Channel V Dil Dosti Dance


Channel V Dil Dosti Dance
Channel V Dil Dosti Dance

SwaRon FF: Healing of the hurt souls. Part twenty one. PG 68. Updated. (Page 12)

VrushanianAdity Groupbie

Joined: 24 January 2015
Posts: 185

Posted: 27 May 2015 at 9:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AnanyaVruShan

wowww... lovely...  swaron scene ws fab...  keep up d gd writing...  wl wait fr ur next update Smile
Thank you so much.. :)

VrushanianAdity Groupbie

Joined: 24 January 2015
Posts: 185

Posted: 27 May 2015 at 9:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Vani20

Sharon demoted from Google post and new GS is swayam. 
This will be interesting.. 
Swaron fight and Sharon's outburst related to her family. 
So now swayam wants revenge. 
Very well written update. 
Update soon. 

Thank you so much.. :) and keep giving these long comments.. I love reading them.. :)
VrushanianAdity Groupbie

Joined: 24 January 2015
Posts: 185

Posted: 27 May 2015 at 9:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ujwalv

awesome update n emotional too
loving this story
excited abt the next updates
Thank you so much.. :)
VrushanianAdity Groupbie

Joined: 24 January 2015
Posts: 185

Posted: 27 May 2015 at 9:43am | IP Logged
                                                 SwaRon FF: 
Healing of the hurt Souls.
                                           Chapter five:
 "Hey Sharon, you all right?" Simmi asked, concerned seeing Sharon so silent and gloomy. "Your dad's a phycologist right?" Sharon asked, out of blue. "Yup, why?" Simmi replied confused. "Well because your so called Principal really needs some serious psychological help." Sharon said in a sarcastic frustrated tone. "Come on Shar, what happened now?" Simmi asked, mentally cursing Avantika for always spoiling her best friend's mood. "She demoted me from GS too AGS.. Can you believe that? She DEMOTED ME!!" Sharon said, shouting her lungs out. "And you won't believe whom did she replace with me." Sharon added. "Whom?" Simmi asked, anticipating the worst. "SWAYAM. That selfish dimwit." Sharon said. Ahem Ahem. Simmi cleared her throat, reminding Sharon that The same person whom she was calling a "Selfish Dimwit" too was her best friend. "Yaa yaa.. I know, I'm sorry. I'll mind my words from the next time." Sharon said, catching Simmi's indication. "It's ok Shar, at least you will still have some authority right? Don't worry. It'll be all fine and anyways, believe me, once you'll know the inner Swayam, and he will understand the inner you, you both will get along really well. I can swear on that." Simmi said trying to console Sharon. "Hmm.. You know what, I really don't want to talk about him. I've already had enough of that guy." Sharon said, her eyes moist, which did not go unnoticed by Simmi. "Hey,usne kuch kaha kya?" Simmi asked, concerned. "I don't want to talk about it." Sharon said, sighing. "Hmm.. So miss Ex GS, how's the annual day prep going on?" Simmi said trying to divert Sharon's mind. "Ex. GS huh.. Well I do like that. And about the prep, the music performances are being rehearsed, and yeah, we need to audition for the dance team tomorrow." Sharon said, tiredness completely evident in her tone. Sharon was feeling quite uneasy and tired after the classroom fiasco she had with Swayam. "Heartless" was all that rang around her. Sharon was quite used to all sort of arguments  and fights but after today's with Swayam , she felt quite different and emotionally drained. "Dance team audition? It's not needed at all." Simmi's excited voice brought Sharon back to earth. "Huh?" Sharon asked, obviously confused. "I know whole group of fantabulous dancers in our college. They are quite crazy and chaotic, due to which you may have problem at beginning but they surely are fun and awesome people." Simmi said excitedly. "Ok. I don't mind it. Anyways I'm too tired and I kinda feel sick. So one work reduced I'll say. But yeah I'll need to seek permission from that moron before confirming it." Sharon said. "Will you stop cursing him? Please. It makes me feel kinda uncomfortable, you know." Simmi said. "Gosh!! I'm sorry. No cursing him from now on. At least not in front of you." Sharon replied. "Much better." Simmi said and chuckled.
