Channel V Dil Dosti Dance

SwaRon FF: Healing of the hurt souls. Part twenty one. PG 68. Updated. - Page 18

Created

Last reply

Replies

360

Views

71017

Users

44

Likes

896

Frequent Posters

sakshibshah thumbnail
Anniversary 11 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 8 years ago
Amazingly written chapter.
Swayam can't dance.?
I have a gut feeling it's related to breathing problem. :/
Not sure though, but would love to read what's in store.

Update soon.

Sakshi.
asthamehrotra thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Group Promotion 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Nice chapter I must say 😊 that Maggi part was funny πŸ˜† but really felling bad for swayam...kahi usey b asthma toh bhi h like in show Sharon ko tha 😲 really hoping for best nd looking forward to next update πŸ˜ƒ
VrushanianAdity thumbnail
Group Promotion 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: Ires011

Speechless... 

Thank you di,, :)
VrushanianAdity thumbnail
Group Promotion 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

Swayam is a gem yr
Caring nature
Loved it
The way he entered simmi's home...
Mask..goggles
Haha

They seems happy
Bt now what..
Update soon plz


Thank you,, :)
VrushanianAdity thumbnail
Group Promotion 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: prajana

Omg the update is awsome!!

U are an awsome writer
Not lovers but atleat swayam and sharon have become friends..thats great!!
Nd him cooking for her was cute
But the ending😲
What might have happened
Really curious
Update soon😊

Thank you so much.. :)
VrushanianAdity thumbnail
Group Promotion 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: vrushanlove

Nice update.loving the swaron bond...swayam caring shaon whn she ws down with fever is really cute...nw swayam is down...its sharons chance to support him...
Thankyou for the pm...waiting for the nxt

Thank you :)
VrushanianAdity thumbnail
Group Promotion 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: --Keechu--

Totally enjoyed reading itπŸ‘

amazing piece of writing... ur use of words was great...
and as u said it was unpredictable...and i love unpredictable story  πŸ˜‰
and i guessed whts gonna happen...lets see will my guess come out true or not πŸ˜›
and loved swayam here...he ls making me to admire him after each updates πŸ˜³
totally loved it...aww he was cooking for her..that was super cute and adorable...😳
now waiting for the next part...
update soon...take care

Keechu πŸ˜³

Thank you so much.. :)
VrushanianAdity thumbnail
Group Promotion 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: renu_vrushan

wow πŸ‘

this is what I want to say...

u r extremely talented girl seriously...

loved the update...

it was awesm

loved caring swayam...

why swayam cant dance...?

updats soon...

Thank you.. :)
VReSH thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: VrushanianAdity

Di.. Give some speech.. Waiting for a long comment from you..
:p

Adi there is so much that i wanna  say... so much... but ur writing jus makes me go tongue bound... u are writing Amazingly jus Brilliant... At this age, such potrayal of Such Emotions so strongly is Commendable... Truly u are gonna go a long way... Drawing, Dancing, Writing, u excel in all... i m jus so Proud... All i can Say is U have my Best Wishes Forever... Love u AdiπŸ€—
VrushanianAdity thumbnail
Group Promotion 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: tinku82

Beautifully written😊

Thank you.. :)