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#3: The Alternate Universe-Retelling IPKKND (Thread 4 link on Pg 1) (Page 83)

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Posted: 02 June 2015 at 1:36pm | IP Logged
Great update.  Can't wait to see what happens.

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Posted: 03 June 2015 at 1:05am | IP Logged
payal refused akash proposal..!!!
he is so feeling low..!!
arnav is with kids and khush is reaching..!!
payal is playing cupid here..!!
wondering what anajli has told apu..!!
continue soon..!!

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Posted: 03 June 2015 at 1:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pinky.Raizada

A short but sweet one. 

1) Janu is my word...You can't steal it from The Nanny...LOL. 

2) Awww, Baap and beta are sleeping together with beta hugging his papa. 

3) What did Anjali tell her beti?

4) Hello Hi Bye Bye, Manorama is such a nice lady supporting her son's choice and will help him get Payal. 

5) Enjoy your vacation. See you Later. Adios Amigo. 

Back from my vacation...back with lots of nice (romantic) ideas...thank you Pinku LOL
Deal done. No more using Janu...okay maybe once or twice Wink

Now warming up to pen down the next update...u update TN/OLAR/the new one with the long title...dont mind...!
Next time, you start a FF/SS/OS, discuss the title name with me...hehe.

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Posted: 03 June 2015 at 1:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shalini.ranjan

Originally posted by Pinky.Raizada

A short but sweet one. 

1) Janu is my word...You can't steal it from The Nanny...LOL. 

2) Awww, Baap and beta are sleeping together with beta hugging his papa. 

3) What did Anjali tell her beti?

4) Hello Hi Bye Bye, Manorama is such a nice lady supporting her son's choice and will help him get Payal. 

5) Enjoy your vacation. See you Later. Adios Amigo. 

Back from my vacation...back with lots of nice (romantic) ideas...thank you Pinku LOL
Deal done. No more using Janu...okay maybe once or twice Wink

Now warming up to pen down the next update...u update TN/OLAR/the new one with the long title...dont mind...!
Next time, you start a FF/SS/OS, discuss the title name with me...hehe.

Okie Dokie. All three updated by sunday, 

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Posted: 03 June 2015 at 3:40am | IP Logged
Shalini, r u back???
Waiting  dear..

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Posted: 03 June 2015 at 5:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nimie207

Finally the much awaited meeting is gonna happen...koi gadbad toh nai hogi na?????

Nimie...!
Gadbad...and now? If any gadbad happened, I think I will be forbidden on IF by a set of 200 members!

LOL

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Posted: 03 June 2015 at 6:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Onlooker

Kushi will be shocked and out of her wits to say the least..Now, will they get another room or will all of them scoop in a single room? Arnav, am sure  wants to make a good impression and will not be up with his usual tricks, i guess.

Hey Anu...long time! 

Another room and stuff...hehe...well..throw in a couch and we have another IPK in the making...just kidding!

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Posted: 03 June 2015 at 8:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rk2127

This may sound mean but I found this chappy short may be coz I was scrolling down and down and down for Arshi to come across as Nikhil's mom and Annav uncle, didn't happen Ouch.

But the twist I loved here was Payal playing Cupid, especially when she said no to Akash's proposal. Ain't she got brains here smother the roadblocks in her way (in a good way) and smoother the way for Akash and herself.

Thanks for showing Akash using gym why should only Arnav has that proprietary, no offense just mentioning. And another part I loved was Mami actually accepting Payal for Akash coz she is who he wants. I loved her advice that they can go to her is she can't come and even considering talking to nani. Cool.

And now what does Anjali told her daughter? Is she been told to play Cupid here? For getting her Chote on her family for good?

Only if they know that once Arnav knows about Nikhil's lineage, he ain't going anywhere.

What I wanna read next is a good show down between Arshi, and Arnav's POV.

Hey Ripu...nope didnt mind the 'mean' sound at all...you know, I had finished writing that Chapter in two straight hours...just in time to pack up my things and leave for my trip..! 

Yes, I always used to wonder...why should only ASR use the gym to maintain his body-shody...hehe

Will try to bring in what you mentioned...a good Arshi showdown is a promise...Arnav's POV...hmmm...thats where the 'try' will be!
PS- HOpe Palki is not keeping u up in the nights!

Hug

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