Kaisi Yeh Yaariaan

CaVya OS *Divergent*

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Posted: 8 years ago
hola ky2ians😃
hope you all remember me?
well if not...
I was formally "the other serendipity " of the forums...
crazy abt the show as well as writing...
still no?
never mind...
here I am with yet another OS ...
not MaNan or ManBir but...
CaVya...
this time 

why?
coz they are poles apart yet so...adorably awkward...
ya I know it doesn't make sense ...
most of my stuff doesnt...
thats why I am weird ...and A proud one at that...
anyways ...
coming to the OS ...
hope u all like it...
this one's dedicated to bday girl Ansah(-damneddrooler-)
(hope she likes the couple )
and my Kiddo (Noncomposmentis)
coz ...she 's MY Kiddo!! And I felt like writing something ...
scrolldown for the OS 
OS type = poetry + fiction
A fusion I'd experimented long back on TBP forums...
I hope u like it
love
Rads😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
DIVERGENT
Have u ever seen a cross-road in your life?
the one with 2 diverging paths???
the kind that run parallel to one another ...and never meet again?
ya thats what they were...
ying-yang
night-day
black-white
Retro-Modern
Hetero-Homo 
Madhubala-Rockstar...
2 ppl you would never see in one room together
2 people who absolutely hated each other
She was way tooo retro for him..
he was tooo Kool for her taste..
She was pretty much Straight
he was pretty much gay...
yet here they stood at cross-roads to one another...
thanks to  2 thickhead,narrow-minded women...
one of who didn't approve her daughter's pre-marital pregnancy
and other who refused to accept her son's errr...preferences ...
they tried every road to get rid of the path chosen for them by their mothers...
but all of them flopped...
whether it be setting up a fake daddy 
or coming clean of his homosexuality 
nothing budged these women and their determination to unite them..
tie them into a Knot...
if that was even remotely possible!!
Now that was an interesting situation...
The Supercool Rockstar -Marrying a Retro -style Madhubala..
you'd think they had nothing in common...
that they were the diverging paths of a cross-road..
never bound to meet...
yet surprisingly enough they had a lot of things in common...
they'd both been heart-broken,
abandoned ,
looked down upon by the society...
they'd seen it all 
and dealt the situations in their own way...
but this...
was  Awkward!!
and what was more shocking for her?
Him finally giving in...
Him finally agreeing to marry her!!!
the summer came and went by so early,
that I never realized when winter crept in,
here I stand waiting for the warmth of spring to touch my numb cheek,
and yet all I see is a vast endless wintery Night,
refusing to leave my side

"Cabir tum aisa kaise kar sakte ho humare saath"
"Do I have a choice?"
" hum apna dhyan khud rakh sakte hai, hume tumhare ehsaan ki zaroorat nahi"
" ehsaan? now all this is ehsaan for u? weren't u the 1 to forcefully live in my house?"
" humari galti thi..."
"badi jaldi yaad aaya"
" hume kuchh aur sochna padega...hum dono ki...shaadi??"
"its a nightmare ..."
"yahi toh hum bhi keh rahe hai"
*Cabir 's cell phone rings he takes the call and bangs his wrist in frustration*
"Why me? why now? why's life so damn frustrating from all the sides right now*
Navya just looks on...realizing she's not the only one stuck in this endless nightmare he is too
In this strange journey I am about to persue,
you seem to be the only hope,
despite the diverging paths we chose to take,
here we stand at crossroads,
together making the impossible ,
Possible.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
A/N : not really what I hoped to write,
I am not sure what I just wrote,
I had something entirely else in my mind...
but ended up in a serious note...
I wanted to keep it light and humourous 
but ended up writing an entirely different genre
hope u all like it
do leave ur valuable comments
Criticism is welcome
love
Rads😃




Edited by ..Enamour.. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
red
Plz pm me when U will update...
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow a cavya os,pls do pm me too
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Hie...!!!
Well well well look who had finally written something...!!! 
What a surprise...a pleasant one at that I must say...didn't inform me also...that ur writing...upsetting partner..not fair...!!!

