MERE MAANG MEIN TERA NAAM KA SINDOOR.... - Page 2

Posted: 8 years ago
congoo on this new  story😛
awesome dear. Do continue and pm me. 
Posted: 8 years ago
Congrats for ur new story. ..
Intersting pologue...
waiting for 1st chapter. ...
Posted: 8 years ago
Congo for new story
nice prologue and character sketch
update chap soon
thanks for pm
Posted: 8 years ago
         HI FRNDS!! HERE I GO WITH THE FIRST CHAPTER OF THIS STORY... 
               NEW CHARECTORS: 
  
SHRUTHI: JODHA'S BHABHI AND MOTHER OF RISHI,WIFE OF SUJAMAL.. 

 RISHI: JODHA'S NEPHEW AND SUJAMAL AND SHRUTHI'S SON

MOTI: JODHA'S BEST BUDDY AND A DOCTOR IN THE SAME HOSPITAL WHERE JODHA WORKS

                                                                                                  CHAPTER:1 
                 
             "GOOD MORNING DEAR.. GET UP YOU ARE RUNNING LATE FOR YOUR SCHOOL RISHI. SO PLEASE GET UP.." {BETA RISHI IT'S ALREADY 6:30 BETA. AB UTTJAVO AUR TUMHE SCHOOL KE LIYE LATE HORAHAE HAIN NAA. ACHE BACHE HO NAA AB JALDI UTHJAAVO..} PLEADED THE CHILD'S MOTHER, BUT IT SEEMS LIKE HE DIDN'T CARE IT.. SHE COUNTIUED PLEADING HIM AND HER HUSBAND CALLED HIM "SHRUTHI WHERE IS MY WATCH AND MY SOCKS IAM SEARCHING THEM FOR LONG BUT DIDN'T GOT THEM"  SHE GAVE THE THINGS TO HER HUSBAND AND WENT INTO KITCHEN TO PREPARE BREAK FAST FOR HER FAMILY..

                     "RISHI GET UP FAST. YOU ARE RUNNING LATE FOR SCHOOL AND I HAVE TO LEAVE TO HOSPITAL WAKE UP FAST.." SHOUTED ONE GIRL AND FINALY WOKE UP HER NEPHEW. RISHI GOT UP AND WENT TO WASHROOM AND THE GIRL WENT DIRECTLY INTO KITCHEN.. SHE STEEPED INSIDE THE KITCHEN AND GREETED HER BHABHI AND STARTED MAKING TWO CUPS OF COFFEE FOR HER AND HER BROTHER..SHE WAS DONE WITH COFFEE AND WENT TO HER BROTHER'S ROOM AND THEY BOTH HAD COFFEE TOGEATHER AS THIS WAS THEIR DAILY ROUTINE.. 
                  
                                 HER BHABHI YELLED HER "JODHAAA WHERE ARE YOU??? MUMMYJI HAS FALLED UNCONCIOUS COME HERE FAST!!!!" JODHA WENT RUNNING TO HER MOTHER AND CHECKED HER PULSE AND FOUNDOUT THAT HER PULSE WAS VERY LOW AND AT NIGHT SHE DIDN'T EVEN TOOK HER MEDICINES AS A RESULT HER SUGARLEVEL WAS SOO-LOW.. SHE SAID HER BHABHI TO BRING A GLASS OF WATER AND PUT 2 SPOONS OF SUGAR IN IT. SHE BOUGHT SUGAR WATER AND JODHA GAVE THIS SUGAR WATER TO HER MOM AND SAID "BHABHI PLZ TAKE CARE OF HER AND AS SHE GAINS HER CONCIOUS YOU PLZ GIVE HER THE MEDICINES.. I HAVE TO GO TO HOSPITAL IAM HAVING AN URGENT CASE SO PLEASE.. IAM LEAVING.." {BHABHI KYA APP PLEASE MAM KI KHAYAAL RAKHSAKTI HAIN? MERA HOSPITAL JAANA BOHUT ZARURI HAIN AUR HAA APP MOM KO HOSH AATE HE MEDICINES DE DENA OK..}

                                   SHE GOT HOLD OF HER CAR KEYS AND GOT RADY TO LEAVE.. SHE WAS DRIVING THE CAR AS FAST AS SHE COULD.. WHILE TRAVELLING SHE GOT A PHONE CALL FROM HER FRIEND MOTI.. SHE ATTENTED THE CALL AND ASKED "WHAT HAPPENED WHY ARE YOU SO TENSED???" SHE REPILIED "JODHA COME FAST HERE IS A EMERGENCY CASE A BABY IS SUFFERING FROM BREATHING PROBLEM.. OR ELSE YOU SAY ME WHAT TO DO I WILL DO IT.." JODHA SAID OH GOD OK FIRST YOU KEEP OXYGEN PIPE TO BABY AND THEN JUST MAKE HIM LAY ON ONE SIDE AND JUST BEAT SLOWLY ON HIS BACK..  AND-" SHE WAS SAYING SOMETHING AND IN BETWEEN SHE HAD A CRASH WITH ANOTHER AUDI CAR.. "OHH SHUT" SAID JODHA AND ESCAPED FROM THE SITUATION AS SHE GOT THE CHANCE.. THE MAN IN CAR WAS NOT ABLE TO SEE JODHA BUT MANAGED TO GET DOWN HER CAR NUMBER... MAN IN CAR WAS NONEOTHER THAN JALAL. HE WAS TOO FRUSTATED AND CALLED UP ABDUL AND SAID"NOW I WILL SEND YOU ONE CAR NO PLZ COLLECT DETAILS OF THAT CAR AND SEND ME IN AN HOUR.." AND HUNG UP THE CALL..

                 PRECAP: ABDUL GAVE CAR DETIALS TO JALAL AND JALAL SMIRKED SEEING THE NAME OF THE CAR OWNER...

SO FRNDS, IAM DONE WITH CHAPTER 1.. I WILL PM U ALL WHEN I UPDATE NEXT CHAPTER.. PLZ HIT LIKE BUTTON AND DO COMMENT..
                                                 -BHARGAVI..
Edited by bhargavikrishna - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
nice chapter dr..update soon..eagerly waiting..tks for the pm dr..
Posted: 8 years ago
lovely update ...precap is interesting... Continue soon
Posted: 8 years ago
bhargavi update next chaptr of teri dhadkan mein m eagrly waiting yr
Posted: 8 years ago
nyc chapter n continue soon both d stories

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