Originally posted by: ndcdanceloving it... (like a mcd burger.. :P)
swaron fight,...cute and spicy.. :D
Originally posted by: ndcdanceloving it... (like a mcd burger.. :P)
swaron fight,...cute and spicy.. :D
Originally posted by: vrushan143omg swayam gonna take revenge sharon .
story is going interesting lookin forward for next chap and thanks for pm
Originally posted by: aneesha93Wow, this chappy was filled with emotions. Loved the update. Swayam;s and Sharon's reaction and outburst were well written. Swayam's wants to take revenge on Sharon. Oh my. Can't wait to read the surprise.
Thanks for the pm. Update soon.
Originally posted by: --Keechu--Wow...
Im loving this story...u have written very beautifully dear,,,,but ur updates are so small ðŸ˜plzz try to update long one...not much long but an avg one plzzz😛...and now waiting for the next part...😳Keechu :)
Originally posted by: snehaswaron77wow this ff is becoming more & more interesting wid each updates...gosh i thought after getting to know abt their past they wud stop fighting...but yaha toh kuch aur hi ho raha hain...wating to know how the story unfolds..update soon...
Originally posted by: taaD3yamnice chsp update soon thnxx for the pm
Originally posted by: RockingbhardwajWell written
Swaron convo was fab
Originally posted by: AnanyaVruShanwowww... lovely... swaron scene ws fab... keep up d gd writing... wl wait fr ur next update 😊
Originally posted by: Vani20Sharon demoted from Google post and new GS is swayam.
This will be interesting..Swaron fight and Sharon's outburst related to her family.So now swayam wants revenge.Very well written update.Update soon.
Originally posted by: ujwalvawesome update n emotional too
loving this storyexcited abt the next updates
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