Bharat Ka Veer Putra -Maharana Pratap


Bharat Ka Veer Putra -Maharana Pratap
Bharat Ka Veer Putra -Maharana Pratap

PrAja FF Love and Betrayal- I part 10 pg 23 (Page 16)

coderlady IF-Dazzler

Joined: 02 January 2015
Posts: 2996

Posted: 12 June 2015 at 7:24am | IP Logged
Nice update. Looking forward to read what the plan will be.

Congratulations on getting a good score. Don't worry, you are a very good writer, very expressive.

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


aayu_26 Senior Member

Joined: 25 March 2015
Posts: 677

Posted: 12 June 2015 at 9:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by twilightlover29

Unress soonSmile
aayu_26 Senior Member

Joined: 25 March 2015
Posts: 677

Posted: 12 June 2015 at 9:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by coderlady

Nice update. Looking forward to read what the plan will be.

Congratulations on getting a good score. Don't worry, you are a very good writer, very expressive.
Thank you so muchSmile
Yes will try to make the plan really smart.
Thank youBig smile
Nonie12345 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 18 October 2014
Posts: 8951

Posted: 13 June 2015 at 10:48am | IP Logged
Congrats for awesome score AayuPartyDancing
Do not worry you won't lose your readersBig smile
Awesome chapterSmile
PM me for the next chapterDay Dreaming

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


aayu_26 Senior Member

Joined: 25 March 2015
Posts: 677

Posted: 13 June 2015 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nonie12345

<font color="#ff0066"><font size="4">Congrats for awesome score AayuPartyDancing</font></font>
<font size="4" color="#ff0066">Do not worry you won't lose your readersBig smile</font>
<font size="4" color="#ff0066">Awesome chapterSmile</font>
<font size="4"><font color="#ff0066">PM me for the next chapterDay Dreaming</font></font>

Thank you and will surely do so

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


aayu_26 Senior Member

Joined: 25 March 2015
Posts: 677

Posted: 18 June 2015 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
Guys i'm sorry for the delay! Here you go with the update:
JB and BD were stunned by the events that had happened after their departure. Ajabde worked as a maid at surtan's place but then he kept her in his rehab centre since the last two days and then PD mess had happened. They were thoroughly frustrated with pratap. All involved in this cheating, Uma Devi, Rao Maldev, Badshah Khan, Surtan Singh, and that Phool, everyone had to pay for their crimes. Badshah Khan was already in the jail but he had to be interrogated now. BD checked all these facts and listed out the one pratap will look upon and the one he had to see. BD knew pratap well. Meanwhile JB called pratap and in a cold voice,
Prtp: HELLO Maa! How are you when did you come?
JB: After all the mess you created for my ajabde
Prtp: Sorry maa please understand it was...
JB: I'm going to our Udaipur farmhouse with BD and ajbde. So take care of the house till the time you seek forgiveness from ajabde
Prtp: But maa...
JB cut the phone.
Prtp: Shit mahn what a mess I am in! I'll have to call chakri, veni, som,maan and hakim now here.
He called them and they all came in the house at once.
They sat there planning their strategy on their next target badshah khan. They had to plan their targets skillfully so that no one could know of their investigation. Their aim was clear: Catch the target and turn it to our favour. They had succeeded in getting clues for TD and nw BK was in jail due to one more of their brilliant techniques courtesy chakrapani. Now, they had proofs to have BK hanged but only if he didn't accept their greedy offer.Poor BK had his proofs detected by pratap that he had been involved in the land scam that took the lands of thousands of rajputs under the pretext of infrastructure which was obviously misused by RM and his company.
Prtp: We need to go inspector kalla has given this time for the meeting. This small steps will finally prove my ajabde innocent that she hadn't done anything cheap like that in front of the whole world. He had marred her life and now he will only set it for her. With that he and his friends went to the central jail to meet their once chuddy buddy but now most hated and most important enemy.
BD: Ajab beta I hope you are feeling good now. Don't worry everything will be alright.
Ajb: BD no one is ready to give me a job also since everyone thinks i'll dirty their workplace. I have no use to live the media and the fakeness has spoiled it all. She started crying.
JB: Don't you dare say that ajabde. You know about my life. When god closes all the doors he keeps open a window too to escape. And you know my son very well. He'll first break all the glasses and then would want to drink only in them.
Ajabde smiled at this.
BD: Don't worry child we are with you. And don't you know how much weight my name carries? he winked. They burst out laughing.
So I know pratap will catch badshah khan, and then surtan and then slowly he'll even get hold of rao maldev. His spies are very good you see. But now we will have to work on the women part. Pratap would never be able to crack those sisters UD and DB since he'sa dumb with women.
Ajabde murmured,I know!
BD continued: So I have a plan. We'll have to call khetu. Our most reliable asset and your childhood friend. She will be an important asset to crack down DB and give a way to UD.
Ajb: What abt phool?
BD: Pratap will handle her. She was her college friend and he would like to handle her.
Ajabde frowned as a sudden gush of jealousy ignited her love.
JB: As for now, let's come for dinner.
BD: I missed home food so much.
Ajb: It truly feels home here.
Prtp: So bk tell me what all do you know?
BK: Abt what?
Prtp slapped him his anger taking the better of him.
Prtp: Abt the night when you ruined my life ajabde.
BK: I don't know anything.
Prtp: Get me a whip kalla.
BK got scared and stopped kalla.
BK: No no wait. Okay fine I'm telling you. The photos were forged by TD that you must be knowing. I was just a pawn used by them to destroy you and her completely since I was a close aid of yours.
Prtp: But why did they did all this?
BK: UD and RM are the second largest industrialists after you and JB. They always wanted power so that they could dominate the entire rajputana and you were the only obstacle since they wanted illegal business ad you were righteousness personified. So in order to weaken you and your image, they targeted both your spots jointly, anger and ajabde since they knew that you trust people blindly and when in anger you can do anything and that you hate betrayals. As a result they wanted your image to go low so that you would lose out all the deals and tenders and they could grab it.
Prtp: But why did DB support them?
BK: Because under US she couldn't get complete power and US, however drunk he is, will never give full control of business to her.That is why she joined the plan. They got a person from inside the family and DB could get complete control. After you loosing out tenders, she would grab them all and then kill US and become the sole owner of suryavanshi. She cannot kill US now since she herself cannot set up business with such a weak state of the company. DB would then collaborate with UD and the murder of US would be blamed on you.
Prtp: But why ajabde then? They could have targeted me directly!
BK:I have no answers pratap. Trust me. Only one person can answer this to you.
BK: The closest aid that is the PA of UD. She knows everything infact ever since the incident happened she has become the closest aid of UD and RM.
Prtp: Fine you can go now. And you know that any kind of info you get you'll report to me or else your documents will go to income tax.
BK: Yeah I will.
Prtp gave chakrapani a knowing smile.
Prtp: Now only surtan is left
Chakri: But we got to know everything right
Prtp:No. We need to know why was surtan invoved in this. Ajabde was a mere pawn. There's more to come now.
Chakri: Once we are done with chakri we'll have to call Akbar also.
Prtp: Yes but not now. He's busy getting me clues on Toranmal.
Chakri: And the PA?
Prtp gave a teasing smile: Chakri patience baba.
Finally updated. All reviews welcomed

