#2~||Akdha SS||~~Woh Bhuli Daastan~~||Important note pg 106 (19/8) - Page 66

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Posted: 8 years ago
Fabulous yar!!
So emotional n painful 😭
Ja condition u penned down really well.
Seeing him like a frightened kid she was really shock nd forgetting everything reached to him n bring him out of his state.
Bt then reality hit her n she tried to move away from him bt again fell on him ndboth aagain come so close.
Thanks for pm dear.
Nd update nxt part asap...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Totallyyy amazing update!! πŸ‘
Its just awesome πŸ˜ƒ
Emotional+Heart touching :')
You have described everything really beautifully 😳
Thank you for the pm!
And try updating soon πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update...
Not atall boring...
Jodha at Jalal's home...
And Jalal injured...
Can wait to read more...
U
Date soon...
Thanx for the pm...
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update dear

thnks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
great chapter
update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
U are back after long time BarnaliπŸ€—
It was an awesome read dear ..I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
Jo came to meet Jalal and Jalal was lost in his own world...removing all the traces of Ruqs from his life... U have beautifully penned his vulnerable situation and last his index finger tracing her tear drops saying don't shed it as that are very precious as their owner...it so cozy lines.
Continue soon dear.
Update next chappy soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi barnali 😊I really loved urs story nd was following from da beginning, just couldn't not be active in da forumπŸ˜‰ it was really painful to see jalal condition, unite da family  nd update soon πŸ˜Š do pm me πŸ˜³
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi Barnali...
Glad to see you backπŸ˜‰
will read and comment dear..
BTW durga pujo kemon katlo πŸ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: mushat

Hi Barnali...
Glad to see you backπŸ˜‰
will read and comment dear..
BTW durga pujo kemon katlo πŸ˜†

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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: ...Shefa...

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