Jodha Akbar

MERE MAANG MEIN TERA NAAM KA SINDOOR.... - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
nice concept.
both chptr r really nice .thnx for pm dear.excited to read it further.
plz update soon nd pm me.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice chapter continue soon pm me eagerly waiting for update make it meeting the akdha thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update is there any past between jalal nd sujamal fight... continue soon nd do pm 
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Posted: 8 years ago
Interesting update...
They fought like tom nd jerry fr a contract...
Precap seems interesting
Update soon
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Nice update dear
waiting for their first meet
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and thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice prologue n 
nice chappy 
I liked it. 
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HI FRNDS SO HERE I GO WITH CHAPTER:3... NOT SOO GOOD BUT I THINK IT IS WORTH READING..


       RECAP : JALAL GOT FRUSTATED AND SAID "ABDUL SEE WHAT HAPPENED NOW.. SOMEONE SHOUD NOT HAVE SOMETHING IN BETWEEN RIGHT!!" GRINING TOWARDS SUJAMAL.. SUJAMAL KEPT QUITE.. AND JALAL AND OTHERS WALKED OUT OF CONFRENCE ROOM..

                     CHAPTER:3
            AS JALAL WALKED OUT SUJAMAL GOT MAD AND SAID "JALAL TUMNE MUGH SE PANGA LIYA HAIN NAA AB TUM KUDH HI DEKO KI AAGE KYA HOTA HAIN AUR VAISE MEIN TOH SAFESIDE HUIN." AND GAVE AN EVIL SMILE.. THE NIGHT PASSED AND MORNING ARRIVED BUT IT SEEMS THAT JALAL WAS OO BUSY AND HAVEN'T SLEPT THE LAST NIGHT AND WAS DOING SOME WORK PROBABLY HE WAS MAKING AN POTRAIT OF SOMEONE. HE WAS LOOKING AT SOMETHING PROBABLY STARING AT SOMETHING WITHOUT EVEN BLINKING AND THAT WAS A POTRIAT CONTAINING SOMEONE'S EYES AND YES THAT WERE 'HIS' JODHA'S EYES.. HE LOVED THAT EYES SOOMUCH.. AND IT WAS THEN HIS PHONE BUZZED IT WAS A VIDEO CALL HE CUT THE PHONE AND IT WAS 'HIS' GRANDFATHER IN PHONE.. YES HE WAS HAVING A FAMILY CONSISTING HIS GRAND PARENTS, 2UNCLES AND 1 AUNTY.. BUT WHAT DID HE KNOW THAT SOON HE IS GOING TO MEET THEM TO SATISFY HIS NEEDS... HE RECIEVED A LETTER.. IT WAS FROM THE COURT.. HE READ THE LETTER AND SAID "I KNOW THAT THE PETITION WILL SOON COME , I WAS ALL READY TO PROVE MYSELF INNOCENT" IT WAS WRITTEN IN THE LETTER THAT HE SHOULD BE PRESENT IN THE COURT AT 7 THAT IS TOMMOROW BY 10AM.. HE SOON PICKED UP HIS  PHONE MESSAGED ABDUL ABOUT THE PETITION AND WENT TO WASHROOM HAD HIS BATH AND CAME TO DINNING HALL AND HAD HIS BREAK FAST 
    
       BY THIS TIME ABDUL CAME OUT FROM HIS ROOM AND SAID "BHAI AB HUME KAL COURT MEIN JANA HAIN AUR TUM HO KI ITNE ARAAM SE YAHA BAITH KAR NASHTA KARRAHAE HO .. AB HUME EK LAWYER KO DUNDNAA PADEGA.. AUR- {BROTHER TOMMOROW WE HAVE TO GO TO COURT AND YOU ARE SO COOLED AND HAVING YOUR BREAKFAST SO LEISURELY.. WE HAVE TO CATCH A LAWYER AND-} HE WAS CUT BY THE JALAL IN BETWEEN AND SAID " ABDUL JUST CHILL YAAR  KYU ITNA TENSION LERAHA HAIN SABKUCH TEAK HOGAYE GA" {ABDUL JUST CHILL BRO WHY ARE SO TENSED AND EVERYTHING WILL BE ALLRIGHT} 
JALAL GOT UP FROM THE CHAIR AND ALONG WITH ABDUL HE REACHED HIS OFFICE IN 5MINUTES.. HE SAT IN HIS CHAIR AND CALLED HIS P.A WHO WAS NONEOTHER THAN DEVIL OF HIS LIFE "RUKAIYA" SHE WAS PROBABLY DOING HER MAKEUP TO IMPRESS JALAL AND SHE WORE A MINI SKIRT WITH A RED T-SHIRT TODAY, ALL THE STAFF MEN WERE LOKKING AT HER LIKE THEY WOULD EAT HER UP.. 
    