"Hello?" The person on the other side picked up, laziness very much evident in his voice. "Simmi said me that she knows some awesome dancers from our college, and says that we don't need to audition for the dance team. I just called to ask if it's ok with you or not?" Sharon asked, maintaining her voice strictly professional. "You know what? I'm gonna note this date. I swear. Tum, Heartless Rai Prakash, mujhse I.e, selfish Swayam se permission mang rahi ho.. Wow.." Swayam said in a sarcastic, winning tone. "Is it ok with you or not?" Sharon asked, gritting her teeth, trying her level best not to throw her phone. "Yaa, Simmi had called me, I've already messaged her time, and tumhe bhi bata raha hu, tomorrow, rehearsal hall at 7 am. Sharp." Swayam said, tiredness quite evident in his voice as well.  "Ok." Sharon said and hung up.
"Mai iss shorts me acchi types dikh rahi hu na?" Simmi could hear one of her friend ask."Yaar, me so much excited. We dancing with The Swayam Shekhawat." She heard her other friend squealing with excitement. "Yup. Swayam Shekhawat, uska dance dekh kar hi Mai toh dance karne lag jati hu. And he is so hot." Kriya too joined in. "Arre yaar Kriya, tum bhi?" Simmi asked, amazed how all the girls were behaving so crazy. "Par jo bhi ho, mere Rey jaise toh koi nahi." Taani started, carried away with the excitement and chaos. Kriya who was smiling huge few moments back, gave a light smile to Taani. This did not go unnoticed by other girls, who did not want Kriya to go back to her old shell. "Waise, thank you so much Simmi, we really own this to you." Rinni smiled and said, surprised by the sudden silence. She being the most innocent one, did not even understand what was happening. "Yaa.. We all thanking you so much Simmi" Neha said, trying to go with the flow. "The pleasures all mine." Simmi smiled and replied.
"Guys Mai kaisa dikh raha hu?" Vicky asked,looking at the mirror and setting his hair. "Yaar, mereko toh Jana hi nahi hai. Suna hai dono ek number ke sadkele hai." Bharat said, ignoring Vicky. " Alle yaal, tharon ka attitude jaisa bhi ho, woh hai toh titne beautiful na?" Amar asked, lost in his Sharon dream land. "Haan yaar, baat toh tune Sahi ki hai." Nil added. "Yaar Vicky Amar, Neha aur Rinni ko bata du kya?" Rey said, irritated. "And Nil, agar ye abhi Sharon ne sun liya na toh wo tumhe sirf chaddi mein daudayegi pure college Mai." He added. "Yaar, tu toh kuch Bol hi mat, swami Rey." Nil replied. "Tum kamino ka kuch nahi ho sakta. Waise, dono dance toh dhashu karte hai. And waise bhi, hume annual day mein perform karne ko milega. I'm so happy guys." Rey said. "Yaa.. All thanks to Simmi. Pata nahi bechari ko kitne papad belne pade honge, un dono ko convince karne ke liye." Vicky said. "Papad toh ushe Roj belne padte honge be, bechari wo, dono ki best friend hai, aur dono itne khadus hai, pata nahi bantai kaise sambhalti hogi unko." Bharat said, in a sympathetic tone. "Tabhi toh wo meri Simmi hai.." Nil said in a dreamy tone. "Kis ki Simmi??" The other boys asked in a teasing tone. "Kamine" Rey murmured, smiling at his friends antics.
"God, I'm early. Abhi toh it's just 6. Still one hour left. Umm.. Kya karun? Kya karun?" Sharon was thinking out loud in the empty corridor. "Haan.. Thoda dance kar leti hu.. Warm up bhi ho jayega n thoda relax bhi feel hoga." Sharon said and started walking towards the rehearsal hall. Just as she was about to reach, she could hear loud yet soft music coming from the rehearsal hall. She was quite shocked as it was too early in the morning and even any students had not arrived. Sharon slowly went till the door and froze. There, Swayam was dancing his heart out, his movements depicting pain and anger. The mixed emotions could clearly be seen in his dance. And to top it the dance form was contemporary. Sharon had always thought Swayam as a free style performer, but he doing contemporary was not surprising to her because she knew and she understood how well the soft music and slow steps could sooth the wounded heart. Sharon did not want to spoil her day by arguing with Swayam early in the morning, so she decided to just roam around. Just as she was about to leave, she heard Swayam calling out to her.
"Wanna dance with me?" He asked. "In your dreams."  She gave a sharp reply.
 Please do read the note below

