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SidNi OS Main Zameen Tu Aasmaan

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Posted: 09 May 2015 at 7:00am | IP Logged
It is raining OS and TS today so u can ignore it..
Its very long and not so good i guess!Confused
SidNi OS Main Zameen Tu Aasmaan

"Sir shot ready hai !" 

He got up and went away waving his hands to the crowd which was going all gaga over him.

The huge crowd had gathered to watch the touted superstar "Siddharth Khurrana".

He had achieved this fame in such a short span of time yet was acclaimed to be a superstar. A star that inspires generations.

A star who had inspired Roshni.
Roshni Patel, a middle-class girl but she did not want to be a middle-class forever.

She wanted to be a singer,a big singer. She wanted to make India proud of herself. Siddharth Khurrana was her inspiration,the inspiration to possess talent and it would be admired either today or tomorrow!

Roshni had come all the way from Gujrat to Mumbai to see and probably meet Siddharth Khurrana.
The crowd was shouting his name.

 'Siddharth!!',one shouted.

'Sid!',the other one said.

'Siddharth beta..',an old woman said.

'Mr. S!!' he heard a voice and stopped abrubtly.

His anger had reached its peaks.

"Who the hell shouted Mr. S?" ,he demanded rather angrily.

"I asked who did?", he said his anger reaching another level.

"I did ..", came a voice.

Siddharth looked at the girl and realised she was scared of him. She had elegant features and though was wearing a denim jeans and a loose top he thought she looked rather cute!

"Come to my vanity with this girl now ,Martin!" ,he shouted on his PR manager.

"Yes Sir!" ,Martin stuttered.

VANITY VAN

He heard a knock on the door and asked her to come in.
He could see she was still scared of him but was busy staring here and there with a curious and dreamy look.

"Sit!", he ordered.

"See u need not be scared of me." ,he said assuring her by looking into her eyes and got lost in her hazel ones. She too felt drawn to him unknowingly.

"Ok so may I know ur name Mademoiselle?",he said in the most gentle-manly fashion.

Roshni was flustered seeing his courteous behaviour.

 "Roshni Patel!" ,she replied.

"Ok so Ms. Roshni can I know why you called me Mr. S?" ,he asked seriously.

"Because I do not think I know u that well to call you Siddharth or Sid and I would also not call u Siddharth beta. So I thought why not call u Mr. S?" ,she said cheerfully forgetting all her fears.

Siddharth goes back in time and thinks,
'So today we will give u a new name ok? '
Sid-reject
Siddy-reject
'Hey how about Mr.India?'
All started laughing along with him
.
'Perfect, Mr. S!!'

"Mr. S are u listening? ",Roshni asked waving her hands in front of his face trying to get his attention.

"Ya ya, so are u a fan of mine?", he said wanting to distract himself.

"No you are my inspiration.",she said proudly.

"U want to become an actor?" ,he asked curiously.

"No no a singer. U are my inspiration to achieve the place I deserve..",she said trying to explain him.

"Ok tell me more about you then. ",he started and when their small talks continued from morning till evening they didn't get to know.

In the meantime he had got to know almost everything about her including the fact that she indeed was a very talented singer.He had told a few things about himself and had postponed the shoot for the next day!!

"So Roshni it was really nice meeting u!",he said escorting her out.

"U too Mr. S !" ,she said happily.

"Call me Sid..U know me now as much as others do.Here's my no. call if u are in any problem!", he said leaving when he heard her voice.

"Mr. S i'll call u Sid the day I come to know u more than the others." ,she said winking at him and left.

Siddharth just stood there for a moment or two stunned by her answer. Then smiled to himself and thought of how she was different than the rest.

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3 months had passed since that day and Siddharth had made Roshni his counsellor and advisor.
They had become really close friends in the 3 months of the shoot.

"Siddharth sir Neha ma'am has arrived." informed Martin when Sid and Roshni were laughing at a joke.

"Ya I m coming u go." ,Siddharth said arrogantly.

"Mr. S why do u behave so rudely with your staff?,Roshni asked him.

"Because sometimes u need to suppress ur actual emotions." ,he said lost.

"There is something u have still not told me and it disturbs you. I need to know that as your counsellor.",she stated holding his hand in hers.

"Why do u think I haven't told u something? I have told u everything Roshni!" ,he said looking here and there.

" U are a very good actor!" ,she winked and left him wonderstruck again at this girl's words.
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"Do I love Mr.S?" ,Roshni asked herself roaming in a field near the shooting area.

 Manwa laage
 O manwa laage
 Laage re sanware
 Laage re sanware
 Le tera hua jiya ka, jiya ka, jiya ka ye gaanv re

(She starts singing roaming around with her eyes closed. She imagines herself in a beautiful dress waiting for him to come and take away her heart)
 

 Musaafir hoon main door ka
 Deewana hoon main dhoop ka
 Mujhe na bhaye..
 Na bhaye..na bhaye chaanv re..

 (She starts imagining him in a white tuxedo handsomely dressed. He extends his hands towards her and they both start dancing!)

