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PYAAR TO PYAAR HI HAI (Page 2)

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Posted: 24 May 2015 at 3:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ApekshaM

heya Maria... I'm much more excited to know that u r back finally..!!! well if u r going torture us with ur super fantastic stories.. then I'm way to happy to be tortured... TongueApprove

I loved the prologue... but lil confused abt the couple praja helping praja.. Ouch anyways I think my confusion will be cleared as the story will progress... Wink

PS - pls... continue with ur previous story yaar... I'm in love with it.. I'm dieing to read that story completely... plz... Big smile and ha.. do continue with also soon...Smile

awww
thank you so much
dont worry the confusion will be cleared
thanks a lot again 
and the part is in progress

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Posted: 24 May 2015 at 3:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sam622

pls do continue...

yeah sure
will do
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Posted: 24 May 2015 at 3:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aayu_26

Hey white princess you must not be knowing me...I'm aayu and new in this forum. Btw what should I call you?
Looking forward to your story please continue Smile

thanks a lot
you can call me maria

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Posted: 24 May 2015 at 3:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by twilightlover29

Wow we have a come back writer on the block- welcome back...I'm sure many of your friends and admirers have missed you and would be glad to have you back...I'm started sometime back so I'm not sure if I have read your previous works but do kindly share the links so that I can enjoy them like so many others have...

Nice prologue and interested in knowing teh cother couple as well though I have my doubts which one it is going to be...

So update soon!!!

Loads of Love

thank you thank you
thanks alot
felt really good by your words
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Posted: 24 May 2015 at 3:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by coderlady

Welcome back. I have not been around that long so don't know your previous work. We can never have too many stories, so please continue.

The other couple can be none other than Chakrapani and Saubhagyawati. Well it could be but that's my guess.

thanks
no probs we can make new stories
your guess is not right 
its not chak-saubh
if we didnt say also 
they will help
its a different couple i am saying
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Posted: 24 May 2015 at 3:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Suranya_Titli

do continue!! Clap

yes will sure
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Posted: 27 May 2015 at 6:58am | IP Logged
Thank you so much guys for this much support
PART 1:

IT is a pleasant morning in mewad
starting with the beautiful geet of jaiwanta bai in temple with her warriot husband,fearless son and her whole family beside her

after the aarti over
she turns and gives prashad to everyone
that time...

sevak:kamba kadi hukum
US:kadi kamba boliye
sevak:aap ke liye yeh patra aaya hai hukum
US:acha dijiye
the sevak gives the letter and leaves

pr:kiska sandesh hai daajiraj jisse dekhar aap itne khush ho raha hai
us:yeh raja jaimal ji ka patra hai
jb:arreh wah !! unse milkar kitne samay ho gaya na rana ji
db:par raja jaimal hai kaun rana ji 
us:dbji raja jaimal ji hamare purane aur bohut acche mitraaap inhe nahi jaanti hongi
hum log hamare hamare rajyo main itna vyast ho gaye ki samay hi nahi nikal paaye
pr:is patra main kya likha hai daajiraaj 
koi vishesh baat
us:haan kuwar pratap jaimal ji ka  badi beti ka vivah ho raha hai dho maine baat
unhone hamain aur hamare kuch purane dosto ko issi maine bulaya hai aur bkiyon ko agle maine
jb:arreh meethi bai itna badi hogayi hamein patha hi nahi chala
us:haan jaiwantabaiji
jb:aur unki ek aur beti haina
us:haan par hum itne varsho main unka naam thak bhool gaye
db:koi baat nahi rana ji jab hum waha jayenge toh jo chuta hai sab kuch mila lenge
us:toh taiyaari kar lijiye jaiwanta bai ji hum sab jaa rahe hai
pr:kya hamre aana bhi zaroori hai daajiraat
us:haan bilkul kuwar pratap unhone hamari poori parivar ko bulaya hai
aur waha hamare aur bhi purane dost aayenge unn sab se bhi aapka mulakat ho jayega

but still pratap thinks and us comes up with an idea

us:aur haan jaiwanta baiji humne suna hai ki rao mamrukh ji aur unke poori parivar bhi aarahi hain

hearing ''unke poori parivar'' that includes ajabde pratap is happy

us:toh pratap agar aap aana nahi chahthe toh
pr;nahi nahi daajiraj hum kyun aana nahi chayenge unhone itne pyaar se bulaya hai toh jaa sakthe hain na hum
us:toh teeke pratap aap jaakar taiyaariyan kijiye
pr:ji daajiraj

after he leaves with smile the other three broke into laughter

in pratap's room
kuwar pratap is getting ready for the journey with chakrapani

ch;waise baujiraaj aap toh pehle jaana nahi chahthe the toh ab aap aise taiyaari kar rahe hai jaise aap se kush iss yatre se koi aur hai hi nahi
pr:matlab kya hai aapka chakra pani
ch:yahi ki iska kaaran ajabde baisa toh nahi
pr:aajkal aap kuch zyada hi sochne lage hai chup chaap apna kaam kijiye samje
ch:ji baujiraaj

pratap made chakra to keep quiet but people truth never hides

precap:kisise hui pratap ki mulakaat[it is not ajabde]

if anyone is confused let me clear saying this is totally different from what was the story
with many fictional characters
and this is the time when he started to realise something for ajabde
and for a change dheerbai is very good in this series as she was the first episode

if you like please comment and like
and if anyone needs pm except in my friend list people please let me know so that i could easily send pm of updates for you

hope you guys liked the starting...

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Posted: 27 May 2015 at 7:29am | IP Logged
hey Maria. .HugHugHug

loved the part.. wahi toh mein sochu..ki bhootni kaise badal gayi.. Ouch and jab meine tumhara Note pada.. then I got it... waise I used to love her in 1st some episode's.. kitna pyaar karti thi pratu se.. phir pata nhi achaanak konsa Bhoot sawaar hogaya uss par.. TongueLOL well I think it will be happy happy story.. isn't it?!

waise mulakat kiski karwa rahi ho pratap se.. ??! chalo Yeh toh next part mein hi pata chalega.. Par Kisi phool ya kaate ko beech mein mat lana behana.. aur bohot saare praja moments chahiye.. ( sorry for my lambi list.. LOL excited hu na.. issiliye kuch jyada hi demand kar rahi Hu. .Tongue)
ab jaldi jaldi update karna..

PS - waise I'm first to comment.. Yayyy.!! Party

Edited by ApekshaM - 27 May 2015 at 7:31am

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