedh ki aur dekha, jahan pe wo ladka baitha tha, lekin waha pe ab koi bhi nahi tha... Agle din fir se mai wahi pe event cover karne aaya tho meri nazar fir se uss ladke par padi, jo aaj bhi wahi uss pedh ke neeche baith ke wahi letter pad raha tha... aur aaj bhi aason baha raha tha... "Pagal dil rubha" mai apne man mi socha aur, fir se event coverage mai busy hua.. theesre din jab yahi hua..tho meri curiosity rukh nahi payi... maine uss shaam ko uss ladke ko follow kiya... aur dekha ki wo lalbhagh ke paas hi kisi ghar mai rehtha tha...

Yeh silsila kuch ekh hafthe tak jhaari raha.. aur fir ekh din mai pakdha gaya.. usse follow karte hue... "Mere bare mai jhanana chathe ho? Janana chathe ho ki mai kyun har roz hi uss ekh pedh ke neeche jaake baitha hoon? Tho chalo, bathatha hoon mai meri kahani..." yeh kehke wo ladka mujhe uske ghar leke gaya... Andhar jaate hi pata laga ki, wo ghar.., ekh typical bachelor ki ghar ke jaisa hi tha... sare taraf cheezein bikhri hui... har taraf dhul se lipta hua... ekh chota se TV ka dabha, ekh khone mai ke bistar zameen pe pada hua... yaha waha kithabein bhi padi hui... lekin ajeeb tha ke bade se frame kiya hua ekh ladki ka Pciture.. jo actually bole tho teekh se click bhi nahi hui thi... jaise ki kissi phone ke camera se click kiya hua ho? Aur wo photo tho ekh dum saaf sutra tha.. bilkul chamak raha tha... "Aap yahi rukho, mai aapke liye paani leke atha hoon," usne kaha. Actually mere liye yeh koi nahi bath nahi thi, aise anjaan logon ke ghar jaana...aakir journalist hoon bhai...yeh sab dusro ke zindagi mai dhakal andhaasi karna...unke personal life mai jhaank ke dekhna aur yaha thak ki unke dard ko apna samajkar likhna tho meri rozi roti thi... Meri dhyaan tho uss photo pe tangi hus uss ladki pe hi ataki padi thi... arey yaar bahuth hi hot bandhi thi yaar... uss teekh se click nahi hue wale picture mai hi ithni hot lag rahi thi, tho asal mai kaisi hogi.. Kya? Aisa kya dekh rahe ho, jaise maine koi crime kar di.. hum journalist log bhi aakir insaan hi hote hai.. haan wo alag bath hai ki sab humai unromantic fool samjathe hai... lekin asal zindagi mai hum logon ke bhi crushes ho sakthi hai.. haan...

"Suvreen... Suvreen Guggal," uska naam hai... Mai hil sa gaya achanak uss ladke ki awaz sunke.. uske hatho se paani ka glass liya aur dheere dheere peene laga... "Tho yeh hai wo ladki jiske yadon mai tum dhubhe hue rahthe ho? Arey yaar.. isne mana kiya tho kya hua? Tum dikhne mai bura tho nahi ho...yeh nahi tho koi aur mil jaayegi"

Pehle baar us ladke ke chehre mai ekh chota sa smile aaya..lekin uss smile mai bhi ithni dard chupa tha..."Sachi? Thanks" usne kaha aur wahi pe neeche bean bag mai baith gaya... Mai bhi wahi ekh chote se chair pe baith gaya... "Suvreen ne bhi yahi kaha tha, jab last time hum mile the... Lekin wo yeh kehna bhul gayi ki, uske jaisa mujhe koi milega hi nahi... Bekar ka umeed karke baitha hoon... (with a bit of smile.. which he is trying to find) lekin koi nahi.. wo kehthe hai na Umeed pe hi duniya kaayam hoti hai... shayad ekh din mil jayegi mujhe bhi...meri Suvreen."

Unh batho mai ithna gehra dard chupa tha, ki na jaane kyun mere aankhon mai bhi pani barne laga. Yeh har roz nahi hota ki humain, youngster log aise philosophical bathein karne ko milte hai... bahuth kam hote hai aise log. "Waise mera naam, Yuvraj hai... aap mujhe Yuvi bhula sakthe hai.." usne kaha aur handshake ke liye hath aage badhaya... "Mai Manish.. Journalist hoon... tho isiliye logon ki zindagi samjane mai ekh alag hi dilchaspi raktha hoon." Maine kaha.