 Manwa laage
 O manwa laage
 Laage re sanware
 Laage re sanware
 Le tera hua jiya ka, jiya ka, jiya ka ye gaanv re

 (He suddenly dissappears and she starts searching for him here and there clad in a beautiful white gown)

 Aisi kaisi boli tere naino ne boli
 Jaane kyon main doli
 Aisa lage teri ho li main..
 Tu mera..

 (She starts telling him the feelings of her heart in a hope that he will come out from hiding, listening to her plight and take her in his arms)

 Humm.. tune baat kholi
 Kacche dhaago mein piro li
 Baaton ki rangoli se na khelun aise holi
 Main.. naa tera..

(He comes out and holds her when she is about to fall and then moves back saying he is not hers to own)

 O kisi ka toh hoga hi tu
 Kyun na tujhe main hi jeetun

 (She starts explaining him that he wiuld be someone's so why can't she be with him)

 Khule khabon mein
 Jeete hain, jeete hain baawre..

 (They start dancing again and he just clicks his fingers in front of her face saying she is dreaming with her eyes open and goes away again)

 Mann ke dhaage
 O mann ke dhaage
 Dhaage pe saanwre
 Dhaage pe saanwre
 Hai likha mene tera hi, tera hi, tera hi toh naam re

(She starts singing full of love and conveys how she has already written his name on her heart and how he resides in her heart now)

Her song gets disturbed by a clapping sound.She turns and sees a fairly handsome guy standing there.

"Hi , I m Raj..And u are?" ,he asked chivalorously.

"Roshni !" ,she replied shaking his outstretched hand.

"So Roshni are u a singer?" ,he asked interested.

"No i m not a singer but aspire to be one." ,she replied.

"U want to work with me? I can get u opportunities. Ur voice is really mesmerizing." ,he said.

"Thank u so much but.." ,she started but by then Siddharth came and introduced them to each other.

"Roshni this is Raj,he is a music director u know." ,he said.

"Ya we just met!" ,Roshni said still thinking about Raj's offer.

"So Roshni are u up for it?" ,he asked enthusiastically.

"Sure!!" ,Roshni exclaimed happily.

"What's going on?" ,Siddharth asked feeling left out.

"I m going to sing Mr. S !" ,Roshni claimed happily and hugged him tightly.

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The closeness of Raj and Roshni irked Siddharth to no extent.
It had been 4 months since their first meeting.

Roshni was totally in love with Siddharth but he was still not clear about what he felt for this girl who had entered his life like a storm.

"Roshni..!" ,Siddharth stuttered.

"Mr. S" ,Roshni sounded concerned.

Siddharth had drunk too much seeing Raj and Roshni giggling away in each other's company. Roshni had come to help him immediately seeing him tumbling here and there.

"Roshni call me Siddharth na!" ,he pleaded totally intoxicated.
"Mr. S!" ,she said but he cut him off.

"No no u won't but today i'll tell u my secret" ,he whispered in her ears which made her shiver in anticipation.

They had come quite far from the party venue and Roshni made him to sit on the stairs and he started.

"U know I loved a girl named Tanvi but she left me. She used to call me Mr. S and thats how I took an instant liking towards u. She bloody used mw ,she said she was only after me for my money! After that I became very reserved and made the world see a different Siddharth who had only one aim to become successful without the love of anyone!"

He was crying by now and so was Roshni. He continued saying amidst tears-

"But then u came and i opened up again! I started sharing things with u. I started laughing with u, I forgot time when I was with u but u also left me for that Raj.!" ,he completed angrily.

"Siddharth!!" ,she finally said his name and he felt as if he got everything.

"I will never leave u!" ,Roshni said confidently kissing his forehead.

"Please dont leave me! I love you." ,he said and passed out in her lap.

Roshni was overwhelmed.

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NEXT DAY

Siddharth wakes up with a headache only to see Roshni sleeping on his shoulder. A smile adorned her tear-strained face!

He wondered what happened yesterday. He shook her to wake her up.

"Roshni!" ,he softly called out.

"Umm Siddharth.." ,she replied with a smile getting up.
He was shocked.

"U just called me Siddharth!!" ,he exclaimed happy and surprised but it changed into worry soon.

"Did I tell u something last night?" ,he asked hoping he did not hear what he heard next.

"Ya u told of Tanvi!!" ,she started but he jerked off hearing the name and said "GET OUT OF MY SIGHT!" he said boiling inside his heart.

"Siddharth.." ,she started to say when he abruptly stopped her and said, "No!! I don't want anyone who is related to her or knows her near me.So just leave from my life forever!" he said and turned his face to the other side trying to control his anger

She just left the place not knowing what to say!!

EVENING

" How can she dissappear like this?" ,he heard someone shouting.

By now he had remembered most of what happened the last night. He was ashamed of himself and wanted to get her back but was fearful that she would leave him.

"What is happening? Whats the noise all about? " ,he asked Martin.

"Sir wo Roshni ma'am is missing! " ,Martin said in an haste.

Siddharth's world just slipped away hearing the news and fear gripped him ,a fear of losing her forever and ever but then it was replaced by fury.

"Arey she is not missing she is leaving for her home. Don't worry she informed me." ,Raj informed and everyone seemed to relax.

