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#3: The Alternate Universe-Retelling IPKKND (Thread 4 link on Pg 1) (Page 78)

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Posted: 30 May 2015 at 3:19pm | IP Logged
This may sound mean but I found this chappy short may be coz I was scrolling down and down and down for Arshi to come across as Nikhil's mom and Annav uncle, didn't happen Ouch.

But the twist I loved here was Payal playing Cupid, especially when she said no to Akash's proposal. Ain't she got brains here smother the roadblocks in her way (in a good way) and smoother the way for Akash and herself.

Thanks for showing Akash using gym why should only Arnav has that proprietary, no offense just mentioning. And another part I loved was Mami actually accepting Payal for Akash coz she is who he wants. I loved her advice that they can go to her is she can't come and even considering talking to nani. Cool.

And now what does Anjali told her daughter? Is she been told to play Cupid here? For getting her Chote on her family for good?

Only if they know that once Arnav knows about Nikhil's lineage, he ain't going anywhere.

What I wanna read next is a good show down between Arshi, and Arnav's POV.

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Posted: 30 May 2015 at 3:43pm | IP Logged
Nice one 
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Posted: 30 May 2015 at 5:13pm | IP Logged
Loved the update!!!
Cannot wait for them to see each other...waiting for the reaction

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Posted: 30 May 2015 at 6:15pm | IP Logged
Because of khushi-Arnav Payal said no to akash? And now akash is heartbroken

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Posted: 30 May 2015 at 7:24pm | IP Logged
Intrigued more while u read the White Rainbow, but I flattened on this story, which making sudden twists making story higher so on. Will start to comment on from my favourites of kids... Ahhh, what can I say about Aashu, her talks r too witty and absolutely loving that. Nikhil, he came out if shell after meets his di,  his actions look s like arnav, atlast he is his son!!! Then, shyam is still in mystery with rukmani. I think he giving positive vibrants towards her. Waiting for story unfold and can't wait for trip incidents.
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Posted: 30 May 2015 at 11:22pm | IP Logged
Waiting to see how arnav will do after he know dat nikhil is his son pls make relized fast
Awesome update

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Posted: 30 May 2015 at 11:25pm | IP Logged
fabulous update 
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Posted: 30 May 2015 at 11:27pm | IP Logged
Their meet is so close now. How is it going to happen? I'm so excited about that. The realization and the aftermath. I hope it'll happen in the next chapter cause I can't wait anymore...

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