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#3: The Alternate Universe-Retelling IPKKND (Thread 4 link on Pg 1) (Page 41)

Sadh123 Goldie
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Posted: 21 May 2015 at 1:38am | IP Logged
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Mindblowing sissy... I mean twists and turns are your speciality kya?! But am not complaining, am I? It is so exciting, like a roller coaster ride, where u have no idea what is next!!! So coming back, both of them are not clear with the facts..? Especially arnav!! And lavanya deserves worst sissy..come on u have soft corner for her kya?! Poor.khushi... But why does Shyam want nikhil custody? Valid point. Well made by payal.. does he know nikhil is arnav's son?! At least then it is valid if he asks for his custody..But I leave all that brain triggering job to u.. Oh and bechari payal couldn't share her happiness.. hope she gets it soon.. and so only arnav and khushi left behind? I guess they will make it in the last minute at least.. sarla?! Who is she? Someone shyam is related to?! Am not doing too many thesis as I don't want all of them going down the drain.. so I leave that to u sissy..and am tooo eager to know what happens next..so pls update sooon!! And sorry for the very big comment!


Edited by Sadh123 - 21 May 2015 at 2:04am

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Posted: 21 May 2015 at 1:53am | IP Logged
wow phewww... i think all the blind fold is over plz make him no wat she had gone through and plz make sure he give all the happiness in tis world 2 her... and s if shyam no's tat nikhil is not his son ten y he need him is because he no tat nikhil is arnav's son and by using nikhil he can get his property r sm... and s i think because of that 1 night hw many life has been damaged yaar...kushi payal tere family reputation and even tat small boy nikhil if in future if he comes 2 no wat al his mother went through r whose son he really is will he able 2 survive with tis...

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Posted: 21 May 2015 at 1:54am | IP Logged
Nice update... Arnav had figured out everything now... Waiting to know what will he do next... Very well written

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Posted: 21 May 2015 at 1:55am | IP Logged
awesome...but little restless when asr going to know that he got son which that shyam wants to claim

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Posted: 21 May 2015 at 1:59am | IP Logged
A big wala thank u yr for updating earlier
I was eagerly wtng for an update



Yr the way u portrays everything I can envision everything
It simply perfect

Everything going with perfection


I liked the part where khushi sharing her insecurities with payal well written scene
Lavanya was the one who released that video not arnaav
Arnaav saw the CCTV footage now he knows what hppnd that night


Another roadblock on payal marriage
Wtng for the answer to the proposal


Now I want arshi meet cnt wait to see what will be their reactions


Wtng for next
Update soon


Love u
Keep smiling

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Posted: 21 May 2015 at 2:03am | IP Logged
superb update
this was too much
payal hope she doesn't let this
come b/w her happiness

arnav couldn't have gussed
that khsuhi would be pregnant
and what he meant
lavanya manipulated him
into this relationship
what the hell happened

khushi was able to pacify nikhil
he really needsboth mom n dad
wish in the time nikhil gets back from his trip
things come out in open in front of arshi

n who is the women
sarla??
is it because of shyam

can't wait to read more
update soon
thansk for the PM

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Posted: 21 May 2015 at 2:10am | IP Logged
Great update... 
Guess That shyam has something to do with that lady's situation... 
Continue soon.. 

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Posted: 21 May 2015 at 2:16am | IP Logged
Nice update.
I have a feeling that Arshi is going to meet in the school outing.
I think Shyam tried killing Sarala, and made it look like a suicide.

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