Coming to the point instead of geting carried away...ohmygod...cabir n navya...this is so super duper awesome...reading ur writing after what seems like ages reminds me on why I'm ur biggest fan...ur one of my favourite IF writers...n must say u never fail to impress me...u have grown massively as a writer n reading the POEM on them amazing...I loved the most in OS is the poem...I am absolutely on love with it...it is so beautifully written...ur defo the best poet I know...this one jzz left me speechless...I loved the phrase ur used and the meaning behind them...crystal clear baby...
N after the peom I loved the Title...DIVERGENT you knw I have obesseions with certain words...well well well...u hit jackpot at the title...I love the word divergent I have no obvious reason for it..I jzz plain right love it...so when I opened my PM n checked the title I immediately knew I am in love with the OS..n correctly so...the justification for the title u provided for the title was also bang on...
We write more please...
I'm craving for ur writing babe...
Regards
Safrena
 
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Posted: 8 years ago
A fair warning that I haven't seen much of the show so if I make random comments kill me. 😆

Now coming to the story.. Though it is a short extract of their two different lives, it depicted exactly why their lives which were two parallel roads crossed paths. Unfortunately ours is a society where decisions which are different from the usual flow are frowned upon. Whether it's her decision to keep the baby out if wedlock or his orientation and solution to any problem is just this. Get the person married.

The poem was beautiful. Winter was always associated with sadness and so the endless winter with them yet the warmth was going to come from someone totally unexpected...
One word. Beautiful
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: -ScaredAngel-

Hie...!!!

Partner🤗
Well well well look who had finally written something...!!! 
What a surprise...a pleasant one at that I must say...didn't inform me also...that ur writing...upsetting partner..not fair...!!!
this was due since sunday..the day I told u I 'd write😆

Coming to the point instead of geting carried away...ohmygod...cabir n navya...this is so super duper awesome...reading ur writing after what seems like ages reminds me on why I'm ur biggest fan...
u never fail to flatter me😳😳
ur one of my favourite IF writers...n must say u never fail to impress me...u have grown massively as a writer 
Really??😲😳
n reading the POEM on them amazing...I loved the most in OS is the poem...I am absolutely on love with it...it is so beautifully written...ur defo the best poet I know...this one jzz left me speechless...I loved the phrase ur used and the meaning behind them...crystal clear baby...
awww...did I ever say ?...I love u ❤️
N after the peom I loved the Title...DIVERGENT you knw I have obesseions with certain words...well well well...u hit jackpot at the title...I love the word divergent I have no obvious reason for it..I jzz plain right love it...so when I opened my PM n checked the title I immediately knew I am in love with the OS..n correctly so...the justification for the title u provided for the title was also bang on...
thank u my love🤗

We write more please...
I'm craving for ur writing babe...
I will..pretty soon😉
Regards
Safrena
 

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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: .Maggie.

A fair warning that I haven't seen much of the show so if I make random comments kill me. 😆

Random comments are something I pretty much welcome..so welcome to the weirdo club😆😆

Now coming to the story.. Though it is a short extract of their two different lives, it depicted exactly why their lives which were two parallel roads crossed paths. Unfortunately ours is a society where decisions which are different from the usual flow are frowned upon. Whether it's her decision to keep the baby out if wedlock or his orientation and solution to any problem is just this. Get the person married.
its not really his solution..but something imposed on him...yes alas ppl claim to have modernized and become broad minded butyet frown upon such things which is actually sad
The poem was beautiful. Winter was always associated with sadness and so the endless winter with them yet the warmth was going to come from someone totally unexpected...
isnt that the whole idea?
expect the unexpected!!
One word. Beautiful
thank u...coming from u...it means a lot to me😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
You know Radz I am a fan of your writing...always in awe not matter which couple it is..
You writing this one for me... i am touched ... thanks alot darling ❤️

Now moving to the worm it is beautifully down, all the emotions so right on the place.

This one couple is very interesting and building a relationship not a easy task but u done do well..

Hope they go the way you are penning them down

Awesome as always 

More and more I am so eager to read more

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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow awsum Os dear!!!
I lov it wow cabir in a serious mood interesting!!!!
lov d way u described it!!!
Is there an another part!!!
Pls do write
Love
aresha