' I have to find her!' thought Siddharth.

He went to bus stand ,airport and at last at train station but found no clue of her.

"Where are u Roshni!" ,he cried standing outside the station leaning on his car for support.

Suddenly he saw a bus moving from there and thought he saw Roshni in it. He ran behind the bus forgetting his car there.He stopped the bus and searched in it like a mad man for her but all in vain she was not here.

He got off the bus and stood there looking up at the skies praying to get her back to him.

'I have lost my love once, I don't have the power to lose it again'.

"Mr. S!!" ,he heard a familiar voice.

"Roshni !!" ,he turned and hugged her tightly but loosened the hug seeing her not reciprocating back!

"Thank God I found u,where are u going? Why did u call me Mr. S and not Siddharth?" ,he shooted questions on her.

" I thought I know u Mr. S but i don't !!" ,she said leaving him when he held her hand and said-

"Today u will not leave me.Kal toh u said u'll never leave me then what now huh?" ,he asked making it evident he remembered all about the previous night.

"I misunderstood that u said that to me but u said it to Tanvi!" ,she argued.

"Oh please we both know..Ok fine lets leave that! Roshni Patel I love you!! Will u marry me? " ,he said closing his eyes in fear waiting for her response.

"But we are so different,we belong to different worlds. Agar main zameen hun toh tum aasmaan ho!" ,she said although her heart just wanted to utter one word YES.

He came closer to her and held her hands. "Tum wo zameen ho jisne uss aasmaan ko hasna sikhaya hai,zindagi ko phir se jeena sikhaya hai! " ,he said cupping her face.

She was crying hearing his words and just nodded while hugging him.

"I will marry u Siddharth." ,she said still sobbing.

They broke the hug after some time.

"Say the three words!" ,Siddharth demanded impatiently.

"U will hear them when I achieve my dream mister!" ,she said teasing him.

"I will not have to wait long then!" ,he said and winked at her making her stunned at his words.

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Thats the fifth OS.
Not so happy with it ,rest I leave with u guys to judge.
And very long I know!!


Edited by Starsfireflies - 09 May 2015 at 7:21am

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Posted: 09 May 2015 at 7:09am | IP Logged
res/unres
its awesome..
not to forget 
me first..!!!LOL
awesome os
loved it
do write more
thanks for the pm..!!


Edited by nidhi.nidsnicks - 09 May 2015 at 7:18am

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Posted: 09 May 2015 at 7:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nidhi.nidsnicks

res/unres
its awesome..
not to forget 
me first..!!!LOL
awesome os
loved it
do write more
thanks for the pm..!!
thank u did u not find it boring?
well thank u n i'll fulfill ur wish soon!
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Posted: 09 May 2015 at 7:26am | IP Logged
You have become an OS master Tongue
I liked the story.. MR. S.. Wink Dramatic ending LOL So will we get an OS tomorrow too or it ends today? ( I hope we get one everyday but that is too much to ask for Silly)

P.S I was waiting for ur OS since morning Confused


Edited by skinnypal - 09 May 2015 at 7:32am

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Posted: 09 May 2015 at 8:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by skinnypal

You have become an OS master Tongue
I liked the story.. MR. S.. Wink Dramatic ending LOL So will we get an OS tomorrow too or it ends today? ( I hope we get one everyday but that is too much to ask for Silly)

P.S I was waiting for ur OS since morning Confused
thanks so much..
well tomorrow also it will get this late!
i want to give an os everyday but i dont think i have so many ideasTongue
 
p.s. oh u were waiting? i hope ur wait was worth it!
and i hug u back for this comment.LOL

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Posted: 09 May 2015 at 8:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by .chandni.

wonderful story
thanksLOL
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Posted: 09 May 2015 at 9:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Starsfireflies

Originally posted by skinnypal

You have become an OS master Tongue
I liked the story.. MR. S.. Wink Dramatic ending LOL So will we get an OS tomorrow too or it ends today? ( I hope we get one everyday but that is too much to ask for Silly)

P.S I was waiting for ur OS since morning Confused
thanks so much..
well tomorrow also it will get this late!
i want to give an os everyday but i dont think i have so many ideasTongue
 
p.s. oh u were waiting? i hope ur wait was worth it!
and i hug u back for this comment.LOL

Ok.. update ur FF instead na Tongue 

P.S - Yeah yeah it was totally worth the wait Wink Hug

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Posted: 09 May 2015 at 9:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by skinnypal

Originally posted by Starsfireflies

Originally posted by skinnypal

You have become an OS master Tongue
I liked the story.. MR. S.. Wink Dramatic ending LOL So will we get an OS tomorrow too or it ends today? ( I hope we get one everyday but that is too much to ask for Silly)

P.S I was waiting for ur OS since morning Confused
thanks so much..
well tomorrow also it will get this late!
i want to give an os everyday but i dont think i have so many ideasTongue
 
p.s. oh u were waiting? i hope ur wait was worth it!
and i hug u back for this comment.LOL

Ok.. update ur FF instead na Tongue 

P.S - Yeah yeah it was totally worth the wait Wink Hug
maybe tomorrowBig smile

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