a nibir story- 3 shot part 3 (last part)updated on page 5 - Page 2

Posted: 8 years ago
Wow..loved it..please continue soon..!!!! 😛
Posted: 8 years ago
I didn't knew that I will get such Responses...good to know that you all are interested in it...will try to post the second part before tomorrow evening...
Posted: 8 years ago
PART - 2
Nisha was crying badly in her room remembering her's and kabir's lovely moments, she wanted to tell him something , she wanted to tell kabir that she was pregnant  but was stopped by her promise...she just wanted to hug kabir as tightly as she could...she was lost in her thoughts when suddenly she felt a hand on her shoulder And turned back to see Saurav standing behind her..she stood up and hugged saurav and told him that how much she loved kabir...she was still hiding the truth from him...but saurav being her bestest friend Found out that she has been hiding something...nisha never keeps any secrets unopened before saurav...on saurav's continuous questions, she had to tell him this truth also that she was pregnant..saurav was shocked at first but later he felt happy but seeing nisha's condition he became sad again...he had to do something to make his besty happy again..he had to reunite her with her kabira..he has to bring kabira back...he hurriedly left from there to meet the cousins..he told cousins the truth of nisha being pregnant, all of them were shocked ,they need to do something for their sister who always stood by their side, who always supported them, They had to stop the marriage...they started making plans in order to stop the marriage...while they were busy in their plans, there was someone who was listening to all their discussions.. He now had a new reason to defame the gangwal family...he silently and secretly recorded all of Their discussions in his mobile phone and silently walked away from there...that person was none other than SUMIT...!!!! While the cousins planned that they would never let this marriage happen...saurav told the cousins also that the NRI guy also tried to misbehave with her...now everyone in the cousins group were damn sure that they would punch that bloody idiot on his face so that he is never able to misbehave with any other girl after this break the marriage fiasco Ends...but right now they needed to focus on their plans ...

On the other hand , kabir picked up the call, viraj was about to say something when he said that it was his competition today and that there is a lot of voice and he is not able to hear anything...it was his competition today, his dream competition which would give him an entry to the London school of dance, his dream...!!!kabir couldn't hear viraj's voice so he had to cut the call thinking that he would call him as soon as the competition gets over...it was his turn for the performance, he had to become the best dancer as he promised his nishu...
On the other hand, viraj was very confused, he didn't know about what he should do, he tried finding more about that NRI guy,(chalo let's name him Karan,don't mind if it is anyone's name here..!!) He found out that he was a very bad person,he is always seen with a new girl,he was a money minded,and a person who has all the bad qualities in him, he only uses girls,they are a game for him..!!!now viru too was going to make sure that he does not let this marriage happen...!!!but he needed someone's help...as the gangwal family would not listen to him...!!he needed to get back kabir here right now...!!!but he wasn't able to contact him...!!

