Kaya OS: Bas Haq Hai Ik Mera Last Part/Page-20 (Page 12)

yoginisahakari Goldie

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Posted: 21 May 2015 at 9:55pm | IP Logged
Amazing storyline.
Would love reading further.
Also pl add me to us pm list.

Love and prayer

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..oneOone.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 13138

Posted: 22 May 2015 at 2:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Luv-IKNMP

Originally posted by ..oneOone..

My all rational clauses and debates about friendship went out the window when I next saw her turning around and hug Ronnie with a warm smile.

The heart inside body just busted with anger while my mind made me go mad with fury.

Seeing Ronnie hands moving behind her on the petite waist, I literally could feel my body own fire.

Leaning close, she whispered something in Ronnie's ear, resulting in a smile to both their faces.

And that was it for me.

Getting up the next second, I marched towards the glass door of my cabin before peeking out and speak in a really dangerous tone.

"Miss Ananya Kashyap..." Hearing my voice, she quickly sprang apart from Ronnie and looked at me with those doe eyes

Those were enough to melt me right away but the next look at Ronnie, made me surprisingly angry once again before I looked back at her.

My eyes then shifted to Ananya, who was just looking down. Her curly hairs were falling on one side of her shoulder, giving me a good glimpse of her other strong one, covered with a strap.

As if the earlier torture of seeing her in the arms of another man wasn't enough.

To hear that she was excited and counting on him to drop her off was making him feel elated. It proves that she trusts him a bit more than he thought.

This was my favorite part!!.. I was just like Day DreamingBlushingDay DreamingBlushingDay DreamingBlushing

Loved your OS Ana!!... ClapClapClap

Pls keep up the fantastic work WinkWinkWink

Love ya! 

awee...thank you so much yaar... glad those parts became ur fav...
hope u will like this os further on two...just two more parts :))
Zannat. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 22 May 2015 at 2:34pm | IP Logged
We are waiting for your Update Embarrassed

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..oneOone.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 13138

Posted: 22 May 2015 at 2:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ttrocks

Amazing start Ana! Plz continue soon Day Dreaming

Originally posted by Gouri_Joshi

Brilliant part ana
U should let her in kabir
Update soon
And thanks for the pm

Originally posted by Maha149

Beautiful yr amazing love it keep rock

thank you so much girls...
lets see how will he stop her to get in his system...
so happy with the response here...Embarrassed
..oneOone.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 13138

Posted: 22 May 2015 at 2:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by zakter

We are waiting for your Update Embarrassed

I am working on it right now...hope it will be up tonight or by tomorrow...
sorry was caught up with my ff...
..oneOone.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 13138

Posted: 22 May 2015 at 2:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pd786

wow ana
very well written 
thanks for the pm
my name is not in the list please add up

coming back to the update
kabir's possessiveness is amazing
waiting to see more
*i want this to happen in the show yaar*
anyways, update soon
pm me please


hey dear...
thank you so much...
ur name is surly in the list g...dont worry...
so happy to see u liking possessive kabir...
right now, we are seeing a bit of him in show too that is just activating this image in my mind more..hehe...
..oneOone.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 13138

Posted: 22 May 2015 at 2:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by krazykaju

awsome update.lovely and intresting story.
i am loving this side of great kabir sharma. plz try to update soon .
thnk u so much for pm.
keep smiling

hey dear...
thank you so glad u are liking it...
m sorry was busy with stuff n other writings...
but it will b updated by tomorrow In Sha Allah...
stay blessedEmbarrassed
..oneOone.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 13138

Posted: 22 May 2015 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by akyabiggestfan

Thanks a lot for the pmBig smile
Loved the was way too awesome!!
Kabir sharma ko aise main zarur dekhna chahungi onscreenDay Dreaming
Possessive and all haan!!!!WinkTongueLOL
He's finding a scared anu adorable...
Loved his thoughts on ananya and her maa's conversation...
it'll be uber romantic if their car breaks down somewhere and they eat dinner also together kisi shaant jagah meinDay Dreaming
(Well, I've gone crazy so I guess I'll stop blabberingLOL)
Please update soon dear...Smile

haha yaar...
abhi dekhne ko mill raha hai possessive jealous n egoistic kabir...
so glad u r liking the way this story is moving... break down...ahem ahem...
lets seee kia hota haiWink

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