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PrAja FF Love and Betrayal- I part 10 pg 23

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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 3:52am | IP Logged
Hey guys I'm back with a new story. Hope you guys will be with me showering more love throughout. I'll try my best to update the first part soon but my lappy is still not happy with me Confused so please bear with me aakhir sabar ka phal meetha hota haeLOL
This story will be divided into two parts I and IISmile

LOVE AND BETRAYAL- I

What happens when love turns into hatred, the worst form of hatred? Love an betrayal is a story of two lovers, struggling by the cruelty of materialism and past conflicts which eventually leads to their seperation. Will they ever know the truth? Set in the 21st century, it is a very gripping tale of how truth triumphs amidst all the misunderstandings and betrayals.
Do comment if you'll want me to continueBig smile



Edited by aayu_26 - 08 July 2015 at 6:07am

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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 9:01am | IP Logged
Guys please comment if you'll don't want me to continue further atleast let me know Unhappy
Please share your views I'm getting discouraged to write Ermm
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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 9:18am | IP Logged
Aayu baby don't you dare get discouraged from writing...maybe people are not commenting but that's because many of them are busy or they are just lazy due to the weather but that does not mean that we as writers will get discouraged- NOPE - we will write and keep on writing till our last gasping breath - giving birth to our stories as we undergo the labour pains with them and I promise you that when everyone will see our creation they will be bound to comment,like and spread word about it

Love the prologue- the story seems intriguing and am really excited for you to start this journey as well

All the very best and this is for you
Ruk jaanaa nahi tu kahin haar ke
Kaanton pe chal ke milenge saaye bahaar ke!!!




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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 9:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by twilightlover29

Aayu baby don't you dare get discouraged from writing...maybe people are not commenting but that's because many of them are busy or they are just lazy due to the weather but that does not mean that we as writers will get discouraged- NOPE - we will write and keep on writing till our last gasping breath - giving birth to our stories as we undergo the labour pains with them and I promise you that when everyone will see our creation they will be bound to comment,like and spread word about it

Love the prologue- the story seems intriguing and am really excited for you to start this journey as well

All the very best and this is for you
Ruk jaanaa nahi tu kahin haar ke
Kaanton pe chal ke milenge saaye bahaar ke!!!







Garimaa Diii you are a Star sachi Smile
Few encouraging words from you and I'm so cheered up. Such a beautiful quote for me Embarrassed I'm feeling so good now
Yeah you're right we should always continue writing and I won't stop now promise.
Once again thank you so much apeksha truly said you are very sweet always there to encourage new talent.
Love ya loads dii Smile

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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 9:28am | IP Logged
prologue sounds great... do continue soon..

disappoint mat hona sweet heart... we all love ur stories a lot.. mere toh entrance exams chal rahe hai.. so comment nahi kar payi..

pls.. continue soon.

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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 9:33am | IP Logged
Hey aayu! don't worry yaar we all are with u.Pls continue with the story.U are a superb writer and i'm sure i'll love ur this story as well.It sometimes happens with me as well that no one comments on my new chapters.Don't let anything deter u!SmileSmile
And thank u so much garima for encouraging everyone.U are a Star .

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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 9:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aayu_26

Originally posted by twilightlover29

Aayu baby don't you dare get discouraged from writing...maybe people are not commenting but that's because many of them are busy or they are just lazy due to the weather but that does not mean that we as writers will get discouraged- NOPE - we will write and keep on writing till our last gasping breath - giving birth to our stories as we undergo the labour pains with them and I promise you that when everyone will see our creation they will be bound to comment,like and spread word about it

Love the prologue- the story seems intriguing and am really excited for you to start this journey as well

All the very best and this is for you
Ruk jaanaa nahi tu kahin haar ke
Kaanton pe chal ke milenge saaye bahaar ke!!!







Garimaa Diii you are a Star sachi Smile
Few encouraging words from you and I'm so cheered up. Such a beautiful quote for me Embarrassed I'm feeling so good now
Yeah you're right we should always continue writing and I won't stop now promise.
Once again thank you so much apeksha truly said you are very sweet always there to encourage new talent.
Love ya loads dii Smile



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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 9:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ApekshaM

prologue sounds great... do continue soon..

disappoint mat hona sweet heart... we all love ur stories a lot.. mere toh entrance exams chal rahe hai.. so comment nahi kar payi..

pls.. continue soon.


@bold: haila baccha bataya kyun nahi ke exams hain - kiska netrance tha re- all the best jiska bhi tha...I know you did well in themSmile
Ab when the exams get over then be regular everyone missed you

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