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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 11:01am | IP Logged
Awesome loved both!! Do wr8 more and pls make them long na !! I want more and more of u. And i am prmnnt reader of ur stories..
And i have a req can u wr8 something between karna and arjun! I want to read them in ur unique style. Pls ??
Btw the parts were awesome.

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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 5:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Urmila11

Geetha, I feel your writings. If I'm not wrong then you love Lord Krishna Smile you have portrayed the side of Lord I always want to see, that is His karunaa, His bhakta vatsalataa, love and mercy for His devotees, and even for the non-devotees! Loved the Bhishma one Clap I'm not a Duryodhan fan so can't say whether he was really sad for his deeds or not, because he was happy to learn that Pandava children were killed. But you have showed Krishna's mercy for him really well.
May I request you to write something on Krishna-Pandav relationship Embarrassed Please consider!
Jai Shri Krishna!

Thank you. Yes, i've tried to show something of what I feel must have been His feelings, but do not know how successful it is. And though there is no indication in Vyasa's Mahabharata that Duryodhana repented his deeds, I took inspiration from Bhasa's play Oorubhanga where Duryodhana is shown repenting his deeds. And this incident in my story happens after the death of the Pandava children. Though Duryodhana was initially happy, he has had time to think and regret since. And yes, I shall try to post something on the Krishna Pandava angle.

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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 5:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sonatia

Awesome loved both!! Do wr8 more and pls make them long na !! I want more and more of u. And i am prmnnt reader of ur stories..
And i have a req can u wr8 something between karna and arjun! I want to read them in ur unique style. Pls ??
Btw the parts were awesome.

Thank you. I shall try to make the next one longer. And as for Karna Arjuna, I shall try. I have not written anything on that angle till date. But I shall try something. 
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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 4:18am | IP Logged
It was so touching! I agree with Urmiladi, you have indeed brought out the ocean of mercy in him! Loved it! Do write some more of this and PM me when you do!

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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 10:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Radhikerani

It was so touching! I agree with Urmiladi, you have indeed brought out the ocean of mercy in him! Loved it! Do write some more of this and PM me when you do!

Thank you. Yes I definitely will PM you whenever I post. Smile

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Posted: 13 May 2015 at 10:41am | IP Logged
Oh, that was so painful! Kanha had to bear so much of pain, and had to yet keep up the image of the Almighty!

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Posted: 13 May 2015 at 11:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Radhikerani

Oh, that was so painful! Kanha had to bear so much of pain, and had to yet keep up the image of the Almighty!

I tried to portray Krishna as somewhat human and suffering and yet being aware of who he was, he could not express his own grief and pain. He hid all behind that naughty smile of his... Cry

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