SwaRon FF: Healing of the hurt souls. Part twenty one. PG 68. Updated. - Page 12

Omg...superb update...first ur song khamaka nahi...my fav swaron scene...the way they feel for each other ,the situation all were so clear..
Thankyou for the pm...waiting for the nxt update

khamakha...  is & wl als be special for all swaron fans...  memories, sweet memories... thanx a lottt for reminding me this...  

beautiful   well written   u described their emotions so well   amazing update                   thnxx for the pm   update soon

Firstly sry fr nt cmntng on last chaptr..
M busy wid my xams dats y m unable to do so...
Nw cmng to dis update..
It ws fab,awsum, mind-blowng nd wt not..
I dnt hv wrds to describe it...
As a reader i wnt to tel udis dat frm nw i bcm fan of ur writing...
Sng selectn ws too gud...
I cn actually visualize dem dancng...
Nd thr apologies to each othr...
Dnt knw y bt i found dis chptr calm der z no anger no revenge bt only swaron...:)
update soonish
Thnx fr pm

Adi its Perfect... the Somg, The Writing, The Flow... Jus Perfect... 

this was something unexpected..!!!

Hey..the update was awsome

This content was originally posted by: VrushanianAdity

                                                       Author's Note.

First of all thank you so much guys for the great response in the previous chapter. Though the demand of 3 pages of comments was not fulfilled, but the long and beautiful comments you all gave was enough for me.

Hope you all liked the update. I really don't know how's this because it's the first time I'm trying to write something based on a song. And above all, do let me know how was the song selection. I really could not find a better song than this.

And as promised there was only SwaRon in this chapter. About Swayam's revenge, I want my stories to be unpredictable, so it was the other way.

Hope ya all liked it. Please do let me know how was it.,

Regards,

Adity

OMG😳

Khamakha again☺️

It was just amaaazingg👏👍🏼

Awesome..loved it..everything from start to end was sooo❤️☺️

Their dance ...the way u explained..👏

nd ya they both apologized..very excited to read further

Awesome, awesome, awesome👏. This update was really great. How they both could see through each other's eyes, how they felt each other's pain and inner turmoil. Brilliantly executed. Loved how they showed their real self rather than their masked emotions after dance. Am in love with this FF and I more importantly loved this update. If this was your first attempt at writing based on a song, I say, do it more. The song selection was apt. Khamakha😳 . Kudos!