THREAD 3; "Journey To Be Together" - Page 5

Lolor have u been reading my comments because u wrote pretty much same thing I did I did.great minds or should I say gutter minds think alike. Sugi yeh boxers ko wapas pehnado ghoday ko . He needs the magic of the boxers to come out of retirement and do all those rounds with his wifey so much more important than his lifey. 😉 😆 ghoda wants to gallop freely in the pasture set him free with his magical disappearing and reappearing boxers 😆Edited by sunyy - 8 years ago

Awesome amazing fantastic and most importantly very very heart touching updates.A good writer is the one who touches the soul of the readers in a more realistic approach but with a great depth of emotions and feelings with the right amount of passion and the usage of good language.u had literally hypotenuses our souls and got us glued to the lappy by the last few mesmerising chappies.this truly confirms ur efficiency and the perfection of ur skills in writing.throughout the reading,we could feel the sadness the happiness and the pain of Ragna as if they are enacting those scenes before us and not the mere reading experience of the fictional characters.            What the wonderful and the realistic portrayal of kalpis feelings!!!!!! Her state of confusion and desperation ,the helplessness and looking for a right support for her guidance,all were truly awesome awesome.i was thinking for a moment putting myself in that situation.and gauri seems to be a smart and sensible over here.@. Rags is one step ahead of Kalpi.from her changed behaviour and her sudden increased care and concern towards him the frequent filling up of her eyes and the unexpected fear of losing a precious thing in her life makes him to understand her unsaid feelings towards him.but as a true aashiqui and a loving husband,he wants his chatterbox to say those important three golden words that lightens up his soul and life.kalpi will be no lesser than her bulldozer when it comes to a third person unnecessarily trying to be extra sweeter to him or insulting him,even that person can be her aai or that horse faced psycho.a big sure to u for writing that line when Kalpi yelled at her aai and told her very clearly that the psycho shouldn't flirt or hug her husband.otherwise she won't think for a second to strangle her with her bare hands.very very eagerly waiting for that cherishing update when the confused soul confess her true feelings towards her handsome bulldozer and how will he reciprocate them??? And also for that nasty incident before the fire broke out and halted the wedding.

Originally posted by: zindgidilse

@shona baby

dare u said again that ur comment was not upto the mark,😡

aur kaisa comment chahiye tujhe 😆

u r lucky that u r commenting unlike me 😃

ritu darling, dnt knw i didnt feel satisfy with my cment😒
I mean itna fabulous update pe jo cment ana chahiye tha woh ni he, and upar 2 pic post nhi hue

oye mera cment tera b he, toh u too cmenting, understand😡Edited by Sh0Nali - 8 years ago

Hey dear, firat of all congratulations for ur 3rd thread. N now about the story. Superb updatem but dis bloody kamla n pakhi are back... i want kamla to know the truth about that night ( n we also wanna know the truth). I want kalpi to stand for her love for her raghav. Bahoot kuch hai mann main which i want in dis ff but no worda to explain... plzzz wright it in a proper way as u r writing till now...

page 5 filled with emotions  do check 😆

Originally posted by: _Santhi_

page 5 filled with emotionsdo check😆

Santhi i love ur emotions 🤗

Originally posted by: _Santhi_

page 5 filled with emotionsdo check😆

santhi u r an emoticon addict not me . Ritu give my title to santhi

Originally posted by: deepu90

santhi u r an emoticon addict not me . Ritu give my title to santhi

no deepu, title will remain urs only...😳

Originally posted by: zindgidilse

no deepu, title will remain urs only...😳

its my shona baby nd santhi's style of commenting on sudhi's stories.😆

hey i'm oly emoticon addict ha ha .