Kaya OS: Bas Haq Hai Ik Mera Last Part/Page-20 (Page 9)

ShadowHearts Senior Member

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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
It was Superb! :D
Update soon and thanks for the pm <3

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KaYa_licious Goldie

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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
Awesome Awesome and just awesome..
I love Kabir getting jealous.. and Ananya's excitement about working in Late night shift...What if they got lock and ahem ahem*
Sorry yar..They are so hot that I couldn't control my wild imagination...
Btw Thanks for PM and update next part soon.

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aash2302 Senior Member

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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 1:17pm | IP Logged
Awesome story waiting for the next update

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bawaswift IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 2:34pm | IP Logged
Hey Ana,, What a collection of emotions.. StarClap Loved to read the Pov's of Kabir n Ananya..Embarrassed
Their love is purely to themselves.. and their reach to each other is only thru their work... 
Kabir where is and have become so possessive for Ananya.. she on the other hand is very much in the line of regards for him.. 
He is in an authoritative tone making assure that she is listening to him... she is very much in favor of regarding him as a boss more than anything.. She has nothing to hide.. but she is observing that he is looking sharply at her.. And he is assure of the fact that she has full faith in him..
This OS is very beautifully taking the turns Ana.. n thats what i am liking abt the story.. 
Waiting more to see if Kabir wud really life her back home.. n in between what more happens to break the ice.. n to feel the love they both possess.. Embarrassed
Kabir's apprehensions are growing.. n Ananya is sure of his presence n a great opportunity to work with him.. Great contrast.. 

Lovely.. Plzz do continue.. Clap

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bawaswift IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 2:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..oneOone..

Originally posted by bawaswift

Awesome start Ana... StarClap
Loved to read Kabir n Ananya's mind n heart through their own words.. ! Its great to have an OS with the same emotional facet when we all are living the life of Kaya now.. Embarrassed Very fine narration.. !!!
Will be waiting to know more how Kabir wud get the situation right for Ananya as he has put her in with his own anger.. !
Thanks for this superb narration dear.. Plzz do continue.. ! Waiting eagerly.. Smile

thank you sooo much bawa...
glad to see u liking the emotional display of kaya... u really think ananya is a girl to get ovrpower by his anger...she do know how to handle him ;)
I have also started thinking so.. WinkLOL But really.. they both make a lovely pair even with only their POv's collected.. Clap

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cherrynicolem Goldie

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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 2:52pm | IP Logged
Read both chps in a go
They are superb and written in a new way 

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--Janvie-- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 3:33pm | IP Logged
Wonderful Update Ana!ClapLoved it.!!Heart
The way you depicted the constant struggle of Kabir to get a hold over his emotions was Amazing...StarSimilar was the case with Ananya too trying to be composed infront of Kabir.!!Embarrassed
I like that Kabir Sharma don't changes his attitude whatsoever He feel or not...HeheWinkIt makes the story more HOT.!!Blushing Blushing LOLI'm loving the possesive side of Kabir and I just can't get enough of it.!!LOL Embarrassed Embarrassed

And Yup Talking of Sujal as you mentioned him,Sujal's love and possesiveness is of whole lot different level,Its a full on madness which gives a different high quality to love,I consider that uncomparable(Punji had similar qualities though as Kmh was based on kthWinkThats why I had always seen a similar madness in Arjuhi resembling Sujal-Kashish's)But All I can say is Kabir is no less than anyone...He is gonna turn out to be a Classic lover...Its Rajeev Khandelwal playing the charachter after all.!!Day Dreaming Wink Heart
Pls continue soon...Thanks so much for the PM.!!Big smile Hug Hug

Edited by --Janvie-- - 12 May 2015 at 3:47pm

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milinda.shreyz IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 5:01pm | IP Logged
ohmygosh ohmygosh ! thatz it !! brilliant enticing and a cliffhanger ending...lovely lovely dear ! thank u for updating and letting me waiting in anticipation for part three. I am shreya , what shall i call u ?

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