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SwaRon FF: Healing of the hurt souls. Part twenty one. PG 68. Updated. (Page 17)

flyinghigh_ani IF-Dazzler

Joined: 19 September 2014
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Posted: 10 June 2015 at 11:08am | IP Logged


as promised u updated today... i am so happy for that...Hug

and i just loved today's update...

for some strange reason i love simmi's character...
she said that but obviously is guilty and the USP of this update was swayam being more concerned about sharon getting hurt rather than he himself felt bad...

really , standing ovation for you... this story is turning out to be very good... so unpredictable...

when we predict them to fight , they don't... LOLLOL

n when i was at 9th standard i couldn't even imagine about writing all this.. so can u imagine that as per your age you are fabulous!!

thank you so much for letting us read such an amazing concept...

love you yaar.. hope you know that now!!..LOLLOLLOL

update soon... n yeah need the OS soon...

love ani

Edited by flyinghigh_ani - 10 June 2015 at 11:20am

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Sovereign_K IF-Rockerz

Joined: 10 July 2013
Posts: 9191

Posted: 10 June 2015 at 11:42am | IP Logged
beautiful part...and u have written it more beautifully...
i loved each and every part of this.. be it the intro of team, simi's outburst and the last part .the blend of rain and their pain was really commendable...very well doneClap
thanks for the pm
update soonBig smile

Edited by --Keechu-- - 10 June 2015 at 11:58am

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Rockingbhardwaj IF-Dazzler

Joined: 19 July 2012
Posts: 3665

Posted: 10 June 2015 at 11:57am | IP Logged
Emotional one

Swaron were genuinly smiling..

Bt poor simmi..
Unintentionally hurt her friends..

Hope she make them happy soon

Update soon plz

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--RENU-- IF-Rockerz

Joined: 04 June 2015
Posts: 6133

Posted: 10 June 2015 at 8:26pm | IP Logged
wow I loved it...
emotional update...
sharon was hurt...
swayam was also hurt but he was hurt for sharon...
last line was awsm Wink
'change is only constant' Day Dreaming

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aneesha93 Senior Member

Joined: 25 April 2014
Posts: 499

Posted: 10 June 2015 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
This was a beautiful update. Simmi should not have said those things to them. Poor them. She herself is guilty too. Swayam and Sharon could not be genuinely happy at least for a whole day. Every time something went wrong. Ufff! Loved how Swayam was more concerned for Sharon than for himself. Both letting their emotions out in the rain. You penned the whole update very well.
Thanks for the pm. Update soon

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anjuvrushan Goldie

Joined: 04 September 2014
Posts: 2260

Posted: 11 June 2015 at 12:03am | IP Logged
Nice update.. ..swayams heart is melting.. ..oncerned abt sharon.. Though he ws in pain.. .it ws her pain troubling him more.. Sharon too. .is thinking abt swayam.. Simmi, i live her char.. .Thought her words were rude, its for their good.. And the first rain of the season.. .i too love it.. .it just washes away everything..
Update soon. .waiting for the nxt

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prajana Senior Member

Joined: 08 July 2014
Posts: 363

Posted: 11 June 2015 at 12:42am | IP Logged
Hey..very nice chpter
The story is beautiful
Simmi's outburst had hurt sharon greatly
Both swayam and sharon remembering their past in the rain
Hope they have a moment in the rainEmbarrassed
Update soon!!

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--Ecstasy-- Goldie

Joined: 16 May 2014
Posts: 1035

Posted: 11 June 2015 at 10:31am | IP Logged
Wow, You have very beautifully penned it.  

Swaron feeling are changing..  

The gang was fun.. 

Simi didn't mean to say things, Sharon and swayam both are hurt. 

Sharon is scared,  she might loose her best friend  and swayam was hurt but this time it was different. 

Both feeling the first rain, letting the pain to flow through tears.  

I am very much looking for new change in them.. And their equation.  

Many things changed that day, the always right were proved humans as they committed mistakes, the always bottled ups learned to let go and as the people got drenched in the first most awaited rain of the season, two numb hearts laying under the same shelter, realized that they too were alive and little did they know that, their sudden and soft beats were beating for each other."

... Still many things were yet to change, as "Change is the only Constant." 

Beautiful...  Loved it.. !! 
Update soonish.. 


Edited by --Ecstasy-- - 11 June 2015 at 10:32am

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