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SwaRon OS: Carrying The Weight (Page 3)

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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 10:04am | IP Logged
I don't know what to say.. You bought back picture of whole sceneiro.. I miss my SwaRon Cry
Well written as always Thumbs Up
Loved both povs..

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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 1:08pm | IP Logged
just love swayam's pov
wow what a walk down the memory lane
 the Sharon Rai Prakash and the Swayam ShekhawatThumbs Up

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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
As usual amazing piece of writing:)
It was very well penned :)
#RefreshedMemories ^____^

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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 6:38am | IP Logged
Nishi, this was Sheer awesomeness. Brilliant writeup, again. I am actually very delighted with your Oneshots these days. Memories. Sweet and Bitter, you brink them back.
This particular track was immensely intense. Swayam being the rock hard, cold person who was badly broken after Sharon's denial of their relationship infront of their friends. His life had collapsed, tumbled down and he wished to dissapear from the world there and then.
I absolutely loved Swayam's POV. I actually feel you write his side of story in a unique way of perfection. Beautifully penned. I am always on Swayam's side, whatever the case may be :)

Yes now you actually know how to keep your readers hooked. The way you connect to both the characters in the show is Brilliance. Such Genius use of diction depicting the agony both of them were going through, Brilliance. Absolute one.
Keep writing.
-Ayushi

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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 9:06am | IP Logged
First of all amazing Banner Clap, Intense one...
@ psychobaiko. Great work dear...


Goosshhh
Nishii this is amazing...Clap
i never used to read loudly, i always read in my mind but for the first time i read it loudly gosh,,,it made such an impact on me ... awesome writing... appreciating use of words...i was reliving those scene which took my heart that day and today ur this work did...it made me to realize how deeply swaron effect us on our life...
I miss themCry... I never thought this form swayam's side...they showed as sharon's feelings but from swayam its brilliant...
i love the part most where swayam's feeling..the start...that was very well written...Thumbs Up...
Amazing Clap


~Keechu


Edited by --Keechu-- - 16 May 2015 at 8:53am

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riachawlalko Senior Member
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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 9:07am | IP Logged
wow...amazing piece of work
i really enjoy reading sad one shots...dnt know why bt i do
n everytym i read one such os...my interest grows further n when the os is written by you...its like a cherry on the cake
loved it :)
beautifully described emotions
this tym more than swayams pov i liked sharon's pov
all in all...it was a gr8 os
keep writing more
n thanks fr d pm :)

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P.s- I adore the BannerHeart

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