"Aur yahi dilchaspi tho jaake TRP ban jata hai..." Yuvraj ne kaha hasthe hue... Sahi hi tho tha, aakir hum media walon ka kaamkahi aaj sirf TRP badana hi tho reh gaya hai... May be we dont see it that way..lekin the society sure does see it that way...

"tho kya kahani hai, tumari aur Suvreen ka? I mean kuch tho hoga iss ladki mai, ki tum ekh hafthe se uske yadon mai koye hue ho?" maine pucha... "Ekh hafthe se nahi.. theen salon se." Usne kaha.. Mai tho chownk hi gaya.. ki kaise koi theen salon tak, ekh hi ladki ke liye ithna pagal ho saktha hai... kya aisa sacha pyaar bhi aaj ke iss One Night Stand wale zamane mai possible hai? Ekh taraf tho log sirf do ya theen mahine ki pyaar bhi bahuth hi mushkil se nibhate hai, aur ussi age ekh Youngster aaj mere samne baitha tha, jo ekh ladki ke uss se dur jaane ke bawajoodh, theen salo takh, usse se fir milne ki umeedh mai baitha hai... Pyaar pagal hota hai, suna tha...lekin aaj shayadh pehli baar mere ankhon ke samne dekh raha tha...

"College ka pehla din tha, jab mai usse mila... Ekh number ki jhalli thi Suvreen... Wo Kattgodham jaise choti se shehar se aayi thi, aur mai Gurgaon se. Kam se kam mai tho toda nervous tha, lekin Suvreen... Survreen ke dictionary mai koi nervousness, jaisa word hi nahi tha... Hum dono poles apart the ekh dusre se... wo thi apni shehar ki topper aur mai tehra jisse aise waise karke sports quota mai admission mila tha Modern University mai, jo India ke top universities mai ekh tha... Haan..pehli baar maine usko college ke gate mai dekha tha, jahan wo ekh auto rikshaw wale ke sath bargain kar rahi thi...usse dekh ke tho koi keh nahi saktha tha ki uska Bengaluru mai first day tha... Aur ekh taraf mai tha, jiski ragging ke bare mai soch soch ke patti padi thi...

Wo uss din uss blue kurta aur leggings mai tho bilkul mast dikh rahi thi... mujhe usse ghurte hue dekh ke, mera paas aake boli, "Oiiyyee.. ghur kya raha hai? Kabhi kissi ladki ko dekha nahi hai kya zindagi mai? Vella kahi ka..." "dekha hai..lekin ithni hot ladki nahi..." mai keh baitha bin kuch soche samaje...aur fir kuch der baar apni words realize kiya...  aur suddenly badal diya, "Nahi mera mathlab hai ki.. Bangalore kithna hot hai na? Chalo cafeteria mai kuch tanda peethe hai?"

Mujhe wo ghur ke boli, "Mujhe koi tanda wanda nahi peena.. tumhe peena hai tho kuch jaake piyo.. aur haan yeh tumari flirt karne wali tricks kisse aur pe try karna..mujh pe nahi.." yeh kehthe hi..wo girls hostel ki aur chali gayi..aur mai kudh ko kostha raha ithne bade bad impression ke liye.. aur kudh bhi apne hostel ki taraf chala gaya...

Uss din tak tho mai destiny pe wishwaas rekhne walon mai se nahi tha.. lekin uss waqt mai shayad believe karne lag gaya... kya karta sab kuch destiny jaise hi hota raha... Pehle tho mai jab uss rath ko apne kamare ki balcony mai basketball ko bounce kar raha tha, tab meri nazar mere samne wale balcony mai padi...jahan pe ekh sundar si ladki apne aankhe bandh karke, hath jode hue.. kudh se kuch bathein kar rahi thi.. wo koi aur nahi..balki wahi Suvreen Guggal thi... jo subah tho koi macho ladki dikh rahi thi, aur ab shaam ko ekh cute si bachi ki tarah..kudh se bathein kar rahi thi.. mai usko ghurtha raha... aur bas koshish karta raha usse sun ne ke liye.. pata nahi iss ladki mai aisa tha kya, jo mai usse bhula hi nahi paa raha tha.. aur har baar isse dekhtha tho mujhe usse aur ekh baar fir milne ki aass bani rehthi.. Shayad ise hi pehla pyaar kehthe hai? Har roz mai fir apne balcony mai aatho aur Suvreen ko dektha..aur ab usse bhi yeh pata chal gaya tha...lekin wo bhaav dene se rahi... Fir second destiny wali baath yeh hui..ki hum dono ekh hi section mai the... aur yaha tak ki class ki pehla din.. hum dono late pahunche aur hum dono ke paas, ekh dusre ke sath ekh hi bench mai baithne ke alawa koi chara hi nahi raha tha...

