Kaya OS: Bas Haq Hai Ik Mera Last Part/Page-20 - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update Ana..loved it 👏
Loved to read the POV's of Kabir and Ananya.
Thank you for the update.
Please continue soon.

Thank you for the PM.😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for the pm Ana
Again beautifully written
Loved Kabir's ,because of his past he is unsure whether he can let another person see that Kabie which he keeps hiddenbehind his stern persona
Pls continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
I love this story
And both their feelings ❤️
I hope he DOES drop her home
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Just read the 2 chapters today and I really like the way Kabir is possessive towards Ananya already. Please do PM me when you update next, have sent you a buddy request for it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ana...Loved it dear
It was so sweet
the POV's are very well written
I'm simply loving this story
thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
That was simply amazing!!! Read both the parts and i am very impressed with the story line. Its quite descriptive which kept me hooked. And what i loved about it that it was not fast paced. I like slow and realistic stories and i can say this is a perfect one :)

Loved your writing. Looking forward to the next part if you continue writing.
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Posted: 8 years ago
waiting for the update 
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Posted: 8 years ago
What an amazing update that was! Dear, be ready to be blamed for you are increasing the desires of seeing THE POSSESSIVE KABIR to SUCH level (And more..😆) in me..God! He couldn't even tolerate Ronnie's gaze on Ananya..😆 How  hot will Mr. Sharma look in this avatar.. So, he is realising the changes in him and also has an idea of what his stupid reporter thinks of him. Really loving your work..😃👍🏼 Thanks a lot for the PM🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome story
Very nice Concept
Possisive kabir loved him
Plz add me in your pm list
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing OS...loved it a lot