AlZia SS "Andekhi mohobbat" Part 5 pg 6 - Page 4

Posted: 8 years ago
Part_4

Altunia remained silent, confused. Razia came close to him  and looked into his eyes.

Razia; boliye mirza, kon he aapki sachi mohobbat? hum ya  phir mohtarma?

Altunia lowered his gaze, he sat down on a rock and put  his hands on his face covering it.

He then stood up and coming to Razia he said

Altunia; hum aapse mohobbat krte hen shehzadi,  mohtarma to hamari achi dost thi bas

Razia was shocked and angry, she pushed him

Razia; aap jhoot bol rhe hen, humne aapki ankhon me unke  liye pyaar dekha he

ALtunia; nahi shehzadi wo pyar aapke liye tha

Razia; nahiii...aap mohtarma se hi mohobbat krte hen

Altunia; pr shehzadi hum..

Razia; nahi..(she held mirza's collars) aap humse mohobbat  nhi krte smjhe aap, aap kr hi nahi skte , humse ek mulaqaat  me mohobbat nhi hoskti aapko, aap mohtarma se hi  mohobbat krte hen mirza hosh me aayie

Altunia; ama ajeeb aurat hen aap, hamari mohobbat ko  thukrana hi hai to aise hi thukra dijiye ye kahan ka insaaf  he k hamari mohobbat hi badal rhi hen aap

Razia; aap samjh nhi rhe, hum aapki mohobbat ko nhi  thukra rhe

Altunia; dekhiye shehzadi, aapko hamari mohobbat qubool  he to kahiye ye baten ghumaiye mat

Razia; hum baten nhi ghuma rhe, aap..aap aur mohtarma  kitne qareeb a chuke the na, aapne hi to kaha tha k aap k  dil ka hissa he wo 

Altunia; haan to yaar dost dil ka hissa hote hen, aap ajeeb  hen shehzadi, hum aapse mohobbat ka izhaar kr rhe hen  aur aap ko mohtarma ki padi he

Razia; aap smjh kyun nhi rhe...acha hum aapse niqaah  krlenge aap ki har baat manenge bas maan jayie ke aap  mohtarma se mohobbat krte hen

Altunia; ama dunya me aap akeli aisi aurat hongi jo khud  soutan ka intizam kr rhi hen, humse niqah bhi manzoor he  agr hum mohtarma se ishq ka izhar kren, hua kya he  aapko?

Razia; aap haan to kahiye, aap sb smjh jayenge

Altunia; dekhiye shehzadi, hum jhoot nhi bolte, aapko jo  smjhna he smjh lijiye

Razia; theek he jb tak aap nhi manenge k aap mohtarma se  mohobbat krte hen hum bhi aapka ishq manzoor nhi  krenge

Altunia; mat keejiye, ab ghode pe to beth jayie wrna us  budhe k sipahi phir ajayenge

they climbed the horse again and set off.

Razia was sad and thinking how to convince him.

"ye mirza, kuch smjhte hi nahi, agr esa hi tha to hamare  itne qareeb kyun aye kyun mohtarma mohtarma krte unki  zaban nhi thakti, ajeeb insaan hen ye, kese smjhayen inhe  hum" she kept thinking.

Razia; hamen bhook lagi he, thakawat ho rhi he kahin  rukiye aap

Altunia; koi basti aaye to rukte hen

Razia; jee

"hamara bas chale to inka yahin qatl kr k gaad den, koi itna  bewaquf kese hoskta he, apni mohobbat ko hi na  pehchane, khair..mirza aap jaante nhi aapne kis aafat se  mohobat krli he, ab aapki khair nhi he, hum aapko ehsas  krwa k rahenge k aap humse nhi balke humse mohobbat  krte hen" she thought 

Altunia; aap abhi tak ghusse me hen kya shehzadi? 

Razia; nahi nahi, hum to bas aapka imtihaan le rhe the

ALtunia; wahi to hum soch rhe the ek aurat dusri aurat pe  itni meherbaan kese

Razia smiled, "hamari meherbani ka to aapko andaza hi nhi  mirza, aapko ehsas na krwa diya to hum bhi apne abu ki  beti nhi" she said in her head

They reached a small village and then Altunia went to get  some food for her, when he was returning he heard some  woman talk

Woman1; Allah Rehem kre us bechari pr, sach me bada  afsos ho rha he, keede paden us budhe sultan yaldoz ko

Woman2; sach me, shehzadi to bhaag gai ab us masum  ladki ki kya galti thi

Altunia dropped the food in shock and rushed to the  woman who were talking

Altunia; kon ladki kya hua? hamen bhi btaiye

Woman1; are kuch nhi miyan, wo sultan yaldoz, usne delhi  ki shehzadi se niqah krna tha na, wo to bhaag gai pr