Aur iss baar mujhe Suvreen ka ekh naya hi rukh dekhne ko mila... wo ekh pura ghanta ithna bathein karti rahi.. ki full stop tho jaise uske vocabalory mai hai hi nahi... aur mai tho sirf uske chehre ko taartha reh gaya tha pura ekh ghanta... Fir kya tha har roz hi mai usse har jagah follow karne laga... infact hum ache dost bhi ban gaye the... pure college mai log humari bare mai kahaniyan bhi banana lage.. andhar hi andhar mujhe acha bhi lagtha yeh sab rumours sunke.. ekh pura saal maine aise hi gawaya... Hum the tho pyaar mai, lekin na usne mujhe kabhi bataya...aur na maine kabhi usse... meri tho himath hi nahi banthi.. kyun ki mujhe dar lagtha tha ki kahi.. mai humare beech ki dosti ko thod na doon... Hum dono ekh dusre kabhi door nahi jaane dete... ekh dusre se bahuth alag hoke bhi hum ekh dusre ke nasdeekh jathe rahe... Pyaar mai hote hue bhi.. hum apne aap ko bas dost manthe the...

Course ka dusra saal shuru hua, aura b mujhe bhi lagne laga ki, agar ab main uss se apni dil ki bath nahi kahunga tho shayad, kabhi bhi na keh paon... Fir kya tha.. kahi baar koshish karta raha... kahi romantic se plan bhi banaye maine... lekin sab ke sab bas fail hoti gayi...kyunki ab himath tho ho nahi rahi thi... Fir kabhi kabhi sochtha bhi tha, ki kya usko mera pyaar diktha nahi? Agar usse main pasand nahi tho mujhse dur bhi tho jaa sakthi thi? Aur agar usse main pasand ho hi, tho wo kudh bhi tho propose kar sakthi thi? Kyun ki jahan tak main Suvreen ko samja tha, wo un ladkiyon mai se nahi thi, jo sirf ladkon par hi propose karne ka bhoj daal de... Yaha takh ki usi ne infact apne bestie Annie ko force kiya tha apne pyaar ke ishaar karne ko, apne boy friend ke liye.. fir ab aisa kya ho gaya tha ki wo kudh apni dil ki bath chupati rahi? Yeh sab sochthe hi mujhe aur bhi dar lagne laga...

April 24th ka din tha, Uska birthday... mai uska wait karta raha...lekin na jaane kyun, wo mujhe avoid karthi rahi pura din.. Yaha takh mujhe yeh bhi lagne laga ki, kuch dino se aisa ho raha tha..lekin aaj ke din aisa avoid karna.. mujhe acha nahi laga tha... Shaam ko main basketball court mai sochtha raha ki aakir Suvreen thi kaha pura din, tho achanak se mujhe wo dur se dikhi, Rathie ke sath... Has rahi thi jaise ki koi problem yeh hi nahi... Yeh dekhthe hi merit ho khoon kual utta... Yah ape mai uska pura din se ekh baar dekhne ke liye taras raha tha, aur wow aha Rathie ke sath ghum rahi thi? Mujhe bahuth gussa aya tha uss din.. tho mai gaya unke paas aur..fir gusse mai aakar Rathie ko ekh jhoor se mukka mara... Aur fir kya... mai bas usko marta hi gaya.. pata nahi mai ekh janwar jaisa ho gaya tha... Nonstop marta hi raha... aur Suvreen chilathi rahi.. "Nahi Yuvraj.. Math Maro use" lekin mai kisika nahi suna... aur wo har baar Rathie ko bachane ki koshish karti main aur zor se Martha... fir kuch do teen ladke aake mujhe rathie se alag kiye... Suvreen bas ro rahi.. thi aur uske ankhon mai maine pehli baar mere liye nafrath dekha... Wo waha se rothe hue apne hostel ki aur bhaag gayi...

