Hey Dear...Congrats for the new Thread...ππIts my first comment on this story...just finished with all chapters...
like the concept & changing roles of Asya...I like this Asad u portrayed... he loved Zoya so deeply...that part where she reject him & decide to get married was so touching...Asad's state was so nicely written...really i cried with him...
i like the way he teach her...so cute moments...
now this separation track with new twist...
they r miles away but still manage to be with each other...that talking on phone & sleep with hearing each others heart beat...so cute it is...
now I wonder who is the caller...& u ended the part at such point...can't wait for the next...continue soon...
Thankew so much for pm π
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