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Geetbaala

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Posted: 8 years ago

Amazing update Barnalii..👏

Its emotional chappy dear..made me senti while reading..😭

But u had beautifully penned their feelings..mother is scared of her son's rejection and Jalal is scared of her rejection.. Worried about how to seek her forgiveness..👏

As Jo's friend Moti said it is gonna very tuff to get her back in his life..how can she forgive him so easily?

His hatred towards his once best friend Ruqi.. was justified..

I was pondered when salim called Jo as MAA.😲

These three letter word gave immense peace to the restless scared soul.😃

But loved this surprise.. Does he know about Jodha ?

Continue soon dear.

Thanks for this lovely update.🤗

Waiting for next chappy.. Update soon.

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mamina

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Posted: 8 years ago

Mindblowing chapy barnali

Salim called maa but was it for jodha ya ruq😒

Jallal has shattered 😭 bechara

Jodha still cares for jalal though afraid to trust him

Moti the true friend ever

Padosiii😆

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Barnali

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Posted: 8 years ago

This content was originally posted by: melovesja
superb chappy .you very well pain down their emotion last time you wrote ja's feeling after truth come in front of him and now jo's feeling .she says she wants to burn with him . in this one line jo pour her heart and accept her self what she want . beautifully written dear. she will not give in so fast and ja have a long way to go. waiting for surprises.

thanks dear😊

Surprises on way😃

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Barnali

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Posted: 8 years ago

This content was originally posted by: RSlovesJA
wow after all this still jo cares for ja...salim called her maa...seems salim already knew about his real mother...moti want jj unite as she said ja need to repent alot...continue soon nd do pm

Thanks😊

Will try to continue soon😊

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Barnali

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Posted: 8 years ago

This content was originally posted by: zuytre
Lovely update,hope jo forgives jalal

Atleast for salim they should stay together

Thanks for pm

Let's see what Jo does😉

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Barnali

@Paradise_1

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Posted: 8 years ago

awesome updt dear 👏
superb n very emotional chap 😊

Thanks😊
finally aftr long tim salim gt consious n nt only tht he call jo "maa" [:D/] but hw i think ja had already told him abut jo.but m really happy fr jo.

Let's wait for the reason😉
poor jalal i feel vry sad fr him. u penned jalal pain n his guilt vry beautyfully dear liked it.
he want jo to his side in this tough tim even jo also want to beside him but she is scared tht wht if she again got hurt n i think she is rit undrstnd her situation. but feel bad fr both jo n ja. wnt thm bck togthr n fr tht jalal has to gt jodha forgivness.

they will fight, they will love and at last they'll surely come together😊
n fr all this i m waiting fr ur nxt updt wanna knw
hw u unfold this story n wht nxt twist is waiting fr us 😉 😃
nxt chap updt soon n thnx fr pm 🤗

Twist is on way 😉😊

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Barnali

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Posted: 8 years ago

This content was originally posted by: natashathakur
Superb chpter n update sn n thnxx for pm n sry my like button is not working

Thanks 😊

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Barnali

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Posted: 8 years ago

Great job Barnali 👏

Loved this emotional update 👍🏼

Thanks Shruthi di😃

I can empathy Jodha's pain her fear of to be rejected by her own son

She has seen the worst of it once rejected by her beloved husband😭

" She nipped the thought before it sprouted its roots " ... amazing line👏

He he 😆😃 Thank u😊

Jalal's agony for being betrayed by his bff his restlessness his condition feeling sad for Jalal😭

And at he same time happy for him darkest period of his life finally ended😃

yes.. It ended😃

Salim's dream ...THE HIGH WAVES CRASHED ON THE SHORE...❤️ LOVED the two paragraphs👍🏼 U write it Superbly dearie🤗 Salim called Jo ... MAA !! wow!! Loved it 😃

Thanks😊

Ok No romance agreed😲 At least rejoin them for the sake of Salim dear😕

Yeah that will surely come😃

WAITING FOR Jalal to repair the damages done by him😡

UPDATE NEXT CHAPPY SOON N THX FOR PM😳

Will try to update soon😊

@blue

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1016079

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Posted: 8 years ago

superb update
jalal is in very bad condition thinking of the betrayal which is given by his best friend
jodha still cares for jala and salim called jodha 'maa'😲😊
continue soon
thanks 4 pm
Edited by mamtasingla - 8 years ago

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deepa111

@deepa111

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Posted: 8 years ago

really nice update.
ja heart broken by the truth revealation.
he really need jo beside her for his support bt he knows that its hard for jo to forget everything nd forgive him.
bt he cares her .
salim called maa ..give the immense peace to jo.
eager to read it further.
thnku for pm.
update soon.

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