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#3: The Alternate Universe-Retelling IPKKND (Thread 4 link on Pg 1) (Page 56)

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Posted: 23 May 2015 at 8:57am | IP Logged
 
Sory Kaan pakadke...OuchOuch bt was hell busy ...OFFICE...no weekends too...CryCry
commin to update...
HAAYE...JUS READ D SAME AGAIN..
Tongue

HEHEHEH!!!!!!!!!!! cutiepie nd his...cute anger nd crib..nd khushi ka cute way of distracting dat was also so cutey cutey...

taekwondo sleep...LOL actually aisa sote hai toh mast need aata haiROFL

again i loved d way u showed d transition between past ..present..d way it was linked wit arnav ka scene wit lav..nd khusi ka wit payal...
amazing ...felt like how we go watch a serial ...a play...one scene shown changed...to another..still linked wit each other...

so d mystery is solved to almost 99 % rest arnav kar dega..jab khushi milegi..heehhe!!!!!!!!...
so finally she poured her pain fear infront of payal..nd aww payall...is sad for her..nd more shocked ...
dat nikhil is arnav ka child..
nd aww...bechari ka cute happiness...is crushed...okay its for some time ..hehe!!!LOLLOL
acha twist in payash ki CHOTI SI LOVE STORY MAINLOLLOL

D MINI WINI ..SOFT CORNER WHICH I HAD for La..dat has gone out of window..Angry
knowing...its her who had ...released d video..not arnav..hope arnav clears d same to him...


so it was abt dis nIGHt...la had manipulated nd forced arnav to b in a realation wit her..
now he can easily ...get out of dis relation ..without any grudges...
BT...am confused wat is stoppin him to shoo away her ...from his life..

is der somethin more to it..kya...abt la n arnav ka relationOuch

only thing remaining to know abt La is whether she is involved wit SHayaam...


okay...here we got a glimpse of ...Shyam...from khushi ka pov...whch puts me in confusion...dat whether he was already a evil or has he now bcome evil ...
coz it seems like ..he was good at start...nd had bcome ...wild or say cruel..after he was denied physical relation ..nd i guess...khushi ..never ...could carry on wit ...dis marraige..den y d hell she married him at first place...
nd she only had ...asked him ..to do as he wants...
nd ..his relation wit all those..sl** ...nd d way he treat dem..its really mysterious...

if he was a devil from start...den i hate him..bt if he was good nd now he has bcome harsh nd cruel...den cant blame ..him..
would really want to read ...Shayam ka pov...
y he is behind on getting nikhil ka custody ..if he hates him..
is it coz ...he is not able to win khushi,...coz of him...
or he really has a motive behind it...or he is a team wit La...

okay ..now again ...dat Sarla has come into picture...or say ..Shayam ka Rukhmini...
if i am not mistaken...
haina..i think i hav  heard dis name..on party night ...where he wanted rukhmini..nd she was not availabe...
now d question arises ..is y she tried to suicide..ConfusedConfusedConfused

heheheh !!!!! u know...Shalu..when i read...dat aman is attending ..Sarla..i was..like..yeh yipee he is  busy wit patient...nd now anjali ke saath ..arnav jayega..for trip nd khushi will tag wit nikhil...
bt den remembered trip toh 3 days ke baad haiOuch

WAISE ...AM MISSING..KARAN...
HE IS ALSO ...GOOD...CHARACTER...BRING HIM BACK ...SOON...PLEASEErmm

CANT WAIT FOR ARSHI KA CONFRONTATION...
HE HAS ALMOST JOINED DOTS...TO HIS PAST ...ONLY THING REMAING...IS KNOWING DAT CHAMP IS HIS BLOOD...HOPE HE GETS HIS DOB SOONEmbarrassed


LOVLY LOVY PART...
SHALU...
REALLY WIAITN...
FOR NEXT PART...
KAB MILEGA...

WAISE ME WIAITN FOR RAINBOW ALSO...Day Dreaming


this is for such a lovly part..

Hug






Edited by Desire6 - 23 May 2015 at 9:01am

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Posted: 23 May 2015 at 1:46pm | IP Logged
awesome like always.. luvd the chapter.. cant wait to see next.. hope arnav will findout soon that nikhil is his son ..
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Posted: 23 May 2015 at 3:44pm | IP Logged

Beautiful update! Enjoyed every bit of it.

Now the truth is coming out Arnav now know the how he has met Khushi and where and he could imaging what could have happened that day or night. Only thing is he has to know is that Khushi is Nikhil's mom and that boy could be his son.
 
And on the other side, Payal is getting to know all the truth. About Arnav, why Khushi married shyam and about Nikhil's paternity.
 
Now Arnav will try to win back Khushi? What is with Shyam? Who is Sarla?
And why Khushi is scared Arnav will take the kid.
 
I'm happy to know Akash proposed but sad that Payal could not enjoy it with her family.
 
Awaiting to see whats Arnav is going to do? will they meet in the school trip? its where they will find out about Nikhil?
 
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 23 May 2015 at 10:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shalini.ranjan

Originally posted by mojgan

Just wanna tell you how happy and relieved I am while reading this:
I could never allow him to come close to me.

My second Comment to you:

Even though it is hard to imagine that disgusting Shyam has touched Our beloved Khushi with his filthy hands ...


Mojgan cherie!

Would you believe me that when I had read this 'second' comment of yours...I had smirked in ASR's style and thought in my mind...lets see Mojgan's expressions when Khushi reveals the truth...!

LOLLOL




Of course I do :-) and I love to see your smile " a la ASR" ( ASR style)...

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Posted: 24 May 2015 at 12:56am | IP Logged
SHALU...ME WIAITN...
WIAITN..Day Dreaming

FOR A TEASER...Tongue
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Posted: 24 May 2015 at 1:11am | IP Logged
Sorry for the really really really late comment
Been super busy with pharmacy school
Since school is over I am catching up on pm's
Finally read all the updates in one go amino am hooked...cannot wait to read more
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Posted: 24 May 2015 at 2:10am | IP Logged
thanks for the PM superb update
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Posted: 24 May 2015 at 2:15am | IP Logged
Awesome update!!!!
Loved it...
Thanks for d pm...
P.s really very sry for d late comment...that was because my exams r going on...

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