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Posted: 30 May 2015 at 3:00pm | IP Logged
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Wonderful ending GeethaClap

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this was beautiful

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Bookmarking...adding in my to be read list

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Originally posted by Sabhayata

this was beautiful


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Bookmarking...adding in my to be read list


Thank you. Please do tell me how it is after you've read itSmile
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Posted: 08 July 2015 at 3:50am | IP Logged
Hey Geetha,
 
I read prologue and chapters till Day 2. Really nicely writtenClap .Somewhat though I felt your Karna's vengence more strongly.. There was arrogance and kind of frankness which we often see in Karna's outburst... I loved Dury-Karna's bond, it felt genuine from both sides .. and loved the fact that Karna had guilt of keeping secrets from him...something that could cost him even war... His thinking regarding Bheeshma too felt natural considering though they had heated exchange..Somewhere he had that warrior respect for him...
 
There were few places where I felt disagreeing with this Karna's thoughts but then I believe there are lot of such spaces in the epic which gives us this freedom to imagine what could have been thought behind it...
 
Will further read more parts and give my feedback.. Smile

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Originally posted by riti4u

Hey Geetha,
 
I read prologue and chapters till Day 2. Really nicely writtenClap .Somewhat though I felt your Karna's vengence more strongly.. There was arrogance and kind of frankness which we often see in Karna's outburst... I loved Dury-Karna's bond, it felt genuine from both sides .. and loved the fact that Karna had guilt of keeping secrets from him...something that could cost him even war... His thinking regarding Bheeshma too felt natural considering though they had heated exchange..Somewhere he had that warrior respect for him...
 
There were few places where I felt disagreeing with this Karna's thoughts but then I believe there are lot of such spaces in the epic which gives us this freedom to imagine what could have been thought behind it...
 
Will further read more parts and give my feedback.. Smile

Thank you Riti. Yes, I know what you mean about Karna's thoughts. I wrote this four years ago and now when I re-read it, there are parts about which I don't feel much satisfied. And I always believed that Karna and Dury shared a real friendship.
Sometimes I try to imagine the real Karna reading this and hell! I die from embarassment!! LOL

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The real karn will be proud of you 
Beautiful ending 

You wrote it 4 years ago [email protected]@@

Yama bowed before him everyone bowed 
even krushna

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