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Saisha_7 Senior Member

Joined: 05 May 2015
Posts: 251

Posted: 09 June 2015 at 1:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by musicialtie

Originally posted by Saisha77

: : i cnt say anythng.. i read the last 2 updatez in 1 go n i was dumbstruck..
hw do uh manage to write so beautifully n leave us wanting more??
both the updatz were fab..
nandini indirectly proposed manik..
cavya moments were awww..
manik kissed cabir.. hahahahah.. apni hi chaal me fass gya cabir.. kahan revenge lena chahta tha but all went in vein :D :D
alya ko thoda aur jalaao.. c deservez it..
mukti accptz her feelingz foh abhi..
there is nthng which i dun lyk.. i lyked every single thing dat uh mentioned..
while reading, i imagine the scenez.. itz lyk evrythng is hpng infront of my eyez..
i guess nw uh shud reveal abt manan to cabir atlst.. he deservez it.. make it lyk manan were kissing n teasing each other n unintentionally cabir notice dis.. manan explainz evrythng n apologize n cabir being cabir maaf kr deta h unhe but only in one condition.. the condition is dat manan hv to keep their handz off frm each other as long as cabir is wid them.. hahahah.. i knw bahut zyada ho gya but i want smthng lyk dis..
i knw itz ur story.. i wont evr force uh foh anythng.. itz juz a suggestion.. take it or leave it.. i wont mind..
i wna say sorry foh being late dis tym.. had sm health issuez but nw fyn..
plz continue soon.. n thank uh foh the pm..

thanks a lot dear. .. Thanks a ton..
dear I am extremely happy getting such a big comment.
Thanks for liking this too much.
Please keep loving.
and about your suggestions toh they are whole heartily welcome.
I am so glad.
and please stay tuned to know more. .
thank uh foh lyking my suggestion.. it was juz an idea.. my pleasure dat uh lykd my comment :) :) uh put so much of effortz into this story, i cn atlst make it upto uh by commenting long.. hahah.. uh dun nd to worry.. i m n alwayz will stay tune.. i lyk dis story too much.. itz lyk bcm a part of my lyf..

zaroge Goldie

Joined: 20 July 2013
Posts: 1320

Posted: 09 June 2015 at 1:37am | IP Logged
dude its amazing 
poor manik got a shock 
but why a cliff hanger
cant wait for the next part contu soon 
Dhariya_ IF-Dazzler

Joined: 20 February 2015
Posts: 2650

Posted: 09 June 2015 at 1:39am | IP Logged
woh kya task tha
bechari alia ka plan fail ho gaya
bechara manikLOL
Manik shocked nandu rockedLOL
loved the update 
cont soon
MaNanAnayta Newbie

Joined: 06 June 2015
Posts: 45

Posted: 09 June 2015 at 1:41am | IP Logged
NO NO NO... not done yaar ...i was lyk aage kya hoga nd u jst left d parth on a cliff hanger...
Ok now this part ws very hawwwttt i can imagine each nd every steps of nandus lap dance along with maniks expression hayyyeeeEmbarrassed...i m blushing nd last line majnuuu kya dailouge waah waah...waiting lyk thing dis tym u have to update soon...plzzz
MaNan_Angel Goldie

Joined: 26 October 2014
Posts: 1417

Posted: 09 June 2015 at 1:57am | IP Logged
Seriously amazing chapter..
The way you wrote manik's feeling while nandu's sexy dance...
It was fab...
And after dance teasing that was also a nice part...!!!
priya_sejwal Goldie

Joined: 31 May 2014
Posts: 1787

Posted: 09 June 2015 at 1:58am | IP Logged
Wow...Clap it was too good
Lovedd it
Manan lap dance...so hawt n romanticWinkWink
Manik expressions...awww song selection... greatTongue
All of them got suprised by seeing tht...haha
Aliya plan got flopped but for manan it was superr dupper hitt!!!
N in the last manik's dialogue... yeahhh
Eagerly waiting for nxt update continue soon
Thnk uh for pm
Saisha_7 Senior Member

Joined: 05 May 2015
Posts: 251

Posted: 09 June 2015 at 2:30am | IP Logged
dis is sooo haaawwwttt!! uh knw these teasingz r more sensual than the actual deed..
man uh will kill me 1 day!!
uh mk our nandu so bold.. uff!! c did lap dance wid manik.. at first c was afraid but as soon as manik supported her, c rocked!!
i cnt comment as i lykd evry bit of it!! uh gv me a superb idea to mk my bf happy :) :) m sure he will b hell shocked.. heheheh..
manik was shocked as he didnt expect nandini to do dis!! the effect was too much..
alya.. the baddie.. till nw in ur story alya is the only villain.. usne intentionally yeh chit bnaya n evn marked it so dat c cn get the opportunity to b cozy wid manik.. sick!!
cabir, mukti, abhi, dhruv n navya were shocked by nandiniz act..
evn m also shocked..
m using "ShockeD" word again n again coz mujhe iske alawa koi aur word nhi yaad aa rha h.. sorry..
i will wait foh the continuation of "UNDONE"..
thank uh foh the pm..

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manan4everlv Senior Member

Joined: 26 May 2015
Posts: 284

Posted: 09 June 2015 at 2:35am | IP Logged
It was sooo hawwtt.. I think my ac isn't working :-P. Thanks 4 pming me continue soon 

Edited by manan4everlv - 09 June 2015 at 4:34am

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