Altunia; par kya? (he was getting restless)

Woman2; to ghusse me aake us budhe ne ek masu ladki k  saath zabardasti shadi krli

Altunia; kon ladki? (he was sweating now and panting)

Woman1; thi koi bechari ladki, multan se ghazni gai thi  kuch madat maangne sultan se, bechari suna he badi  mushqil se pohnchi thi aur us sultan ne..tauba

Altunia yelled, "nahiii...mohtarmaaa"

Razia smiled from a little distance.
Posted: 8 years ago
Bravo,Bravo,Bravo,SonuπŸ‘
This is AFSAW!!!!!πŸ‘πŸ‘

So,finally Mirza said that he loves Shehzaadi but Shehzaadi tried to make him realise his love for MohatarmaπŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Best part was that when Razia told Mirza that she will marry him only if he accepts his love for MohatarmaπŸ˜†πŸ˜³

And when Mirza came to know from the ladies that buddha might have got married to his Mohatarma tab uska haal dekhne layak tha🀣
Its all Shehzaadi's plan,isn't it?πŸ˜‰
Achcha sabak sikhaya buddhu Mirza ko πŸ˜†.Though,eventually Mohatarma ke saath Shehzaadi combo pack main mil jayegi usseπŸ˜†

And The Quote Of This Update Is-''ab aapki khair nhi he, hum aapko ehsas  krwa k rahenge k aap humse nhi balke humse mohobbat  krte hen''🀣🀣🀣
Posted: 8 years ago
Haye sonu jaan.. kya update hain..πŸ‘
Ye mahotarma aur shehzadi ka confusion bara kamal hain..πŸ˜†. an di loved it thoroughly... budhu mirza... aur Razia..🀣... first time i am seeing some one geting jealous of her own...πŸ˜†... shehzadi nee mirza ki confusion itna bara diya ki bechare kaa sar ghoom raha hoga sayad...πŸ€ͺ..last scene was the best... mirza chali mohtarma ke pass...πŸ˜†
Posted: 8 years ago
Razia ...🀣
bechare mirza ki ab toh khair nahiπŸ˜† mirza ne toh ab uss budhe ka katl hi kar dena haiπŸ˜†
sonu u r amazing ...! 
i m still laughing imagining the condition of mirza right now... πŸ˜†
Posted: 8 years ago
Wonderful update Sonu!πŸ‘ β­οΈ
Yeh AlZia bhi nah ...mohhabat ka izhaar bhi kar liye aur ek had tak Razo ne qabul bhi kar liye par Mirza ko samajh nahin aa raha hai ke woh apni liye sautan kyun chahti hai.🀣
These two can never make things simple eh. Dono ziddi jo hai. Aur Mirza ka dil aur dimag abhi confusion mein hi hai.πŸ˜›
Ab bas Mirza Buddhe ko ja ke maar le...kam se kam aapki ss mein toh buddhe ko maarna chahiye.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by ifians


Haye sonu jaan.. kya update hain..πŸ‘
Ye mahotarma aur shehzadi ka confusion bara kamal hain..πŸ˜†. an di loved it thoroughly... budhu mirza... aur Razia..🀣... first time i am seeing some one geting jealous of her own...πŸ˜†... shehzadi nee mirza ki confusion itna bara diya ki bechare kaa sar ghoom raha hoga sayad...πŸ€ͺ..last scene was the best... mirza chali mohtarma ke pass...πŸ˜†
😳 thnkx riu
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by ..radiance...


Razia ...🀣
bechare mirza ki ab toh khair nahiπŸ˜† mirza ne toh ab uss budhe ka katl hi kar dena haiπŸ˜†
sonu u r amazing ...! 
i m still laughing imagining the condition of mirza right now... πŸ˜†
thnx πŸ˜³
Posted: 8 years ago
Part_5

Altunia ran towards his horse, Razia stopped him

Razia; kya hua aap itni jaldi me kahan ja rhe hen?

Altunia; (panting) shehzadi jaldi chaliye...wo ...wo ..hamari mohtarma...us budhe ne...hamari mohtarma

He had tears in his eyes

Razia; mohtarma? to wo aurten aapki us mohtarma ki baat kr rhi theen, chaliye acha hi hua, aap to wese bhi unse mohobbat nhi krte the na, ab wo ghazni ki malika ban gai acha hi hua

Altunia; nahiii, hum us budhe ko maar dalenge

Razia; ab kya faida mirza ab bewa krenge kya apni dost ko aap

Altunia looked at her in anger, tears fell from his eyes and he broke down on the floor, covering his face he started crying like a child, Razia sat down and tried to console him

ALtunia; aap sahi keh rhi theen shehzaadi, hum...hum apni mohtarma se boht mohobbat krte hen, pr...hamari ankhen ab khuli jb unhe hum ne kho diya he, ek ko bachane k chaqqar me dusri...mohtarmaaa

Razia; pr mirza agr aap unhe bachayenge to humara kya hoga

Altunia hugged her.

