Kaya OS: Bas Haq Hai Ik Mera Last Part/Page-20 (Page 21)

pd786 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 22 June 2015 at 1:41pm | IP Logged
beautiful end
loved the whole story

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bawaswift IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 22 June 2015 at 3:02pm | IP Logged
Nice and a wonderful ending... ClapClap

Thanks Ana Big smile

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PrInCeSs_dIVa IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 22 June 2015 at 3:29pm | IP Logged
It was so beautifully written! I absolutely loved his way of telling her that he didn't want to lose her and it was the fear of losing her that made him take this step forward :-)

He made her work so much hahaha...But it was all worth it in the end.. A beautiful ending..totally justified... 

Thank you for such a beautiful story @-}--

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Constantin Newbie

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Posted: 23 June 2015 at 9:53pm | IP Logged
Wow! What a lovely ending!Big smile The proposal was just too beautiful! Please write another interesting story on KaYa soon... and please try to pm me too...SmileSmileSmile

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Dark-Beauty IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 June 2015 at 2:33am | IP Logged
Hey this is the first tym 'm reading something on these couple
n i rly rly love it
it's fantastic, awsm, blossom os
thanks for the pm

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YaSha0512 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 June 2015 at 8:55am | IP Logged
lovely short story
liked how both were trying to make the other jealous
but kabirs proposal had to be the best part
he had to torment her some more  b4 proposing... loading her with work to make sure she stayed late ...he was doing his best to rial her up n get a reaction n it worked
enjoyed reading
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

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sanghita0000 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 June 2015 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
WOW!! beautiful dear...loved it...waiting for last part

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SonalikaSingh Senior Member

Joined: 12 November 2011
Posts: 471

Posted: 04 July 2015 at 2:21pm | IP Logged
I hv hardly seen reporters as i m not a tv person bcoz of my work schedule n responsibilities.
But i hv seen some promos of the serial between some movie on sunday n noticed the ravishing looking ananya n hot rajeev khandelwal.ghsp was the only serial i hv ever watched.

God if it is so interesting like u hv depicted in the os, i guess i hv to watch it.hi hi

U hv a niche for writing now.this os is brilliant.creating this kind of mind nerving passion sequence without breaking the aura continuously is not easy. N ur characters carried their charm till last min.

I somehow guessed it that he will propose her last night but by asking for 1500 i did not know.ha ha. N i really got confused with mental asylum part. Ha ha

Keep writing. Luv u n ur os

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