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#3: The Alternate Universe-Retelling IPKKND (Thread 4 link on Pg 1) (Page 40)

barsha_dash IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 21 May 2015 at 1:06am | IP Logged
Mind blowing update.And thanks for updating this earlier.Smile
The way you have written the update is amazing. I have already mentioned in my previous comments but still I feel like mentioning it again that the way you are writing this story is like a typical  Indian soap episode and not just a story. I can visualize everything clearly.
One side Khushi was sharing that night's incident while on the other side Arnav was watching the CCTV footage with Lavanya making everything clear. Well I am glad that it was Lavanya who had released the video and not Arnav.
A roadblock to Payash's  marriage is good.  We will get another twist.LOL
For the last part, I am totally confused. Confused I think she is connected with Shyam.Ermm
Now I am eagerly waiting for ArShi to meet since Arnav now knows what had happened that day.
Hope they meet at school outing.
Cheers,
 ArunimaBig smile




Edited by barsha_dash - 21 May 2015 at 1:17am

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Posted: 21 May 2015 at 1:07am | IP Logged
So atnav is nikhil father yay...
Wondering who is this lady...
Continue soon...

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mojgan Senior Member
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Posted: 21 May 2015 at 1:09am | IP Logged
Just wanna tell you how happy and relieved I am while reading this: 
I could never allow him to come close to me. 

My second Comment to you: 

Even though it is hard to imagine that disgusting Shyam has touched Our beloved Khushi with his filthy hands ...

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Posted: 21 May 2015 at 1:19am | IP Logged
awesome update...simply brilliant...Clap
AdyaXoxo Goldie
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Posted: 21 May 2015 at 1:22am | IP Logged
you know its the first time i have not RESed,
wohoo .. thenx <3 for updating b4 the weekend ..
and u know ...
i loved the way you have written this chapter ..
u know i can imagine it happening in front of me , its like a TV show ..
its not just one persons perspective and that we r able to see the thing frm the others point of view is so beautiful ,
i have more to write ..
will complete b4 2


Edited by AdyaXoxo - 21 May 2015 at 1:42am

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Posted: 21 May 2015 at 1:26am | IP Logged
Super awesome update
Loved it
Well written
Thanks for the pm
mojgan Senior Member
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Posted: 21 May 2015 at 1:28am | IP Logged
You rock! 
Mind blowing! 

You deserve a very long comment cherie! 

I loved it! 

I am more than eager to know the next step of ASR. 

LOVE you!  

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dianapadhi92 Senior Member
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Posted: 21 May 2015 at 1:29am | IP Logged
WOW WONDERFULLY WRITTEN.
CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART.
UPDATE SOON

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