AlZia SS "Andekhi mohobbat" Part 5 pg 6 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago

Sonu this SS is so superb. 👏

It so funny how he constantly keeps comparing Shehzadi to Mohtarma and Razo shifts between being jealous of herself to feeling proud that he keeps complimenting her. 😆

Mirza doh khasti mein shiwar..ek shehzadi ko kisi aur ka hone nahin denge aur mohtarma ko bhi nahin bhul sakte.

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Posted: 8 years ago

This content was originally posted by: bhabhijaan
Sonu this SS is so superb. 👏
It so funny how he constantly keeps comparing Shehzadi to Mohtarma and Razo shifts between being jealous of herself to feeling proud that he keeps complimenting her. 😆
Mirza doh khasti mein shiwar..ek shehzadi ko kisi aur ka hone nahin denge aur mohtarma ko bhi nahin bhul sakte.

Thanks bhabhi jaan🤗 read my previous one too😳 mirza is gonna be in a mess and razo would start envying herself lol

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overactor

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Posted: 8 years ago

This content was originally posted by: ifians
Loved MIrza's confusion between mahotarma and shehzadi...😆...
Aww razo blushing listening to her own tariif😛... mirza gets shocked seeing sehzadi's fighting skills😆
loving the story further.,. gr8 work and cont asap👏

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Posted: 8 years ago

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It was getting dark so Altunia decided to stop somehwere and conincidently they arrived at the same motel they had stayed earlier, the receptionist smiled.

Receptionist; kamal he miyan, tum wapas bhi agaye aur is dafa doosri khatoon k saath?

Altunia made a face, Razia smiled.

Altunia; ama andhe ho kya tum, khatoon wahi he bas ab libaas badal gya he, wo kya he na, hum dono ne niqaah krliya to ab nayi naveli dulhan shauhar se pehle kisi ko apna chehra kese dikhayegi

Razia rolled her eyes, "khud ko dikhai nhi deta aur dusron ka mazaq bna rhe hen" she thought

Receptionist; ab miyan tum niqaah kr k aaye hot to tumhen acha kamra to dena hi hoga

They were provided with a good room but with a single bed

Altunia; humne jhoot keh diya, hum yahan zameen pe sojayenge aap palang pe aaram farmaiye, aap ka parda, hum udhar mun kr k rakhenge aapki taraf nahi dekhenge aap parda utar k aram se sojaiye

Razia; nahi koi baat nhi humen parde me neend ajayegi

Razia lay on the bed and stared at him, he was soon asleep.

Razia smiled , she recalled the moments they spent in this same motel.

"kitni ajeeb si kaifiyat he mirza, hum aapke saath hen par kitni dooriyan hen darmiyaan, par ye dooriyan zaruri hen, ta k hum jaan sken aapke dil ka haal" she thought.

In the morning when she woke up she saw him setting the breakfast

"are shehzadi aap jaag gai, jaldi se ja k gusal kr lijiye, yahan hamam ka intizam to ho nhi paya pr gusul khana bilkul saaf he aap jaiye, tab tak hum nashte k liye dastar khwan lagate hen" he said with a smile

She nodded, she returned after the bath and sat down.

"ye sab aapne banaya he?" she asked trying to sound curious

"jee humne banaya hai, nacheez k haath ka zaiqa chakh k bataiye kesa laga" he gave her some food, she hesitated

Altunia; hum bhi na, hum uthar mun kr lete hen aap itminaan se kha lijiye, aapke parde ka ehtaram krte hen hum.

Razia took a jalebi and smiled, she recalled their almost kiss and blushed bad.

Razia; jalebiyan boht umda banni hen

Altunia; aapko bhi jalebiyan pasand hen? hamari mohtarma ko bhi bht pasand thi, wo to esi deewani hui thi hamari jalebiyon ki k hamen tak haath na lagane de rhi thi, baantna to unhe ata hi na tha, bas jo unka he wo bas unka he

Razia smiled, yes she could never share any of her belongings, and when it came to him, she could never even share a jalebi that he made with any1 not even with him.

Razia; ab chalen?

Altunia; haan chaliye mohtarma

Razia; jee?

Altunia; mera matlab shehzaadi

They left the motel and got back on their horse.

Altunia; wo mohtarma, pta he aapko, mard ban k hamare saath kafile me ghus gai thi, ajeeb harqaten thi unki

he kept on telling her stories of his journey with mohtarma.

Razia; aapki baaton se lagta he k aapke dil k bht qareeb he wo mohtarma

Altunia; qareeb? wo to hamare dil ka ek hissa hen

Razia blushed. Suddenly their was an attack on them but the arrow missed them.

Altunia; budhe k sipahi phir agaye

He got off the the horse and started fighting

Soldier; chod de shehzadi ko namuraad, ye Sultan Yaldoz ki hone wali malika he

Altunia's eyes went red with anger, he fumed and punched the soldier hard.