The following 8 member(s) liked the above post:


Natasha_1234 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 29 May 2015
Posts: 3746

Posted: 18 June 2015 at 7:09pm | IP Logged
Amazing update!! It's after a long time!!
Ajabdes sudden gush of jealousy! Nice to hear Wink
And I love how pratap scares bk
Everything was fabulous
Update soon ok?
I'm your firstie [:D/]

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


twilightlover29 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 29 August 2014
Posts: 15783

Posted: 18 June 2015 at 10:53pm | IP Logged
Aayu baby you updated the story. ...Yayyy
Chalo JB ne uss pratu ko sunny toh but he needs more of it and face to face bhi dena usko
Ajabde feeling jealous- nice but make sure ki woh pratu ko bhi jealous feel karaye after all jaise karni waisi bharni 
Phoolwati, SS, RM, UD, DB kI bhi badiya waali dhulayi honi chahiye

Am so happy you updated and am waiting for the next one now

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
Chamber Of Secrets PrAja SS Updated on Pg 27

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 27 28

Author: faishar02   Replies: 217   Views: 19191

faishar02 217 19191 22 October 2016 at 4:35am by faishar02
PrAja SS: Ek Duje Ke Liye Chapter 38 page 56 ( Completed)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 55 56

Author: Suranya_Titli   Replies: 446   Views: 43703

Suranya_Titli 446 43703 07 September 2015 at 3:30pm by coderlady
praja ff love amidst jealousy (chapter 6 updated on pg 12)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 13 14

Author: sidyali4   Replies: 106   Views: 11182

sidyali4 106 11182 23 July 2015 at 7:15am by sidyali4

2 3

Author: shrutijest.   Replies: 20   Views: 3404

shrutijest. 20 3404 05 November 2014 at 5:35am by ApekshaM
PrAja! PrAja! PrAja!


Author: Chitra89   Replies: 15   Views: 7478

Chitra89 15 7478 03 September 2014 at 4:41pm by arakshi_16

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels

Bharat Ka Veer Putra -Maharana Pratap Topic Index

  • Please login to check your Last 10 Topics posted

Check these Celebrity also

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index