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#3: The Alternate Universe-Retelling IPKKND (Thread 4 link on Pg 1) (Page 112)

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Posted: 11 June 2015 at 9:50pm | IP Logged
Hmm I m not sure what I m feeling Curious what will happen next takes toll on may be 4500 words were not enough for me.. I know I m demanding that's the beauty of this story that I want to ASAP even there is no cliffhanger this time..

And yes are you suggesting payal n akash already got married..? That scene is intriguing .. Hoping this time update will be sooner than regular

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Posted: 11 June 2015 at 11:33pm | IP Logged
I didn't think it will unfold like that but as U said, expect the unexpected...
for future I don't really guess what will happen as I m clueless..
 
But waiting to read this one week trip details... Continue soon

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 2:12am | IP Logged
Loved it
So will ASR's sharp brain decode the truth
Or will khushi in her anger blurt the truth

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 2:27am | IP Logged
Fabulous Update...
4500 WORDS...OMG...I fainted there n there..
But I loved it...
Awww...I am sooo cute...(I mean Appu is soo  cute..)
Heheheehe I loved the way u used Arush's name...
Cinderlla coat lol...That was hilarious...
Bt I am sad...!!!! Maine bhi toh sahi guess kiya  ?
Anyways loved it...
Cant wait to read what happens ahead...
Thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 5:20am | IP Logged
Looks like Arnav will soon find out that he is the father of Nikhil. I loved the bonding between Arnav and Nikhil. It's natural for the kids to get inspired by someone, especially by their fathers. He is idealizing his Arnav uncle because he likes him and his personality inspired him. Arnav also like Nikhil! But why fear gripping Khushi's heart seeing him getting close to Arnav. The truth will come out one day. Her secret is almost on the verge of coming out. Payal and Akash part was nicely done. Last scene you've written it so brilliantly. I just love it. Angry Raizda looks so sexy! Super excited to read the next part. This chapter was fabulous. Thanks!

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 9:36am | IP Logged
I didn't guess right...but still loved the way the story unfolded...will comment more soon...

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 11:06am | IP Logged
I knew for sure this is not the update where Arnav would be able to know about his son. I'm just hoping Khushi to somehow gets rid of Shyam. What I don't understand is why does Shyam even wants Nikhil's custody he know for sure that Nikhil is not his biological son. He can prove that in the court and get divorce saying that Khushi lied to him and they got married he didn't know that he was not Nikhil's father. 

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 8:21pm | IP Logged
Awww!!! Shallini ...Amazing update Clap 

Nikhil's sleeping style is cute..and Arnav I mean this Choteji's style of waking him up is cuter than ever.Kushi was expecting choteji as someone else and this choteji was So handsome ji  Embarrassed.. Blushing time...Khushi has no idea what is she up to againstLOL
 Kushi couldn't hadle over her tiny heart  that Arnav is Nikhil's uncle and the boy is literally making him his Role Model and she fainted immediately ,but i loved the way he sent juice  for Her .. Awww  so sweet... 


 Arnav is also in a way shocked and is in deep pain after knowing the truth about Nikhil and Khushi.. he is and will be keep trying to know about Shyam from Nikhil but Nikhil couldn't give the required information. . How could he? He is just a child and hurt one too...Kids won't let you show this , they usually create a wall over...I am sure Arnav will have his men to start  nvestigation now...
    

   Payal had told everything to Akash  but why does it seem they have something going on???... But if Payal tells the truth to him, I bet Akash will put 2 + 2 together that Nikhil is Their family blood and might Help Arnav too .. But she has not told him the whole truth...
     Arshi Embarrassedare going to stay there for a week and I bet I mean guess there will be lot of fireworks from no where after all Arshi hon ek jagha aur dhamake na hon...LOL

   I loved the way Arnav told  Her that he is the main Guard over these things and kids and she should listen to him... uhhh...Khushi left no choice but she is Khushi...unpredictableWink

    I want to see Arshi 's O mouth reaction after the revelation of Payesh wedding Shocked

Thnx for this longish update which I can read over the weekend.Smile

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