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#3: The Alternate Universe-Retelling IPKKND (Thread 4 link on Pg 1) (Page 20)

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Posted: 13 May 2015 at 10:37am | IP Logged
Thaliya thaliya Clap Clap
You sketched the story line very intelligently from the very start with lots lot of mysteries...but now think abt it...awesome,awesome and awesome

Arnav dreamed once again..this tym more clearly...

La Angry the bi***.. Choot bole shyamwa kaatte..

La made it appear that she & Arnav spend a wild nyt together..
So Arnie darling entered into a relationship with her..but 5 yrs.. Ouch guy with committed issue stick with her...bapre.. LOL...
May be I am wrong...ur Arnav didn't have commitment issues at all?? Clear my doubt di..pretty pls Embarrassed

Kab???when Arnav got to know abt Nikhil being Khushi's son...

CCTV footage..hmm now he knew abt the exact date...just need to confirm his dream is real..

So its gud bye tum to La Angry ...soon...

My imagination and brainwa is running very fast these days aftr this update..

Hoping my this brainwa run with double speed for my upcoming electronics mini project.. LOL


cont soon..

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Posted: 13 May 2015 at 10:50am | IP Logged
Perfectly qualifies as a maha update!!
So everything is clear for arnav now.. But he still doesn't know nikhil is khushi's son! I'm sure that will be another dhamekadar revelation;-) The story is on peak now except for two nuisances!! Shyam and lavanya:-( chuck them out writerji.. Please!!
Already our star crossed lovers are in a fix!! These two are further distraction.. I started imagining arnav, khushi nd nikhil as a family with background music from kjo's movie.. In my lala land that is!! Make that happen writerji..:! 

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Posted: 13 May 2015 at 10:51am | IP Logged
Hawa ke tezz ne jhonkon ne akhir Arnav ko booli hui yaadein wapas se yaad dila dein aor us ne Khushi ko pehchaan liya. warq ba'warq jesy ek kitaab ke warq agey kiye jate hain aor agey ki kahani maloom hoti hai waisy hi yeh kahani ab raftaar pakar rahe hai aor parhne mein maza a raha hai...bohut hi dilchasp update...Khushi ko akhir toh face krna parega..mujhe hairat hai woh kyun bhaag rahe hai...sachai ek na ek din samne zarur a jati hai...Behtreen update.

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Posted: 13 May 2015 at 10:53am | IP Logged
Interesting
Waiting for next part

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Posted: 13 May 2015 at 11:01am | IP Logged
i was abt to sleep nd waz jus goin thru mail ...to see dat u hav updtd...

omg...muaah..!!!! luv u..dear...for givin a dasu updt...
baaki comment kal.kRti hu...
abhi..am sleepy Tongue
Gn...
kal pakka...

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Posted: 13 May 2015 at 11:11am | IP Logged
so finally he remembered her
so he was her 1st    n i hope nikhil is his son...
w8ng 2 asr know abt khushi n nikhil...
continue soon
loved d update

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Posted: 13 May 2015 at 11:18am | IP Logged
Finally he remember!

Beautifully penned down.Despite the long length of the chapter, i felt it short because i wanted to read more*pouts*LOL

awesome writing!!!

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Posted: 13 May 2015 at 11:19am | IP Logged
WOW!! fantastic update dear...loved it

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