Altunia; museebat to ye he k hum aap se bhi bht mohobbat krte hen, ye kesa dil he hamara jo do tuqdon me bat gya he, humne to suna tha mohobbat ek baar hti he kisi ek se hti he pr ek waqt pe do log..aur dono k peeche wo budha yaldoz, usne humse hamari mohtarma ko cheen liya, hum uska qatal kiye bagair reh nhi payenge

Razia cupped his face in her hers.

Razia; mirza..mirza humari baat suno, hamari ankhon me dekho, tumhen kon dikhai deta he, mohtarma ya shehzaadi

he looked up and was shocked, they were lost in each other's eyes, and then she slowly removed her veil.

Altunia couldn't believe his eyes, his mohtarma and shehzadi were not separate but one single person, that's why he loved both, his heart recognized her but he didn't.

Altunia; mohtarma?

Razia nodded

Altunia; shehzadi?

Razia nodded again, he hugged her again and looked up to thank God.

Altunia; hamen btaya kyun nhi aapne, kyun hamare saath ye luka chuppi ka khel khelti rhi ghazni se yahan tak?

Razia; hum chahte the ke aap humse mohobbat kren, hamari asli pehchaan se jise aap mohtarma kehte hen, shehzadi se mohobbat krte to hamen acha nhi lagta

Altunia; kitni pagal hen na aap, shehzadi ho ya mohtarma humne to mohobbat ki he in ankhon se, jin me haya he nasakat he tehzeeb he aur na bujhne wali aag he, phir wo mohtarma ho ya shehzadi kya farq padta he

Razia held her ears

Razia; acha to maaf krdijiye

Altunia; itni asaani se maaf krden? (he said in a flirty voice)

Razia blushed she pulled him close by holding his shirt, and then held her face close, their lips were inches away from each other, he closed his eyes, she kissed his cheek instead and ran away. He opened his eyes and smiled, she showed him her thumb and laughed. He ran behind her.

Razia; aap hamen nhi pakad payenge

Altunia; pakad lenge, hum abhi boht jawan he us budhe ki tarah laathi pe nhi a rhe pakadne

he caught her arm and pulled her close.

Altunia; agai na hamari qaid me phirse

Razia; haan

Altunia; is qaid se niqal nhi payengi aap

Razia; niqalna kisko he

he held her tight and kissed her forehead.

Razia; yahin niqah padhne ka irada he kya janab?

Altunia; irada bura nhi he

Razia; pr humen apne ghar walon k saamne niqah krna he

ALtunia; wo to us budhe k himaiti hain na

Razia; abu hamara saath zarur denge, chalen?

Altunia; nahi diya to hum wahan se bhi uda k le ayenge aapko

she smiled and they set off for Delhi

_____The END_____
Posted: 8 years ago
An amazing end to an amazing story.πŸ‘
So,finally Mirza realises that he can't manage without both Mohatarma and Shehzaadi😳
Loved Mirza's realization and their playful romance.
Its perfect!!πŸ‘ Mirza got his Shehzaadi as well as his Mohatarma and tharki buddha got thengaπŸ˜†
The Quote Of This Update Is-'kitni pagal hen na aap, shehzadi ho ya mohtarma humne to mohobbat ki he in ankhon se, jin me haya he nasakat he tehzeeb he aur na bujhne wali aag he, phir wo mohtarma ho ya shehzadi kya farq padta he'πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Bas ab sirf ek shiqayat hai,yeh buddha mara kyun nahin?? 

But forget it,this was really an amazing SS.

But am I forgetting something??? Let me guess.Oh,yes!!
AFSAW,AFSAW,and AFSAW foreverπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘


Posted: 8 years ago
wow what an ending sonu jaan..πŸ‘
Mirza is torn btwn mahotarm nd shehzadi. without knowing that both r same...πŸ˜†.. poor guy... razia ne confuse kar diya ussey... but chalo finally all confusion is over.. mirza koo pata chal gaya ki mahotarma hi shehzadi hain and vice verse..πŸ˜†.. i so loved the moment when the truth was reveled i can clearly imagine mirza's shocked face...
love there cute knok jhok at the end... ur ss is alwys treat to read and leave its mark very well in readers mind... i will miss this ss...but waiting for ur new one...😳
claps for such an wonderful story sonu jaan//πŸ‘πŸ‘

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