a nibir story- 3 shot part 3 (last part)updated on page 5 - Page 4

shinelove

@shinelove

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Posted: 8 years ago

👏 really it was a great story ..and that sumit part really just hate him ..hope in show also all the cousins with viraj kabir does the same with him..

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poo10

@poo10

Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

What an ending...loved it
Awesome story 👏
Loved whistling kabir... 😆

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@Klaustrophillic

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Posted: 8 years ago

so last part updated...thought of writing some more but...it was getting too long so stopped myself there...how was it ...do comment guyzzz...!!!

happy reading...!!!😃

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@Klaustrophillic

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Posted: 8 years ago

thank you guyzzz...will try to write some more nibir stories soon...!!!!

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Niharika

@Niha0606

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Awesome ending.Totally loved it 👏 👏 👏
Please do write more nibir stories 😊 Edited by Niha205 - 8 years ago

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761220

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Posted: 8 years ago

Aww beautiful ending

Loved it

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@Klaustrophillic

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Posted: 8 years ago

thankk uuu...will write some more soon...😃

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Lakshmi G Reghunath

@-Ila-

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Posted: 8 years ago

i have read the whole thing in one go...loved it and kya entry maari hai yaar forum mei?...your concept is awesome...and dhamakka ending👏

PS- last part ki sound effect was really cool...Dishum dhamm😉

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mansi

@mansi_as18

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 8 years ago

whistle blowing just like kabir... awesome update

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ammu4u

@ammu4u

IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 8 years ago

nice part👏...ek ki part main 3 couples👍🏼

do write moree

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