The wedding rituals started,the cousins started their mischiefs ,They started spoiling things here and there and acted as if they knew nothing ...but their all plans were going in vain...they started making more and more plans... It was the first time when their plans were of no use...just then singham came shouting angrily out of his room followed by summit...summit was smiling as if he has achieved the world cup...karan was also present there ,he stood all confused as he knew nothing about what was happening...dadaji called nisha near him...his eyes were red in anger and as nisha came and hurriedly stood before him, he slapped her, a tear escaped from her eye,and she was confused, and for that the cousins tried protesting and just then viraj enters the scene and sees that dadaji slapped nisha, she was about to fall on the ground when viraj saved her from falling...then ramesh couldn't understand that what was happening...!!! Viraj was about to say something, when singham spoke out,...
Singham:kyun nahi bataya ye Sab tumne..kyun chupaya ye Sab...???
Nisha:w..whhaatt did I hide from you...??
Viraj:aap ye kya bol rhe hain Mr.gangwal..???
Singham:aap chup rahiye Mr.viraj Singh rathod...aap kaun hote hain humare ghar ke maamlo mein bolne waale...????aur nisha tum why did you not tell us that you were pregnant...??ye kya kardiya tumne...you just destroyed your life...!!!Ab kya hoga tumhara...???
Viraj, karan, and the other gangwal family were shocked to hear that...
Viraj:k...kkk..kkyyaaa...???miss.nisha is pregnant...????kya aap sach bol rhe hain...!????he turned to see nisha's reaction...while she cried and cried...!!!yes it was true ...her face told that...!!!( viraj in his mind: kabir kahan hain aap, miss.nisha ko aap ki zaroorat hain...please come fast..!!)
While karan spoke out: achcha...tabhi aap log itni jaldi iski shaadi karwana chahte the...!!!taaki aap isko mere gale daal do...!!!aur aapki beizzati na ho...!!!samajh gaya main...achche se samajh gaya...!!aur pata nahi...ye kaha apna much kala kake aayi hain...???pata nahi ye kitno ke saath ghumti phirti hain...???
Viraj and the cousins were now damn sure that they would kill him right now...viraj, saurav, sukku and umesh were beating him black
And blue for talking nonsense about nisha...But summit came in between...
Summit:how dare you talk about her like that...??(he talked as if he cared for nisha)dadaji main baat karta hun Kart hun isse...ye shaadi to hoke hi rahegi...warns humari nisha ko kaun apnayega...???main baat karta hun isse ,I'm sure ki WO maan jaayga...!!
Singham nodded in a yes...!!
Ramesh and lakshmi were trying to talk to nisha but neither she was crying nor talking anything...and she suddenly fainted...!!!
The family tried to wake her up...but she was not gaining consciousness...they were tensed...they took her to her room and laid her on the bed...they sprinkled some water on her face...she gained consciousness... Still her eyes were closed and she was blabbering only one thing That was 'KABIR'...!!
All the family felt very sad seeing her condition..but they can't do anything...it was singham' s decision...!!and singham was sure to get nisha married to karan..!!
On the other hand, summit took karan to his room...
Karan:kyun karu main Usse shaadi...pata nahi kha much kala karke aayi hain...???
Sumit:Abe o Zara dheere se bol...plan bigadega kya humara...??
Karan: Ab kahan ka plan...main nahi shaadi karne waala Usse...!!
Sumit: 50-50 yaad nahi hain kya...????tu kya kya nahi kar Sakta itne money se...???bhai tu aish karega..aish..!!
Karan:mujhe 60% share chahiye...!!
Sumit:tu zyaada us mat samjha...!!!jitna milega utne mein khush rhna seekh...50%dunga Lena hain to bol...??
Karan:haan..hnn..theek hain...karlunga shaadi Usse...lekin paise Milne ke baad use chod dunga...!!uske baad Mera Usse koyi Lena dena nahi hain...!!
Karan was sumit' s cousin...they both planned to take away the gangwal money and share it among themselves...he finally agreed to marry her...it was the marriage the next day..!!
On the other happy,it was the most happiest day of his life, he has won the competition, he wanted to share his happiness with his love...nisha...he picked up his phone and dialled nisha's number...the call was going..but noons was picking it up...nisha saw that ..but she didn't pick up his call...she was seeing her mobile screen which flashed kabir's name...she was crying and crying...seeing her phone...he had called her 10 times...kabir was getting tensed now...he feared that something may have happened...suddenly someone picked up the call...but it wasn't nisha it was saurav...!!
Kabir: nisha??? Kya hua tujhe..???tu Mera call kyun nahi utha rahi...?
Saurav: main nisha nahi saurav bol raha hun...yaar kabir tu kahan hain...nisha ko Teri zaroorat hain please jaldi aaja tu jahan pe bhi hain...,,!!!please haldi..kal nisha ki shaa...he was about to complete the sentence when nisha took the phone away from saurav...
Nisha:Mr .kabir Singh rathod aap dubara kabhi is number ke call mat kijiyega...!!!kal meri shaadi hain aur mere hone waale husband ko ye Sab pasand nhi hain...!!...saying that she hung up the call...!!she was crying badly.. So was he...!!he took some time to register those words that his nisha was going to get married to someone else...he understood that something was wrong...he had to go to his nisha...whatever may happen, stand by her side...!!!tears escaped from his eyes...!!!
He picked his phone up from the ground which fell down as a result of shock he has got from nisha 's words...he had to get his nisha back...he quickly dialled viru's number only to find that...
Posted: 8 years ago
Part 3 will be posted tomorrow...!!it will be the last part ...!!!!do comment if you like this part...!!!happy reading..!!😊
Do ignore if any spelling mistake...autocorrect problem in phone...!!!
Edited by premc - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
Please do comment guyzz...waiting for your reviews..???should I continue it...???
Posted: 8 years ago
Oh come on you can;t stop there
cliffy ðŸ˜¡
To find out what? That Viru is the dulhe raja

Loved reading it The last line is keeping me on the edge what does K find out upon calling V
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by Chahanya


Oh come on you can;t stop there
cliffy ðŸ˜¡
To find out what? That Viru is the dulhe raja

Loved reading it The last line is keeping me on the edge what does K find out upon calling V
Just chill...viraj is not going to be the dulha...I am a nibir fan too so just chill...I was just asking for ut reviews that's it...tomorrow it will be the last part and a pure nibir one...!!!I am going to kick summit and karan out of the story in the next part...
Edited by premc - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome Update yaar !!
Update Soon !!
Posted: 8 years ago
Will post the next part tomorrow evening...!!thanks for ut reviews...!!

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