Mujhe apni galthi ka ehsas hone laga... yeh kya kiya maine? Suvreen ko ithna dukh pahunchaya maine? Mai kudh se nazarein nahi mila pa raha tha, tho fir Suvreen se kaise miltha.. aur Suvreen bhi mujhse milne nahi aayi... Aise hi do-teen hue.. aur main Suvreen se mile bina.. pagal jaisa ho gaya tha... fir maine decide kar hi liya ki mai Suvreen ko apni dil ki bath sab bhol dunga.. fir agar wo dosti todna  chahe... tho todh de... Maine yeh kath likhi.. (Showing the letter he always read).. mera proposal speech.. Fir maine Rathie ko mana liya ki wo kaise bhi karke usse Lalbhagh mai le aane ko mana le... aura a gayi... Mai waha pe apne pyaar ka eshaar karne hi wala tha hi...achanak se wo behosh ho gayi... merit ho jaan hi nikal gayi thi... Haan Suvreen neche gir gayi.. usko hospital mai rush kiya... tho tab pata chala ki usko brain tumour tha.. aur last stage mai thi.. usne yeh bath hum sab se chupaya tha... aur uske birthday wala din bhi wo hospital hi gayi thi... rathie ko tho wo raste mai mili thi... Mera tho pura duniya ulat pulat ho gaya... hum aise premi the jo ekh dusre se pyaar kerte hue bhi ekh dusre ko bayan nahi kar paaye... wahi teen din ke baadh Suvreen humesha humesha ke liye mujhe akela chod gayi... aur kaha ki mujhe tho koi bhi ladki mil jayegi... lekin aaj tak.. mujhe Suvreen nahi mili.. aur shayad kabhi bhi nahi milegi..."

Yeh kethe hue.. pata nahi wo rone laga tha...aur ab Suvreen ke photo ke samne kadha tha... uski yadon mai... apne hatho mai wo letter pakade... aur padthe gaya, "Suvreen Guggal, ever since I have met you... Ever since I have known you... Ever since I have probably understood what it means to love... you are the only one who I have thought off.. You are the only one I have been for... You are both the sunset and sunrise in my life.. you are both the ocean and the land in my life... you are both my smile and pain... you are the world to me Suvreen.. so today I Yuvraj Singh ask you, will you be my girlfriend Suvreen Guggal?" aur aisa lag raha tha jaise achanak se uss picture mai kadhi hui Suvreen has has ke haan bhol rahi ho... aisa laga jaise tab uss kamre mai mere aur Yuvraj ke alawa wo bhi thi...yahi kahi kone mai baithke humari bathei sun rahi thi... aur tabi nukkad ke Paan wale bhaiyya ka radio chala..aur Ghana bajne laga...

"Ajeeb dastan hai yeh... kaha shuru..kaha katam.. yeh manzile hai kaun si.. na wo samj sake na hum..."

Pyaar hota hai doston... pyaar labzon mai bayya nahi hoti.. pyaar dil se dil ke bathon mai bayya hoti hai... Pyaar har jagah hoti hai.. fir chahe ho sirf ekh saal hi rahe.. lekin unki aathma hamesha and forever ke liye rehthi hai... 



Edited by Manish_Shetty - 12 May 2015 at 4:02am

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This was one of the best ever yuvreen story i have read in last three years. The title itself was enough to make me fall for this story. The song Ajeeb Daastaien is very very close to my heart and now whenever i ll listen to the song i fall for this story n yuvreen again n again.
Yes agree pyaar hota hai har jagah and pyaar kisi kahani se bhi ho sakta hai jaise is kahani ne mere dil ko chuha and muje isse pyaar ho gaya.
Thank u for giving this wonderful story 

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Originally posted by krupaa

This was one of the best ever yuvreen story i have read in last three years. The title itself was enough to make me fall for this story. The song Ajeeb Daastaien is very very close to my heart and now whenever i ll listen to the song i fall for this story n yuvreen again n again.
Yes agree pyaar hota hai har jagah and pyaar kisi kahani se bhi ho sakta hai jaise is kahani ne mere dil ko chuha and muje isse pyaar ho gaya.
Thank u for giving this wonderful story 

Hey Krupaa!! Thank you so much.. and for me this is the best story I have ever written.. like in every sense.. I also dont know why I wrote it...but then yeah I am truly in love with this.. I think this forum has managed to give me yet another proud moment...like all other moments.. By far my best story..!! Thank you so so much Krupaa.. you dont know how much your comment means to me..being the first feedback I have got on this particular story...!! I swear I just love this comment... if you dont mind...pls share it with all your friends. pls.. for some reason I just want more and more people to read this story more than anything... please...!! and give me their honest feedback... i really need it.. 