Altunia; shehzadi sirf hamare dil ki malika hen samjhe, kisine unki taraf aankh bhi utha k dekha to ankhen niqal dega ye deewana

He fought with them all and they ran away

Soldier; bhago miyan ye deewana waqai hum sbko ek jhatke me maar dalega, Sultan ko dusri malika miljayegi pr hamari biwaiyon ko dusra shauhar nhi milega

Razia stood shocked, "dil ki malika" the words rang in her ears, Altunia came to her and grabbed her shoulders

Altunia; aap theek to hain na shehzadi

Razia looked into his eyes

Razia; aapne abhi kya kaha? hum..hum aapke dil ki malika hen?

Altunia smiled

Altunia; haan shehzadi, hum to tab hi apna dil haar bethe the jab humne aapko dargah main pehli baar dekha tha

Razia; agar aapke dil ki malika hum hen..to mohtarma kis dil ka hissa hen?

Altunia was shocked at her words...

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Posted: 8 years ago

Soldier; bhago miyan ye deewana waqai hum sbko ek jhatke me maar dalega, Sultan ko dusri malika miljayegi pr hamari biwaiyon ko dusra shauhar nhi milega

🤣

This update was AFSAW till infinity.👏 And Razia's last sentence was completely apt.Now he has to choose between Mohatarma and Shehzaadi

Iss update ko mila 11/10.👏👏

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Posted: 8 years ago

This content was originally posted by: Astoria
Soldier; bhago miyan ye deewana waqai hum sbko ek jhatke me maar dalega, Sultan ko dusri malika miljayegi pr hamari biwaiyon ko dusra shauhar nhi milega
🤣

This update was AFSAW till infinity.👏 And Razia's last sentence was completely apt.Now he has to choose between Mohatarma and Shehzaadi
Iss update ko mila 11/10.👏👏

ash 🤗 u can't expect what would happen next😈

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BabyHimavari

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Posted: 8 years ago

God how can i forget about that motel...😆... receptionist see jhooth kahe diya...and subha mein breakfast... aye haye.. bara hii cute hain apna mirza...😳... kash humein bhi aisa koi mil jayein..
chor yaar riu...😕... sab ki murad thorri hii naa poori hoti hain...
ab apni dukhbhari kahani koo bazoo mein rakhte huyin update pe dhyan de...😆

i agree with ash... the soldier part was best and hilarioua... they are r8... budha can have so many mallikas but their biwiyan can't have more sauhars😆

and last scene... wow😳, razo was so r8... abtoo bechara mirza mahotarma aurr shehzadi ke beach mein sandwitch ban jayega!!😆

wonderful blockbuster update as usual...😛

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fm05

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IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 8 years ago

Sonu aap ki sense of humour toh kamal ka hain 👏

Mujhe bhi Ash aur Ria ki tarah woh soldier ka dialogue pe bahut haasi aayi.😆

Mirza toh aapne dil ki do hissen toh nahin kar baithe..ek shehzaadi ke hogaya aur ek mohtarma ke liye.😛 Banda confusion mein phas gaya.

Waise your fic makes me miss AlZia carefree days when she was just his mohtarma. Mirza ko bhi har cheez mein Mohtarma hi yaad aati hain. So cute.

Awesome and very fun and witty update. Continue soon.😃

Edited by bhabhijaan - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago

This content was originally posted by: ifians
God how can i forget about that motel...😆... receptionist see jhooth kahe diya...and subha mein breakfast... aye haye.. bara hii cute hain apna mirza...😳... kash humein bhi aisa koi mil jayein..
chor yaar riu...😕... sab ki murad thorri hii naa poori hoti hain...
ab apni dukhbhari kahani koo bazoo mein rakhte huyin update pe dhyan de...😆

i agree with ash... the soldier part was best and hilarioua... they are r8... budha can have so many mallikas but their biwiyan can't have more sauhars😆

and last scene... wow😳, razo was so r8... abtoo bechara mirza mahotarma aurr shehzadi ke beach mein sandwitch ban jayega!!😆

wonderful blockbuster update as usual...😛

😃

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overactor

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IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 8 years ago

This content was originally posted by: bhabhijaan
Sonu aap ki sense of humour toh kamal ka hain 👏
Mujhe bhi Ash aur Ria ki tarah woh soldier ka dialogue pe bahut haasi aayi.😆

Mirza toh aapne dil ki do hissen toh nahin kar baithe..ek shehzaadi ke hogaya aur ek mohtarma ke liye.😛 Banda confusion mein phas gaya.

Waise your fic makes me miss AlZia carefree days when she was just his mohtarma. Mirza ko bhi har cheez mein Mohtarma hi yaad aati hain. So cute.

Awesome and very fun and witty update. Continue soon.😃

thank BJ 😆

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