        SHE WENT TO JALAL'S ROOM WITH OUT MAKING NOISE NOT EVEN KNOCKING THE DOOR WENT TO HIS TABLE  HE WAS BUSY DOING SOMEWORK ON HIS LAPTOP AND SHE KEPT STARING AT HIM ABDUL WHO IS ALSO WORKING ON HIS LAPTOP GOT SOME DOUDT AND RAISED HIS HEAD TO ASK JALAL ABOUT IT AND HE SAW RUKAIYA STARING AT HIM  GOT FRUSTATED AND SAID "AB ISSE AISA KYU GUURRAHI HO JAISE TUM ISE PURA KHANE WALI HO"{WHY ARE YOU STARING AT HIM AS YOU WOULD EAT HIM UP ANYTIME..} HE SIGHED AND JUST LOOKED AWAY FROM HER.. SHE SAID "NO NOTHING LIKE THAT JUST-" AND WAS SAYING SOMETHING BUT CUT OFF BY JALAL "AAJ MERE SHEDULE KYA HAIN?" {WHAT IS MY SHEDULE FOR TODAY??} SHE SAID "SIR AAJ APKA KOHI MEETING NAHI HAIN AAJ AAP FREE HAIN.. AGAR AAP CHAHE THO MAIN AAPKA SHEDULE BANAVONGI HUM DONO KI MEETING KI" {SIR YOU DON'T HAVE ANY MEETING TODAY AND SIR IF YOU LIKE I WILL MAKE YOUR SHEDULE OF YOUR MEETING AND DISSCUSING WITH RUKAIYA} AND SMILED.. JALAL SAID "USKI KOHI JARRORAT NAHI HAIN TUME JISKE LIYE YAHA RAKHAGAYA AUR SALERY DIGAYI TUM SIF WO KAAM KARO AND REMEMBERED SOMETHING AND SAID "KAL MERE JO KUCH BHI MEETINGS  SAARE CANCEL KARWADO" {NO NEED OF THAT YOU JUST MIND YOUR OWN BUSSINESS AND ONE MORE THING TOMMOROW WHATEVER MEETINGS IAM HAVING JUST CANCEL THEM ALL.}HE SAW HER STARING AT HIM TO WOKE HER UP HE SAID "IS THAT OK??" SHE WOKE UP FROM HER DREAM AND SAID YES SIR AND STOOD THERE STARING AT HIM AGAIN.. THIS TIME HE GOT MORE ANGRY AND IRRITATED SO HE  SAID "AB TUM JAA SAKTI HO YAHAN SE" {NOW YOU CAN LEAVE..}

    AFTERSOMETIME ABDUL WAS FEELING THRUSTY AND WAS LOOKING FOR WATER BOTTLE AND HIS EYES LAID ON  JALAL'S PHONE WAS ON TABLE AND SAW IT'S WALLPAPER WHICH WAS MEMERISING A BEAUTIFUL PAINTING OF CAPTIVE DOE SHAPED EYES.. HE ASKED HIM "YAAR YEH KISKI AANKEN HAIN MARSHAALLAH!! BOHUT KHUBSOORATH HAIN" {YAAR WHO'S EYES ARE THESE THEY ARE SO CAPITIVE JUST PERFECT..} JALAL SAW HIM TOOK HIS PHONE IN HIS HANDS AND SAID "YEH USS LADKI KI AANKEN HAIN JISE MERA CAR KA CRASH HUA THA YAAR TU YEH BATHA KI TUGHE USKE BAAREMEIN KOHI INFO MILE KYA??" {THIS EYES ARE OF THAT GIRL WITH WHOM I HAD A CRASH AND DID YOU FIND ANY INFO ABOUT HER??} ABDUL REPLIED"NAHI AUR TUMNE USS LADKI KA PHOTO KICHA THA KYA?? {NO I DIDN'T BUT DID YOU TOOK HER PICTURE??} A MAID CAME IN WITH 2 CUPS OF COFFE GAVE IT TO THEM.. JALAL WAS DRINKING COFFEE AND SAID NAHI MEIN NE USS AANKONKI PAINTING BANAYI HAIN {NO I DIDN'T TOOK ANY PHOTO I JUST MADE THE PAINTINGOF HER EYES} ABDUL SAID "YAAAR MUGHE PEHLE HI BATAYA HOTA KI YEH ITNI KHUBSOORAT HAIN TOH MAIN KABKA INFORMATION LAA CHUKA HOTA.." {YOU WOULD HAVE TOLD ME THAT HE IS SUCH BEAUTIFUL THEN I WOULD HAVE GOT THE INFORMATION AS SOON AS POSSIBLE } JALAL GULPED OFF THE COFFE AND STARTED COUGHFING AND SAID "YAAR TERI BEHAN HAIN AUR SHAYAD HONE WALI BHABHI BHI.." {YAAR SHE IS SISTER.. CAN ALSO BE YOUR FRND'S WIFE..} ABDUL SAID : "YAAR KYA TU PYAAR KARTA HAIN USE?? YA PHIR SABKI TARAH USE KARKE CHODDEGA??" {YAAR DO YOU LOVE HER OR JUST WANNA USE HER??} JALAL JUST SMILED AND SAID "YAAR TU BHI" {YOU!!!!} THIS TWO FRIENDS HAD SOME CHITCHAT AND COMPLETED THEIR WORK.. 