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Originally posted by Manish_Shetty

Originally posted by krupaa

This was one of the best ever yuvreen story i have read in last three years. The title itself was enough to make me fall for this story. The song Ajeeb Daastaien is very very close to my heart and now whenever i ll listen to the song i fall for this story n yuvreen again n again.
Yes agree pyaar hota hai har jagah and pyaar kisi kahani se bhi ho sakta hai jaise is kahani ne mere dil ko chuha and muje isse pyaar ho gaya.
Thank u for giving this wonderful story 

Hey Krupaa!! Thank you so much.. and for me this is the best story I have ever written.. like in every sense.. I also dont know why I wrote it...but then yeah I am truly in love with this.. I think this forum has managed to give me yet another proud moment...like all other moments.. By far my best story..!! Thank you so so much Krupaa.. you dont know how much your comment means to me..being the first feedback I have got on this particular story...!! I swear I just love this comment... if you dont mind...pls share it with all your friends. pls.. for some reason I just want more and more people to read this story more than anything... please...!! and give me their honest feedback... i really need it.. 

I have promoted this OS on shivin sena its a closed grp on FB for yuvreen lovers.
Hope fully this will help to increase the readers for this shot.
And since i helped you even you have to do one favor Wink plz plz plz do continue ur FF Light Camera Action. I have read it and i just loved that. I guess even ur second FF Destiny  has been incomplete so plz do continue them if u have time.

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beautifully described. i have no words to say manish. a very different story and beautifully written. it is indeed one of the best stories on YuvReen. and manish writers like u are needed in the showbiz world. superb Big smile
write more n more. i am your loyal reader now.

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Amazing os
Loved the story very nicely written 
Do write more 

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Originally posted by krupaa

Originally posted by Manish_Shetty

Originally posted by krupaa

This was one of the best ever yuvreen story i have read in last three years. The title itself was enough to make me fall for this story. The song Ajeeb Daastaien is very very close to my heart and now whenever i ll listen to the song i fall for this story n yuvreen again n again.
Yes agree pyaar hota hai har jagah and pyaar kisi kahani se bhi ho sakta hai jaise is kahani ne mere dil ko chuha and muje isse pyaar ho gaya.
Thank u for giving this wonderful story 

Hey Krupaa!! Thank you so much.. and for me this is the best story I have ever written.. like in every sense.. I also dont know why I wrote it...but then yeah I am truly in love with this.. I think this forum has managed to give me yet another proud moment...like all other moments.. By far my best story..!! Thank you so so much Krupaa.. you dont know how much your comment means to me..being the first feedback I have got on this particular story...!! I swear I just love this comment... if you dont mind...pls share it with all your friends. pls.. for some reason I just want more and more people to read this story more than anything... please...!! and give me their honest feedback... i really need it.. 

I have promoted this OS on shivin sena its a closed grp on FB for yuvreen lovers.
Hope fully this will help to increase the readers for this shot.
And since i helped you even you have to do one favor Wink plz plz plz do continue ur FF Light Camera Action. I have read it and i just loved that. I guess even ur second FF Destiny  has been incomplete so plz do continue them if u have time.
Hey Krupaa..!! I have no words on how i could ever thank you for all the support.. and LCA and YAMD are my favourites too..and I will try updating the both of them.. I swear..!! 

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Originally posted by yuvreenani

beautifully described. i have no words to say manish. a very different story and beautifully written. it is indeed one of the best stories on YuvReen. and manish writers like u are needed in the showbiz world. superb Big smile
write more n more. i am your loyal reader now.

thanks a ton!! You have no idea how much your comments mean to me...and I am really lucky to have people like you read my works.. means a ton to me..!! Big smileBig smile

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