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SwaRon OS: Carrying The Weight (Page 2)

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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
Memories...
Oh this is great
Swaron emotions.
.hurt..
Pain
Is penned beautifully

Thanks 4 d pm

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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
& she did get her swayam back...  Big smile   loved it re...  memories r indeed very sweet...  loved ur os... keep writing moreee 
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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 8:16pm | IP Logged
omg this is scene it was heartbreaking
arghhh ...your just awesome u wrote it very well
i can feel their pain it was emotional
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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 9:47pm | IP Logged
Omg it was soo intense!!
It was as if i was going through all these emtions while reading..such a gud writer you are
How beautifully you manage to write such emotional stuff 
Do write moreSmile
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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 10:14pm | IP Logged
that was a very painful scene and u penned it beautifully!
swayam's pov was really great,sharon's was good too..
 
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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 12:51am | IP Logged
Amazing OS

went in past :-)

luved SwaRon's POV

miss dm a lot ...OS,SS & FF pe ji rahi hu

thanx a lot for OS

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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 3:57am | IP Logged

 awesome..ClapThumbs Up

U described that scene sooo beautifully..totally loved it

After reading this missing d3 nd  swaron more..Cry missing vrushan

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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 8:50am | IP Logged
Brilliance. Absolute, sheer brilliance. 
You are one writer who is capable of making the reader laugh her wits out or almost burst in to tears. You do understand that in other words I imply that you create such a brutal connect with the characters, that the reader cannot but help feeling the same way. Genius, absolute, utter, sheer genius. 

This track in the show was one of my favorites. It was the struggle from the other side to let their relationship to breathe. To bring it back to normalcy. And you scribbled it with such diction, I absolutely, completely loved it. 

Keep Writing more Nishi. 
N.

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