TIME LAPSE... IT IS 3:30 NOW

          MEANWHILE JODHA WAS IN HER CABIN WAS NOT HAVING ANY WORK SHE TOOK HER TAB OUT AND STARTED PLAYING GAMES LIKE : CANDY CRUSH,SUBWAYSURF ETC ETC.. GOT BORED AND DECIDED TO OPEN HER FB.. SHE OPENED HER ACCOUNT AND SAW A LOT OF FRIEND REQUSTS A LOT WERE FROM BOYS.. SHE DENIED ALL OF THEM AND OPENED HER PROFILE.. MEANWHILE MOTI CAME AND TALKED WITH JODHA FOR LONG.. MOTI AND JODHA DECIDED TO GO TO THE NEARBY COFFEE SHOP.. THEY BOTH WENT THERE AND ORDERED A  CAPICHINO FOR BOTH OF THEM.. THE CAPICHINO CAME AND JODHA TOOK A SELIFE ALONG WITH MOTI WITH CAPACHINO IN THEIR HANDS.. SHE UPLOEDED THIS AS HER COVER PHOTO.. JODHA GOT CALL FROM HER BHABHI 
SHE LIFTED THE CALL AND SAID
 "HA BHABHI" {YES BHABHI}
 SHRUTHI ASKED"JODHA KYA KARRAHAE HO??"  {JODHA WHT R U DNG??}
"KUCH NAHI COFFEE SHOP MAIN HU KYA HUVA" {IAM IN COFEESHOP WHT HAPPENED?}
SHE SAID "JODHA MEIN KUCH UNEASY FEEL KARRAHI HOUN KYA TUM RISHI KO SCHOOL SE GHAR LAA SAKTI HO WOH MERA INTESAAR KARRAHA HOGA.." {JODHA WOULD YOU LIKE TO PICK UP RISHI FRM SCHOOL?? IAM FELLING LITTLE UNEASYNESS HE MIGHT BE WAITING FOR     ME}
JODHA REPLIED " HA BHABHI MEIN USE GHAR LEKE AVOONGI APP TODHA REST KARO" {YES BHABHI I WILL BRING HIM HOME YOU TAKE REST}

    JODHA EXPLAINED THE SITUATION TO MOTI AND SHE AND JODHA WENT TO RISHI'S SCHOOL AND WERE SEARCHING FOR HIM.. SUDDENLY SOMEONE FROM BACK PULLED JODHA'S TOP.. SHE GOT PANICKED AND TURNED BACK.. SHE FOUND RICO AND CARRIED HIM IN HER ARMS.. [NOTE RISHI WAS IN UPPER KINDERGARDEN..] HE SAID "BUA MAMMA KAHA HAIN" {BUA WHERE IS MAMMA?} SHE REPLIED 'MAMMA KI HEALTH THEEK NAHI HAIN WOH GHAR MEIN APPKA WAIT KARRAHI HAIN .. KYA HUM GHAR CHALE??" {YOUR MAMMA'S HEALTH IS NOT GOOD SHE I IN HOME WAITING FOR YOU NOW LETS GO HOME..} 
   
    JODHA TOOK RISHI TO HOME MOTI ALSO WANTED TO JOIN HER BUT SHE GOT A PHONE FROM HER HOME SO SHE HAD TO GO.. 

   PRECAP : COURT'S DECISION  JODHA AND JALAL  TO GO  INDIA.. AKDHA'S FIRST MEET AND LOTS MORE...

SO FRNDS IAM DONE WITH THE CHAPTER :3.. PLZ HIT LIKE BUTTON AND DO COMMENT.. SUGGESTINS ARE WELCOME..
I WILL PM YOU ALL WHEN I UPDATE NEXT CHAPTER..
                                                  -BHARGAVI
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mindblowing story n all d CH r awesomw.love Jo n ja.I am so excited to read next.
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mindblowing story n all d CH r awesomw.love Jo n ja.I am so excited to read next CH.
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