thanks that you updated.. and as promised i also updated today!!..
and as usual it was worth reading...
right from swayam's way of making sharon understand , simmi's self guilt and
saying sorry!!!!πππ
i so want a simmi -swayam convo... actually the idea of simmi being swayam's bestie instead of the usual rey just blows my mind!!... that's the thing i love the most in this story...π
and also how you manage to depict all the bonds so clearly for us to imagine , and each line is very crisp... as usual i won't comment about the language...ππ
i know , i don't know how to write good comments but i just tried to say whatever i feel...ππ
so in short i love this story...( you know that nowππ)
and i will keep blackmailing you until you update the next chapter!!!ππ
love you!!
ani
Edited by flyinghigh_ani - 8 years ago