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AsYa(KaBhi) TS : Raaz (Last Part on Pg 13) (Page 9)

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Posted: 10 June 2015 at 11:43pm | IP Logged
Nice update...
So it's the past which is making them do all those wierd things.
What had happened 1000 years back??
Really eager to know it...
Pls give arshi at end sidu... Smile

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(Please ignore any typing errors )

Part 2

Asad and Zoya (Karan and Surbhi) reach Ajmer,Rajasthan and then began searching for the Sheeshmahal Mansion .
Asad : Excuse Bhaisaab, Do you know any ancient mansion named Sheeshmahal ."The person replies -Nahi Bhaisaab , we are new generation people , and what we will know if there was a ancient mansion over here as in Rajasthan you will find so many mansions which are unknown to the people as some mansions are extinct and know one knows whether its there or not there, but if you really wanna know then meet my dadaji a retired police officer he might know about some mansions in Ajmer".
Asad : Hello my name is ..Kar..I mean Asad can you tell me about the Mansion named Sheeshmahal."The old policeman replies - Are you the 4th generation Asad and you are the 4th generation Zoya.(Asad and Zoya were surprised) Because I remember visiting Sheeshmahal for one purpose regarding robbery when I was in the police service  a diamond gem was robbed from the mansion antics though the mansion was sealed a robber stole the gem from there".
Asad-Zoya : Dadaji , Can you please take us to that mansion .
Asad and Zoya reach the mansion it look scary and haunted due to being sealed and know one using the mansion .They both entered the mansion they found dust and spider's web around , the mansion was known for its mirrors (Sheesha) which is named "Sheesh Mahal " and the mansion things were coverer with a white dusty sheet . They went along with the old policeman to the room of treasure "The Khazana" Zoya found  a book with was dusty she started to cough Asad gave her water the policeman clean the dust and presented the Book , it contained a name " Rajas " (Kings) Asad opened the book and found the different Kings with pictures , 

King 1 : Asad (Karan) and begum(wife) Zoya (Surbhi).
King 2 : Asad (Rohan) and begum Zoya ( Muskaan) .
King 3 : Asad (Arnav) and begum Zoya (Khushi) . 
King's brother 1 , 2, 3 : Shaaz ( Shyam) and begum Taanveer 
Crown Prince 1, 2, 3 : Dead ..(written with blood) -Killed by Shaaz and Tanveer (written in inscribed) .
Asad and Zoya was shocked that Why is the crown prince died in all the 3 generations and no name in it and see even in the kings and wife its written the same killed by Shaaz and Tanveer who are they and why they killed all the generations  rulers suddenly Rohan and Muskaan soul comes "Your question's answer we will give 
shocked , its true we are killed by Shaaz and Tanveer and we are come in form of soul the truth is somewhere hidden here but only if the other Asad and Zoya which is Arnav and Khushi only when they enter this mansion you will come to the secret of which you have taken rebirth ..till then we can't help you ..because all the couples of Asad and Zoya should join hands to find out the secret.

On the other hand 

Shaaz and Tanveer of this generation were busy laughing on thinking that Arnav and Khushi will not be able to unite with Asad Zoya cause we will not make them enter the mansion  because Raaz ko raaz hi rehendo .
Arnav and Khushi comes to Ajmer and then they search for Sheeshmahal suddenly they are attacked by Shaaz and Tanveer and then stop them Asad and Zoya see them from the window if Sheeshmahal and they are locked up in the mansion by Tanveer.Rohan and Muskaan because they were souls they freed Asad and Zoya and Asad and Zoya took over Shaaz and Tanveer and Zoya through a stone on Tanveer and she became unconscious .Shaaz was beaten badly by Asad to which he was unconscious.. Asad Zoya and Rohan Muskaan helped Arnav Khushi.
Arnav Khushi : Thank you so much for saving our lives, we don't know why we are attacked by them and who are they ..
Asad : Arnav Khushi you guys together surprising ..Zoya - "Yes how come up you guys reach here" .
Arnav Khushi : We both fell in love with each other and then suddenly we got flashes of something in Ajmer which is Sheeshmahal and we reached here.
Rohan Muskaan : Great !! Now we can easily use the mantra and find the secret ..
Asad Zoya Arnav Khushi : What Raaz (secret) is there which needs we all to be together.
Ronan Muskaan, Arnav Khushi , Asad Zoya went to the place where they would find the secret 
Its says All the couples recite this mantra together to attain the secret "Akadam Bhagadam Tigadam -Raaz kya hai  Akadam Bhagadam Tigadam "
A box comes in front of their eyes .The couples opened the box it was a video , and pics ..Asad Zoya , Arnav Khushi questioned Rohan and Muskaan about this video and pics .Rohan and Muskaan tells them the story ..
Long back ago Asad Zoya which was Karan and Surbhi were King and Queen of this mansion and it was brought to the noticed that Zoya was pregnant and she was gonna give birth to the crown prince which was not satisfied by Shaaz when Zoya was 7 months pregnant , she was kidnapped by Shaaz and Tanveer because they wanted the baby to make the baby as theirs and they become the King and Queen because according to the rules of the mansion that if the King and Queen dies and the prince or 
princess is alive they will be handed over to the King's brother and his wife and they would be the next King and Queen and for that purpose Shaaz took Asad and confronted him saying 
Shaaz : Asad your wife Zoya is kidnapped by us and till she doesn't give birth to the heir she is kidnapped and once the baby is born she will be dead ...Asad bashed him up badly but Shaaz took the sword and killed him .Zoya wept in pain, she cried when she heard the news that her husband is killed ..suddenly her labour pain started and then she gave birth to a prince who was a premature baby Zoya was then killed by Tanveer but suddenly when Zoya was still living for a few minutes she tried  to kill Tanveer by the same sword but she thought she killed her own baby who was in the arms of Tanveer and with that shock she died.
In this video its shows that the baby is safe and Tanveer was killed and because Tanveer was killed and Shaaz couldn't see his beloved dying he killed the baby and he killed himself because he couldn't see Tanveer dying .
But this continued for 2 more generations but this time we have to stop this we have to prove that Asad and Zoya are immortal ...

To be Continued 
Next Part 

Edited by -Dellz- - 20 June 2015 at 6:03am

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Thankyou so much She-lo-SaRun aka Angellic_doll aka Shilpa for the 2 lovely edits thank you so much dear and Nidhi once again for the banner thanks alot !!
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Edited by -Dellz- - 20 June 2015 at 4:34am

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Posted: 20 June 2015 at 5:21am | IP Logged
interesting update...

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It is getting interesting

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Posted: 20 June 2015 at 5:49am | IP Logged
Superb update
Loved it

This is getting intrstng
Update soon

Love u
Keep smiling

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Superb update so its their fourth genration eagerly waiting for whole story pls update soon

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