SwaRon FF: Healing of the hurt souls. Part twenty one. PG 68. Updated. - Page 17

LoveHopeMagic

@LoveHopeMagic

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Posted: 8 years ago

Totally enjoyed reading it👏

amazing piece of writing... ur use of words was great...

and as u said it was unpredictable...and i love unpredictable story 😉

and i guessed whts gonna happen...lets see will my guess come out true or not 😛

and loved swayam here...he ls making me to admire him after each updates 😳

totally loved it...aww he was cooking for her..that was super cute and adorable...😳

now waiting for the next part...

update soon...take care

Keechu 😳

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Renu Rajpurohit

@--RENU--

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Posted: 8 years ago

wow 👏

this is what I want to say...

u r extremely talented girl seriously...

loved the update...

it was awesm

loved caring swayam...

why swayam cant dance...?

updats soon...

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Aneesha

@aneesha93

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Posted: 8 years ago

Beautiful update. Loved how Swayam took care of Sharon when she was sick. It was too sweet😛. Them bonding well with each other (still arguing, which makes them the real Swayam and Sharon) and the gang. Very well penned.

He can't dance😲??? Why is that??. You said it right. Your story is unpredictable and I love it that way. Let me keep thinking why can't Swayam dance

Thanks for the pm. Update soon

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Trupti Tamore

@VruShan_FanGirl

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Posted: 8 years ago

Awsum upd yr adi

flashback was amazing n srly swayam came in tht costume hahaha

simmi n swaron bond ahha no words for it
kuch ho bt swaron won't stop fighting

y swayam is crying n y can't dance plz jaldi upd karna

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Anindita Ghosh

@flyinghigh_ani

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Posted: 8 years ago

Sorry aditi for being late...😭😭

My net is troubling me so much...

Coming to the update...

That was brilliantly written n thought...

Swayam came to meet sharon wearing mask!😆😆

N all the vrushan fans are gonna hug u tight for including that maggie wala part...

Was remembering vrushika!...n shantanu's expression...😆😆😆

Thanks for that...

And the entire chapter was so well written , neat , crisp n excellent language!...

Thank u so much for giving us this awesum story...

Pls update soon dear!...m very impatient!

Loads of love ani...

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

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Posted: 8 years ago

lovedd d edit... its beautiful...

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Trisha paul

@trisha19

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Posted: 8 years ago

Awesome update!! 👏

Loved the caring swayam ❤️

Pls pls pls update soon... eagerly waiting for the next chapter!!

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ujwal

@ujwal_v

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Posted: 8 years ago

Beautiful update

Sooo cute..it reminded me of swayam preparing breakfast fr sharon scene..

Loved the whole update

N maggie part😆

Why u ended der? I want to read..update fast

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ujwal

@ujwal_v

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: flyinghigh_ani
N all the vrushan fans are gonna hug u tight for including that maggie wala part...
Was remembering vrushika!...n shantanu's expression...😆😆😆

Yes yes yes😃

🤗

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--Ecstasy--

@--Ecstasy--

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Posted: 8 years ago

Swaron are bonding good.

They have started to understand each other so well now.

The Maggie part.. I remembered Vrushika iv when she said Maggie toh ban ho gayi..

So a new twist, something happened with swayam.. Why can't he dance?

Update soon.

Thanks

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