Edited by VrushanianAdity - 27 May 2015 at 9:59am

The following 32 member(s) liked the above post:


Sovereign_K IF-Rockerz

Joined: 10 July 2013
Posts: 9191

Posted: 27 May 2015 at 9:57am | IP Logged
Today im first... i commented before the pmLOL
Absolutely great part...loved it...Clap
it was so simple one... like it was not of much swaron but still was one refreshing one...
with much friendship and naughtiness Wink
Loved simmi.. in each part im loving her...Embarrassed
btw u have updated little bit long one this time...thanku for that Big smile
Loved it... update soon...waiting Day Dreaming

Keechu  :)

PS: i even commented before auther's noteROFL

Edited by --Keechu-- - 27 May 2015 at 10:00am
VrushanianAdity Groupbie

Joined: 24 January 2015
Posts: 185

Posted: 27 May 2015 at 9:58am | IP Logged
                                                            Author's Note
Miracles do happen don't they?? I replied to all the comments in the previous update.. Thank you all once again for so much appreciation..
I had got complaints that the last update was short.. I tried making this one as long as possible.. :)
Now, as I had said there's a surprise in this chap, as you all must have guessed, it was the entry of the D3 gang.. ;)
And yes the main reason for this note, 
Don't kill me for not giving so exclusive SwaRon moments or Swayam's revenge.. It'll be in the next chapter, I promise.. And as the next chapter is ready, and it took me loads of brainstorming, time and hard work, I have a demand just for this one chapter..
25+ likes and three pages of comments.. And no spamming.. I know you all will make that happen soon.. ;)
Adity :)

Edited by VrushanianAdity - 27 May 2015 at 10:11am

The following 9 member(s) liked the above post:


VReSHna IF-Rockerz

Joined: 16 November 2013
Posts: 9581

Posted: 27 May 2015 at 10:32am | IP Logged
Awww Adi How i Love it... D3 Revived with Fresh Life... i felt as if D3 is back again... You are Writing really well, So Proud... Keep it up :) Waiting For More :) 
aneesha93 Senior Member

Joined: 25 April 2014
Posts: 499

Posted: 27 May 2015 at 11:13am | IP Logged
Loved the update. There might not have been exclusive Swaron scenes but the update did justiceSmileI never thought the surprise would be D3 gang's entry. Nevertheless, I absolutely loved the surprise. Poor Simmi is trying to balance between Swayam and Sharon. Something tells me that Swayam is gonna make Sharon dance with him.
Thanks for the pm. Update soon.

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
SwaRon, SwaRon, SwaRon ^_^

Author: Legilimens.   Replies: 9   Views: 4732

Legilimens. 9 4732 15 February 2014 at 7:37pm by Iridescent.
PLEASE dont hurt our feeling CVS..and dont hurt us

Author: Magical_NaiRan   Replies: 7   Views: 938

Magical_NaiRan 7 938 29 July 2013 at 10:19am by BhaviJas
swaron swaron n only swaron

Author: HPHolic-3   Replies: 6   Views: 4917

HPHolic-3 6 4917 08 May 2012 at 4:32am by LiveEatLove
'I got hurt 'cause I let you hurt me'

Author: krittika23   Replies: 4   Views: 821

krittika23 4 821 24 April 2012 at 3:27pm by The007Shivani
swaron swaron swaron

Author: desigirl_VD   Replies: 2   Views: 3388

desigirl_VD 2 3388 15 December 2011 at 1:01am by -Sakina-

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels

Channel V Dil Dosti Dance Topic Index

Check these Celebrity also

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index