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SwaRon OS: Carrying The Weight - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
omg this is scene it was heartbreaking
arghhh ...your just awesome u wrote it very well
i can feel their pain it was emotional

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Posted: 8 years ago
Omg it was soo intense!!
It was as if i was going through all these emtions while reading..such a gud writer you are
How beautifully you manage to write such emotional stuff 
Do write more๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 8 years ago
that was a very painful scene and u penned it beautifully!
swayam's pov was really great,sharon's was good too..
 
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing OS

went in past :-)

luved SwaRon's POV

miss dm a lot ...OS,SS & FF pe ji rahi hu

thanx a lot for OS
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Posted: 8 years ago

 awesome..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

U described that scene sooo beautifully..totally loved it

After reading this missing d3 nd  swaron more..๐Ÿ˜ญ missing vrushan

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Posted: 8 years ago
Brilliance. Absolute, sheer brilliance. 
You are one writer who is capable of making the reader laugh her wits out or almost burst in to tears. You do understand that in other words I imply that you create such a brutal connect with the characters, that the reader cannot but help feeling the same way. Genius, absolute, utter, sheer genius. 

This track in the show was one of my favorites. It was the struggle from the other side to let their relationship to breathe. To bring it back to normalcy. And you scribbled it with such diction, I absolutely, completely loved it. 

Keep Writing more Nishi. 
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Posted: 8 years ago
I don't know what to say.. You bought back picture of whole sceneiro.. I miss my SwaRon ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Well written as always ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
Loved both povs..

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Posted: 8 years ago
just love swayam's pov
wow what a walk down the memory lane
 the Sharon Rai Prakash and the Swayam Shekhawat๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

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Posted: 8 years ago
As usual amazing piece of writing:)
It was very well penned :)
#RefreshedMemories ^____^
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Posted: 8 years ago