FF : Joyride-2 Gazab Ka Hai Din ... UPDATED Pg 100 - Page 9

For that, I have to re-read it again. Gotta do that from home. Office is not the place for readng amorous stuff, and going pink.

Originally posted by: poetic

For that, I have to re-read it again. Gotta do that from home. Office is not the place for readng amorous stuff, and going pink.

The first read was because I couldn't contain my curiosity.

Oops😆 Office is certainly not the place. Will wait😃

Originally posted by: RaginiluvsNR

Oops😆 Office is certainly not the place. Will wait😃

Ragini, you should have put a disclaimer: NSFW 😆

Awww Rachna di😳 This is our love for NeiRa. You can imagine my state of mind while actually writing 😆
Edited by RaginiluvsNR - 9 years ago

Originally posted by: metoyou

Ragini, you should have put a disclaimer: NSFW 😆

What's that? Full form please😆

Originally posted by: RaginiluvsNR

What's that? Full form please😆

Jokes apart...

Its an awesome update, thanks a lot.  Still in NeiRaLand after reading the update.

Ragini.. Ragini.. Ragini!!!!

Oh my god! This was BEAUTIFUL! I'm so amazed by this! The description of the overall surrounding was mesmerizing. The way he arrives near her house, him calling her, her sexy sleepy voice and that Pizza bit😆 Lively and lovely update!

Then all that they did in her bedroom was so romantic. I could totally imagine, each and every move! How romantic you are! The car scene was small yet so descriptive, nothing more was needed there.

Then the Karjat farmhouse. Totally perfect! Them cutting the cake, him wiping the cream and that lovely dance! Mesmerizing! Totally in love with this! The way you described their feelings, their love, their inner turmoil.. every damn thing was beyond beautiful. Short of words..

Keep writing Ragini! You are perfectly beautiful!
Edited by Siddharth_K - 9 years ago