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SwaRon FF: Healing of the hurt souls. Part twenty one. PG 68. Updated. (Page 33)

flyinghigh_ani IF-Dazzler

Joined: 19 September 2014
Posts: 2815

Posted: 01 August 2015 at 9:35am | IP Logged

OH MY GOD!!!! he confessed in front of her??? like seriously???Dancing

i really loved the entire update do I really need say that????

the update was really dreamy... especially the parking lot part..

. love you girl for including that in the chapter...

the team in a royal palace just seems so intriguing for me... 

and since you said you have teh next 2 chapters written then what are you wasting for???

plsss update soon soon soon soon...

obviously as a reader i would want swayam sharon romance...
but as a writer i know you ahve your own imagination so you go on with your way...
and i know for sure it would be brilliant...

keep writing...

love ani

Edited by flyinghigh_ani - 01 August 2015 at 10:38am

vrushan_deeksha Senior Member

Joined: 16 November 2014
Posts: 285

Posted: 01 August 2015 at 11:13am | IP Logged
it was a nice chapter
loved. it
update it soon
SalmanShahidSm Goldie

Joined: 23 June 2014
Posts: 1947

Posted: 02 August 2015 at 11:07am | IP Logged
nice update ...i liked it!!... long chappy :):)     awesome writer u are    thnxx for the pm   update soon
ExpectoPatronus IF-Dazzler

Joined: 28 August 2012
Posts: 4105

Posted: 03 August 2015 at 2:37pm | IP Logged
loved d update... Smile
prajana Senior Member

Joined: 08 July 2014
Posts: 363

Posted: 07 August 2015 at 11:09am | IP Logged
Hey..awsome update
Loved the parking lot scene
I never knew love confession can be written in such simple yet beautiful manner
The whole part was so dreamy
Update soon plzSmile
sneharay Goldie

Joined: 01 August 2015
Posts: 2123

Posted: 09 August 2015 at 11:33am | IP Logged
Very nice FF..well written Smile
mythreyii Senior Member

Joined: 05 August 2015
Posts: 691

Posted: 11 August 2015 at 9:20am | IP Logged
Hey aditi
Read all the chaps they are beautiful... Sharon's anger and her diva way was jus owsome. Swayuns character was different in a good way loved his character. Swarons loss was huge and had drained der emotions and its jus beautiful tat dey r bringing back good and happy time in each others life..
It was a smooth flowing off treat to read...
Sam is another livable character here. Swayums bond with Kria and taani and der teasing was fun to read. Though sharon is my personal fav. But love swayum too.
The last chap was gr8 with the party and most imp. Confession was lyk a dream jus beautifully penned
The swaron moments in d ff wer lovely be it Sharon's cheek kiss or d hug jus beautiful
Do update soon

--lavanya-- IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 20 May 2015
Posts: 10864

Posted: 11 August 2015 at 10:16am | IP Logged
i am speechless yaar !  Clap 

why did you stop !!  ho sake to abhi ke abhi baaki dono chappys pada de mujhko !!

i loved the chappy !!

still in trance !!  Day Dreaming

too good Adity Hug

humesha long chappys  hi likhna ...i so love them !!

i bookmarked this !  baar baar padungi !!

aur time mile to i'll cmmnt again !  Tongue

lots of ice-cream and love ,

Lavi di  Embarrassed

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